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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    Snake venom has so many uses...lol Cute Ellis, I want to meet Yuri already. Benny is really trying his best here. I find it funny that the other important thing in his life, other than Yuri, is his car. I think that's priceless. So, write faster, I can't wait to read the next one, I'm sure you have plots and plots to keep me at the edge of my seat. I can't wait to read it all. Great chapter.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Benny shot of a cheap shot at the end there, I just loved Doctor Pannar's reaction. Imagining Benny in my head, and seeing Dr. Pannar chastising him, I wasn't sure whether to laugh or worry for the doctor in case Benny decides to retaliate. Lol.
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    Chapter 6

    Velaku is admirable, leadership comes so easy for him. The clans he heads and the problems he's facing remind me a lot of cultural practices, and how some of the elders I know cling to ideals that don't work in this century. While their children adopt new thoughts and ways, the fight against the old ways is always so hard. Velaku's way of dealing with it, makes so much sense. Dear Benny needs to reel in his temper more, I think he's beyond the edge and is probably stepping on the air. I hope Ellis can help him soon.
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    Chapter 5

    I love Benny!! I know he's missing Yuri, and all, but to visit him every time he has a day off, just to see him even though they don't talk and Yuri can't see him....oh, the romance...(dramatic sigh)...lol. I love it. I pity this tiger who dares threaten Benny's mate, he's dead for sure...lol.
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    Chapter 4

    Benny surely has a lot of anger and frustration bottled up inside him. It rolls off him every second, I love how you write this side of him. He's simply doing his best to survive and I can't help but sympathize, I like Ellis's little joke, in the therapy session. As someone has said before, once Ellis puts his mind to it, he doesn't stop. Benny has a good friend in Ellis. Great chapter.
  6. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    This chapter made me miss Inside of You. Dav and Ellis are still my favorite in these series. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. I remember the struggle Dav had to let Ellis be part of the fight, it's great to see the other side of the story. Great chapter.
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    Dan is crazy in love, lol. He's in it to the end, now if Jae can just see that...hmmmm. I'm glad you found the chapter, happy to see your thoughts on this story always.
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    I've come late to the party, so happy to see a new Carthera story, can't wait to see what you have in store for Benny. He's having a rough time as it is, I can't wait to read more of his adventures. Awesome chapter.
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 11

    I might take your advice, lol, can just imagine the expressions I'd get in my house. Lol. Thanks again for the awesome edit as always.
  10. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    Hi Sacred, thanks I had a lot of help with that scene, I'm glad you liked it. Hehe. Jaesun is my fun Villain, he's so going to poke his face around before I'm done. lol. As always thanks for always reading. I'm looking forward to your next chapter too. So I hope you're writing. Cheers.
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    Chapter 10

    Thanks Lisa, I didn't reply to this review earlier, wow. JP is really something right. Thanks for always commenting.
  12. Just Another Boy “A new manager?” Junghee asked, staring at Dan with a skeptical glance. “Are you sure about this, Dan?” “I don't think it's a good idea,” Andre said shaking his head. “Hyung,” Andre looked at Jae. “What do you think?” Jae brought the coffee pot and refilled Dan's cup and his. Junghee declined coffee and Andre was drinking green tea. “I don't know what to say.” “You must have an opinion,” Junghee persisted looking at Jae. “Leaning on the counter and removing yourself from the
  13. I'm so honored to be nominated!!! Just being on the list of nominations made my day, today, it was a really awesome surprise. I thank all the readers who've nominated my story, you're all so wonderful and amazing. Thank you! To all my fellow nominees, I wish you good luck too. Thank you again.
  14. you are special, Jo Ann.
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    The Escape

    Sacred, I'm at a loss for words here, I haven't had a chance to catch up with this story, and now that I have, and on a Valentine's Day, I get the shock of my life. My dear Zune, because I can't call him any other name, the stuff he's gone through in that hell hole, unimaginable. I'm happy for Nine, but I'm waiting for salvation for Zune. I don't even know how he's going to get past all that has happened. Edward should help him through it, I'm imagining it's going to be slow going. Edward, he was like the best surprise at the end. So happy he found Zune. Daryl deserves the worst that can happen to him, really! Update soon, keep on writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Edward and Zune back together!!
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    Chapter 26

    And so they did, I'm happy you loved this story just as much. It was a journey, one full of loads of fun, I learned a lot writing it, so hopefully what I learned through EB&C will end up coming out on my next story. Thanks for your support, Sacred as always.
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    Chapter 25

    Lol, dreamy way,I couldn't help laughing at that comment, I kept thinking that way, that moment when something is happening but it doesn't seem like it is, but that's good romance for you right...lol. I'm going to miss your enthusiastic reviews on this story. I looked forward to them.
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    Chapter 26

    Thank you for Reading, Stephen!! Thank you also for sticking through to the end, it means a lot to me.
  19. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you m.p. Keep looking forward to it.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 26

    Tissues, Tissues for you, lol Thank you Lisa!! It was a fun to write for Alexi and Josh, I will miss them both too. I haven't forgotten the other one, I'll send you mail soon.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 26

    Thank you Suvitar, I'm happy you loved it, and thank you for always reading too!! Cheers.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 25

    Lol, love you little tirade about Alexi. He does worry too much,to me, he's always worried that asking Joshua to deal with his overbearing family would be too much. He feels this so much, he's willing to walk away from them to give a life with Joshua a chance. But Joshua is stronger. So it all works out.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 25

    Thank you Suvitar!!
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 26

    Susuki!!! Happy New Year!! Thanks for reading Josexi for life! lol.
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    Chapter 26

    Thank you LadyDe,I'm sorry for the wait, but I'm glad the ending was good for you. Cheers!!
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