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I felt like he was feeling the loss of someone that was never his. Very deep and sad, but beautiful. Reading some poetry today. U R soright. There's lots of great poetry here.
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Prompt 140 - A Date With Perez
joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Prompt 140 - A Date With Perez
Times like this is when you would like to have been a fly on the wall. lmao. Very cute ficlet to start the day! -
Made For Him - The Story of Ten E
joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Made For Him - The Story of Ten E
NOw I knoooooooow, I am definitely going to have to read even more of your stuff now. I love Ten-E, and TJ, but I would be really hard pressed to say which one was the savior here. They were both rescued in a different way! Great story -
If a Tree Falls in the Forest
joann414 commented on Sara Alva's story chapter in If a Tree Falls in the Forest
Such a sweet, and light-hearted read. I loved it. -
Not only are you a good writer, but a great storyteller as well. Caleb fighting his demons, being honest with Noah so he could shed this darkness in his life, only to have it taken away in a split second. Wow!
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What a horrific future that we could very well enter into. Don't generally venture off into theis genre when I am reading, but definitely need to broaden out if this great piece is a sample. The thought of facing anything this frightening is unthinkable. i wouldn't sleep at night if I did. Great writing, and I really like the story.
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Prompt 143 - Vacation Interupted
joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Prompt 143 - Vacation Interupted
Well, that was a very entertaining way to start a Monday. I just decided to click and check out your story, and there was Rob and Alice, and I love them. BTW, hopefully "handsome's" life is fixing to change for the better on this trip to Canada. Well done! -
Very powerful, and compelling read. Bullying angers me to no end, and abuse makes me physically ill, but both topics are not addressed nearly enough. Wish more would have the courage to face and identify those who hurt them in these ways, so the offenders would get punishment they deserved. Great story!
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I felt like I was watching a scary movie, wanting to close my eyes, but just couldn't because I had to see what happened next. Great story, and great job keeping the reader's interest.
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You addressed coming out in a very entertaining way, the humor was there, but very well placed. Really enjoyed this Yetti. Great job!
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You Sure You Want to Do This?
joann414 commented on MJ85's story chapter in You Sure You Want to Do This?
Even tho the plot was very serious subject matter, the story itself was almost light, it flowed slow easily, as I read it. Really enjoyed it, and I love happy endings of love and acceptance! -
Sometimes friendship, love, and pain go hand in hand as sad as it makes life, but I am so glad he admitted to Carmel, and to himself who he really is. Great writing, and loved the story!
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Defined friendship perfectly. NOthing is guaranteed, people change, life changes people. Well done!
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Totally wrapped in this story. Such a pleasant surprise when I started reading it today, but the second chapter has got me on the edge of my seat. Wondering what character will join the scheme of things next. Really like this story.
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Wow, I had a feeling this may be a sad one, but it was heartbreaking. Just glad they actually had their last conversation. Great story telling, and you hit the emotions right on. Thanx
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Love can be so much more confusing when you are young, but it is also one of those things when you find it, you know it. Friendship turning into love between two best friends is on of my favorite plots.
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This is a beautiful story, and you tackled the suject matter in such a heartfelt way, and it drew me in more and more. Not only was Ross happy as a person, found his missing piece, but also accomplished his dreams of being a doctor. Love this
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I am sure having someone special with you when something like this happens, I am sure would make you fight for life, feeling your loved ones arms around you. Pretty deep stuff, but I really like it.
