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If a Tree Falls in the Forest
NotNoNever commented on Sara Alva's story chapter in If a Tree Falls in the Forest
Sweet and cute, to quote somebody(s)! lol. Well it was. It kinda made me happy in a mushy sorta way. But I was rooting for Genji Anyway, Brennan turned out to be a right romantic. Shoelaces tied together! Whoda thunk a teenage boy would do that after a kiss and a cuddle! It's nice to get a dose of pink fluffy clouds every now and then! -
I pretty well enjoyed this. But you're clever enough to have left the ending open. And sequel there must be. Because this end is neither fair ... nor seemingly logical!
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Made For Him - The Story of Ten E
NotNoNever commented on comicfan's story chapter in Made For Him - The Story of Ten E
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It's not a new story, but it's not often told this well. Although there are some little errors in a couple of places, it's still a very human, sympathetic, and honourable story, well told.
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Oh dear. By the way, neo natal is after the point of birth. First 28 days to be specific. So neo-natal genetic testing on, and abortion of, foetuses is impossible. Saying anything more than this would be dangerous, because as your story points out, dissent from the norm is never welcomed. Dark and scary.
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Cute
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Well executed alternative take on one of the old problems. I see you're a proof reader. Or not! But I imagine English English is not your first language, so some things might slip through. I was quite fascinated at the fact that a guy who would have a hissy fit rant like this, would be so entangled with an apparently straight acting guy who hadn't noticed the hissy trait beforehand. Entertaining and provocative, though.
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One of few authors here who understand the valency of a word and use it to good effect. Plank and dowel. I want that room.
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You're a very lucid writer. I really enjoyed this.
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Which Way Do You Want To Die
NotNoNever commented on W_L's story chapter in Which Way Do You Want To Die
Easily up to your usual standard of thinking, which is generally excellent. Alas, nowhere near anybody's standard of writing. It needs edited, sir. -
Odd to think he's the father of artificial intelligence, since it's not yet been invented. But then, that's what happens to the good guys. They get misrepresented and abused, just like Zombie showed.
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Lordy! I read this ages ago, and decided to read it again. Can't say much has changed. It's still brilliant. One of the more minor things I like is the meltdown at that two clowns, telling them to grow up! Hell, such advice should be tattooed on some people's heads. Can't decide who I want to take home more, though. Ben or Rick? Hmmm. Compromise .. the cats Can't wait for your next offering. That'll be out of this world too, I expect!
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Age is about time. That's what age is. Time is only a periodic measure of shared (and obviously overlapped) distance in continuous experience. Age implies, but does not guarantee, experience as you allude. However, there is no need to replace the concept of (variable levels of) experience with an appropriated concept which is doing its own job well enough where ut is. What I'd like to know about age and time is where the scientists get the absurd notion that you can theoretically travel back in it. Weird!
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...Some Things Are Decided For You
NotNoNever commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...Some Things Are Decided For You
Hahahahaha! Th funny thing is, just when I thought it couldn't get more ridiculous, it got more ridiculous. Sorry, but this is just turning into an exercise in reader thumping. -
...I Always Felt Like I Knew What I Was Doing.
NotNoNever commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Always Felt Like I Knew What I Was Doing.
Jeezus god almighty. Talk about getting back in the water! If this doesn't end with Cooper and Kyle together, I'm gonna hunt you down ... -
Pft, there was a whole loada semen spilled in this story. But I reckon that's nothing by comparison to the seed spilled because of it! I so wanted to kick Coop's butt, and I still want him back with Kyle. But it was a great read, albeit that it was tiresome for the incessant list building, though that was clearly the point. By the way, I don't know if it's just me being bent or what, but when you put a name like Kyle in close proximity to Riley, it's nearly impossible to not read it as Riley and Kylie. I read this because the next one (as reviewed by somebody) said it had spoilers for The List. So, that out of the way, I'd best do what Cooper is, now, and get on with the rest of his life. Good work.
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As ever, well worth the time.
