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Astroglide has always served me well for my various needs. I do agree with Jordan, foreskin is free

Mark, Once again, another excellent chapter! I really like the dynamic between JJ and Will. Will totally has JJ's back and vice versa until the very end, even if they do grate on each other's nerves sometimes (but hey, siblings do that, it's written in the rules). Now that we have seen Wade in action with Mary Ellen and Elizabeth having been mentioned, I cannot help but feel like maybe, just maybe, Elizabeth and Mary Ellen had their parts of the ultimate plan to play, but that they may not be the true masterminds. I mean lets be fair, how many times has Elizabeth Danfield been involved in some scheme? Loads of times. But, having said that, she's been relatively "quiet," per se, since her husband died (Hammer being the exception), so I'm not so sure I'd understand why, now, all of the sudden she's decided to come outside and play. I don't know, I'm just not fully convinced that she and Mary Ellen are the full masterminds. It's almost... expected (but that's just my author brain talking). So that being said, I"m REALLY looking forward to what we have in store for our favorite Bay Area residents. I know that whatever happens, it will be amazing and leave us, the readers, speechless beyond comprehension. Great chapter yet again! Go Mark!

Chapter 5 is posted!

Thanks Drew! I'm glad you liked it!

Mark, excellent chapter as always! I love that Ryan learned the casual way that he was Jeff's half-brother. I am glad that he is ok. I think I share a previous reviewer's feeling that JJ's actions are going to wind up costing him more than he realizes at this point. My thought is that Mary Ellen may not actually be behind this issue, but then again, she is Elizabeth's daughter... Looking forward to Zach's explanation for his actions to Will. I really hope they work out Once again, excellent as always! ~LS

Sorry! I've not been diligent in keeping this updated! Chapter 3 has been posted for a little while now. Chapter 4 has been posted since yesterday! Please feel free to check them both out!

Great chapter Mark, as usual. I do find it sort of ironic (or perhaps just a mere coincidence) that at the same time Will is about to go to the Chicago bar to potentially lay people off that Carullo has also lost his job. My imagination is highly active, so it may just be that . I am interested to see what more could potentially happen between JJ and John. I feel like they will definitely become friends, but hey, it isn't GA without a little physical action, even if JJ and Carullo are totally different types all together. The view of Will being plowed by Carullo should piqued JJ's interest in him enough for JJ to "take the plunge" as it were. My curiosity is certainly hightened. Excellent Chapter as always Mark!

I've just found your story and I completely transfixed in it now. Love it! I am so looking forward to what is in store for Michael and Kendall! Great start to a story!

Once again, to echo Headstall, thank you so much for starting this post. One thing that I've noticed, at least for me, is that I need to be motivated to write about something. My current story and a short story I have on here were strongly motivated by real life experiences that affected me deeply. For me, I think, as long as I can remember exactly why I started writing a story in the first place (i.e. what personal experience did I go through that affect me so deeply), I am able to continue writing the story without too much issue. As for keeping the quality of my writing consistent, I rely on a second pair of eyes (sometimes more) who can really pay close attention to detail of my writing to tell me if I'm meeting my own personal expectation of my writing (as well as to keep me from being overly critical of myself!). I definitely agree with the idea of taking a break from one story to write something else as a way to shift gears from your main project. I find that focusing too much on one thing over an extended period of time causes me to get lazy or rushed with my writing. So yes, I definitely have been where you are, Warrior, so many times, with my writing (both stories and music as well). So I'd definitely see if Adam's advice can help you out. It never hurts to try! Best of luck to you, Warrior!

Chapter 2 is now posted!

Hey everyone, I have began a new story entitled After Life. I am immensely proud of it and feel that it is my best work, yet. Please feel free to check it out! [sharedmedia=stories:stories:4888]

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading

yes... the classical chase the one you love through a crowd or crowds - never gets old.

It was wet, windy, and cold. The rain fell from the sky in buckets as Liam stood on the open platform, the warm tears falling down the sides of his face from his eyes. He'd left a simple note in Greg's room as he left this morning. I've left and gone into the city. I cannot be here while you hate me. I'm sorry. I may go back to America anyways. Please forgive me. L. Liam continuously went over the events of the previous night. The more and more he thought of it, the more he hated himself. H

Liam is running through the London crowd from the man who hates him, but also the man he loves.