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  1. Lifesavergreen

    Chapter 1

    Could I give you some constructive criticism? The story is set in Texas but the characters all use words that Americans would never use. Sweets instead of candy. Cinema instead of movies. Lolly instead of lollipop. And I am pretty sure no public school would ever allow paddling instead of detention. I enjoyed the story but all I could think about was that they were not in Texas.
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