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So sympathise with Andrew, and his panic attacks. I have them, and they can scare the hell out of you. They are much better now than when I was an older teen and all. He seems to have a lot going on inside as many teens do, and switching schools in your senior year has to be a trial in itself. I love your character Elizabeth. Hopefully, he and Brian will resolve their issues when they meet again. Interesting chapter
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I agree with Bugeye. Your character is very unique, and love the subtle humor.( making a face at the flight attendant) ( man needing two seats), and others. On to the next chapter. BTW, after reading your other two stories, and then this chapter of this one, it seems you are a very diverse writer. There is humor after the darkness.
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Well, karma sux. Being forced to re-live your mistakes especially ones that hurt someone other than yourself is even worse. Very deep, Great writing!
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Beautiful chapter, and thank goodness for the infinite wisdom of the older generation. So glad he went and talked to Coop. I knew both of the guys had to be miserable. Great writing
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Chapter 16...Epilogue/Conclusion
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16...Epilogue/Conclusion
I loved this story so much. Lisa and Danny got me all teary eyed when Lisa introduced Danny to Jake. Will definitely read more of you work. thank you for your time and talent. -
You made me cry like a baby. Some may think this is too much of a fairytale, but real life comes in all shapes, and forms. We never know how we will meet the ones we will live our lives, and experience our future with. Great job.
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Beginning a story from childhood always lures me in more because of watching the characters grow together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Absolutely beautiful read. I loved how you wove Tim's book into the story. The characters all had their own definition, expecially Christian, and Maxim, and Tim. You portrayed their personna perfectly. I enjoyed this so much, and I have to say that I shed a few tears for Christian's grief and need for love. Wonderful job.
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Absolutely, positively wonderful story. I don't think the ending was hurried at all, but each to his own. BTW, I would love to see a continuation of these two guys. They were a joy to read. thank u so much!
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Bless the beast( the monster that has been haunting Andy) and the Children(Aney and Matt) , reconnectings. Most of all, I want to hug Angie so damn much for giving Andy the space he needs. this is such an awesome read, and I feel guilty for not commenting on every chapter. Great job, and absolutly great story guy!
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Bless the beast( the monster that has been haunting Andy) and the Children(Aney and Matt) , reconnectings. Most of all, I want to hug Angie so damn much for giving Andy the space he needs. this is such an awesome read, and I feel guilty for not commenting on every chapter. Great job, and absolutly great story guy!
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I am like drowning in this story. Youthful heartbreak, first love, it's wonderful. Having a hard time leaving my laptop tonite because of this story, but that is not a bad thing
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I am pretty new to the community, and havent started many WIP stories, but this one for some reason got my attention, and after reading the prologue, I was right. I am totally hooked, and so glad I have many chapters to read before I catch up with your story.
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What a perfect feel good story. thank u
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I loved the characters in this story, and will definitely be looking for more of their life in your other stories. You explored their emotions perfectly Thank you.
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A Story to Touch the Heart
joann414 commented on Nephylim's story chapter in A Story to Touch the Heart
This warmed my heart to no end. NOt only a lifetime of special friendship, and falling in love with someone with special needs makes both partners special. This was very beautiful, and very well written in a way that pushed itself further and further into the reader's heart. Loved it, and thank u -
Step by step, beautiful story. A novice becoming a lover is always a great love story, and u captured it perfectly!
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I thought this was a great first story, and you captured emotions wonderfully. Thanx for a sweet read.
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Chapter 8 Acceptance...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 8 Acceptance...
Absolutely beautiful story, and the closeness of the three friends made it even better. Thanks for a great read. -
This was a short series, but I have to tell you. I wanted to kick myself for going ahead an reading the whole thing, because I knew it was going to be sad. But you know what? You are a beautiful writer,, and not all stories have happy endings, but still pull at a reader's soul. And yes, I cried, and got angry, but life is not perfect, even in love. Thank you
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Kudos! This was so honest , heartbreaking, funny, and humanly realistic. People are so mean, cruel, and un-concerned in today's world. It is so hard to watch sometimes, but u touched on a lot of these issues, and I loved it. Your portrayal of your characters was so realistic, and believable. Made me laugh, cry, and last but not least, relieved that Tyler found peace and love among friends and his partner. thank u for a wonderful read.
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Absolutely awesome read. Can't believe u do not have more reviews. The characters and conflicts were right on. I laughed cried, and applauded the characters. I loved Sean and West, but Storm was so great. Thank for a perfect read.
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This is definitely a story to be read more than once, Ben reminded me of myself so much at times here. HIs insecurities and nervousness endeared him to me so much, and to have someone like Rick who just took over and loved him unconditionally made this such a beautiful, funny, sad, and believable tale of love. Thank you so much for a wonderful read, and I will definitely be reading more of your writing.
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I enjoyed this so much, and have not laughed so damn much at a story in a long time. Can't wait to read more. Thank u
