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That was my fear. I intended to word it a certain way, keep his weapon a secret for a bit . I don't want anyone to think that he's bringing a gun, knife, whatever. Did I fail at the cliffhanger? Is that what your saying? :\ However, I will not tell what Sarah's plans are, possibly it's to stay away from them, and maybe not. Glad you enjoyed it. I hope people see all the events and his conclusion of those; I feel that's important, especially his realizations.

Chapter #10 is now posted.

The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #10: This Cold heart Time line: Monday Jacob continued to toss and turn throughout the entire night; he was unable to stop his mind from thinking about the words that were so eloquently written across that simple little piece of paper. It deeply bothered him that his mother could somehow believe that he and Matthew were defective or even broken. It was like being stabbed in the heart, repeatedly, with a sharpened knife; it hurt him immensely, and

I'll have to check this one out

Possibly

Sorry I was off-base on my first comment. In regards to the blog, I believe Cia's post is one that is excellent, well thought out, and is meant to be a guide. I mean, who doesn't like guides? When you're fortunate to get a good beta/editor the first time around your lucky. I'm lucky like that.. I love my peeps.. Even with those red markers. HA!

So what are you saying Andy? Are you half-assing it on me? Letting dumb mistakes slide? I'm hurt.. /me runs away in tears....

Ricky is a new reader of mine. So I figure this a little ironic that Andy reviewed him too.. Cool guy too...

Sounds like some good reads...

Wootness, Andy' my main squeeze

Wocka Wocka Wocka! Oh the memories!

mmmm Baileys

This post is totally messed up. What did you do Trebs? Edit post

I'm a subtle type of person, one really needs to pay attention to pick up hints, foreshadowing, etc. So that's key, I like to think myself as someone who writes to make people think.

I love the shower scene too.

Matthew is a little warrior, I know he is haha.

So much does happen in this chapter. So much information to process.

Keep on keep on.

Sure, pine, Oak, whichever. I love the mooning scene, it's great, and shows the playful nature of Matthew. Love story indeed. Pain, trauma too!

I apologize for that. As this was my first story EVER it started this way. My other story, which is on Nifty, but not here, YET, is better to your desire. In time that too will arrive here . Thanks for reading.

I liked last weeks a lot. I wanted to do it. Alas, not enough time. Maybe later

How insightful

Cold-hearted Bitch. I love that. And thankfully the next chapter is titled "This cold heart" and rightfully so. Most mom's are cool. No doubt. Minus Sarah of course. But I suppose the real question is, is she redeemable? Is there any chance she will find her heart, just as did the Grinch. Time will tell

Hello Andy, They do have Michelle and Bill, but more support is about to arrive.. Mom's the word. (NO NOT SARAH). I love Sarah's character, shes a real piece of work. But there's another person you should hate too..... I wonder who...

Reviews, likes, comments, are the only thing that keeps me posting, like many others. I could easily just as say I'd rather spend more time with my family, then to write. It's sad to say, but when reviews don't happen, likes don't happen; I tend to shut down and think my work must’ve been crap. Then you get these regulars, AMAZING PEOPLE, that show up and save the day. Those close tightknit folks keep us focused, motivated, and continue to drive us forward. For some, our story is just that, while others it's their everything; may it be a message within their story, or otherwise. It's something very special to receive feedback. It's the highlight of my day, knowing that people read, and thoroughly enjoyed the story. So, for that, I personally thank all my close friends, readers, especially the ones that leave reviews, and likes. Love you gal/guy's. All my regulars know who they are… Specifically the ones that I know are reading… . ~CHEERS~ Nor can I forget Andy and Lisa, my beta and editor. They’re amazing people.