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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Jaesun is a bit of a jerk, he does deserve a large knock on the head. Poor Jae. Thanks for reading Lisa.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Those moments when you know something's bad for you but you still do it anyway coz you can't quit. I think Jaesun is that for Jae. Dan definitely has a battle. Thanks Daithi.
  3. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thank you, I will update this as soon as chapter 4 is finished.
  4. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Ash, thanks for loving this story. I'm sorry its taken so long to reply. I really appreciate it.
  5. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    You're my new bestfriend. I love that you understand this so much, makes writing so much fun. As for Jae, he's got issues with trust now. He and Dan have a very rough road ahead. Thank you so much for your review.
  6. Broken Tiny Pieces of Heart Moving back to Seoul was tough; he missed his carefree rides down the hill in Gong. In order to keep the press away, he’d not returned to his old house. Too worried about reporters and the ensuing frenzy to discover why he’d returned to Seoul, he’d moved in with Junghee. He called his mother every day. She promised that his cabbages were healthy each time they talked. He missed her, missed Gong, but his place was in Seoul. For six weeks, he’d quietly watche
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Jae is very mistrustful, he feels like since he's lost everything, to get it all again, he needs to be more cautious. Lolz, I think the Dan's shaggy situation is just a pet peeve for him. Thanks for the review Daithi.
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Dan has his own story, soon to come , but you're right, he needs a stylist, hehe. Mmm...as for N-sang/Rand situation, usually this happens when both agency have overlapping business deals. As you'll see later in the story, Rand weighs the profit they'll get from associating with N-sang entertainment and the profit they get from the boys. They choose the one that makes more money, more business connections, and such.No matter how much the fans lobby, corporation has more muscles to flex and ends up winning. Such is the reality. Anyway, look forward to chapter four, and thanks for always giving me such awesome reviews, Lisa. Truly.
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Hi Bookjunky! Yeah, I was a TVXQ fan for a while, now I'm all JYJ, lol. Thank you for the endorsement, I'll work to make this story memorable for you. And you're right about the Entertainment agencies, things aren't always what they seem. Not to mention that the big agencies have so much power within the industries, the artists end up working long hours, making lots of money for the agency and getting very little. It's not always like this, there are those who get lucky, but I suppose my characters are one of those that didn't get lucky. Thank you so much for your review.
  10. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Haha, sorry for the many names. As for the ages, I worked on that. What I'd done before was have him thinking of their cages at the current time line, and not the past. Since that wasn't clear, I changed that. He was eighteen when he made his debut with black shade, four years later, the band is successful, he's twenty-two, through the year of the lawsuit upto the moment in the cabbage patch, he's now twenty-three, while his bandmates are twenty-two. Sorry for the confusion. Thanks for pointing it out.
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Good questions, Jaesun chose to side with the villain, that was tough for Jae. Great review, thank you Daithi.
  12. Meeting Suk Dan Jae woke up early the next day. Junghee had called him a car service so by ten o’clock, he was on his way to Seoul. It took two hours to get to the city, and he wanted the time before noon to meet Andre. He slept through the journey and only woke up when they ran into traffic on their way into the city. Yawning, he stretched as best as he could and rubbed his eyes. A strange wave of excitement hit him as the car got on the highway that would take them to Seongbukdong. Andr
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    I'm glad I've hooked yah!! Jae is special, he has gone through so much, still a simple life is really not for him.
  14. Black Shade and Betrayal Junghee’s visit unsettled his balance, forgetting his promise to Sunny, Jae took his bike and rode back home in a hurry. The scenery held no interest for him, instead his head filled with the past. Ghosts and painful memories of betrayal grated against old wounds. He winced as he reached home. Instead of entering the house, he decided to head to the cabbage patch he’d planted the day before. Turning on the water, he took the hose and walked along the rows carefully
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Lisa, for reading and the correction. I changed it. you're awesome.
  16. Jaehan walks away from a successful life with the aim of gaining his freedom from a villainous Entertainment Agency called N-sang. When N-sang stops him from pursuing his dreams independently, Jaehan gives up and returns to his hometown. Until his band mates meet Dan Suk, a man without fear. Dan challenges Jaehan, pushing him to follow his heart despite the many obstacles that N-sang Entertainment throws at him.
  17. Hiding from Pain The sky was full of stars twinkling away in the night. He could watch them for hours. Rolling over on the wooden sundeck behind the house, Jae let a soft sigh escape and closed his eyes. He’d worked the whole day planting cabbage seedlings in a quarter acre patch. The season was right, he was anticipating a glorious grow this spring. Laying here in the dark silence, his only worry was the noisy cricket making noise under the deck. He fell a sleep with a smile on his face,
  18. Daithi, you know I luv's you! I wish your day today is gorgeous, full of sunshine, and loads of great wishes. Happy Birthday to YOU!! :joe: :wizard: :joe:
  19. lilansui

    Chapter 23

    So, you just made my day! And I was having a lousy one, so I'm not writing that lightly. Thank you Sacred for your praise. (For the hating part...lol..I'm working on fixing that) Happiness doesn't come easy ever, always some suffering involved it seems. Alexi and Joshua have to experience all before they can have their happy. It's now my job to make the next chapters make a bigger impact than this one, isn't it? lol. Thank you again.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Sui gives you a short *curtsy* Thank you for reading Sacred. I'm glad you loved Silver Ice.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    I had fun writing that Silver gets drunk moment, great moment that one.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Knox is a player, gotta love him.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    Lol, Sacred. Cooper is definitely not your fav. character. Yes, this was a nice happy chapter. I'm working on the next one.
  24. I missed it Yesterday, but a Birthday can go on for a few days right.. Happy Birthday Ieshwar and Congratulations on your job!! You deserve that and more good things. :wizard: :wizard:
  25. lilansui

    Amazing Birthday!

    Congrats and Happy Birthday to you!!!
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