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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 24

    Hi, Lisa! lol. Yes, I was excited to update this story too. This chapter took forever to write, there were moments I wanted to just summarize the missing each other parts, but then R, my editor, read through the first draft and there were important parts missing, he helped me fully develop this, so it took some time. I'm glad you loved it. Skype is important, have to keep up with daily details from those you love..lol.Thanks for always reading and reviewing, gal.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 24

    Lol, Alexi was a neurotic mess at the start of this story, couldn't even go outside at some point. He's really come along way. As for Beatrice, her little outburst at the end was a small inspiration, Josh's and Sherry's dynamics are complex and I don't think I could truly articulate fully. I'd need a whole new book..lol Thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I love it!!
  3. lilansui

    Chapter 24

    It felt like the right place to end it, with Lily calling back lol. Thanks so much for reading..
  4. lilansui

    Chapter 24

    Yes, very sad and hard for them being such a great distance away from each other. Next chapter for sure, a trip to Osaka, Japan...look forward to it.
  5. Chapter 24 A cold draft swept through Joshua’s veins, angry butterflies rolled in his stomach. This hateful feeling inside him grew the longer he sat in the stiff conference room looking at Sherry. Memories of their divorce filled his brain and for a moment, he felt as though he was back to that time, losing his heart and all that mattered to him again. They sat across each other at a short rectangular table: the mediator taking the head of the table. Their mediator was a nice blond woman i
  6. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    gamsahabnida lol. I'm so glad you loved this chapter, it was extra fun to write. Dan and Jae's relationship has progressed, so I look forward to writing more cute moments for you...Thank you so much for reading and your review, I promise to work harder. lol.
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    Jae and Dan = Loads of mischief lol. Thank you.
  8. lilansui

    Silver Ice

    Thank you Timothy for reading!
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    IHi Sacred, I just saw this review. Yes, Jaesun is someone most people won't like, lol. As always, my villain is unpopular, lol. The next chapter is up, lots of Dan for you, maybe even some kissing.. I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks so much!
  10. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    IHi Sacred, I just saw this review. Yes, Jaesun is someone most people won't like, lol. As always, my villain is unpopular, lol. The next chapter is up, lots of Dan for you, maybe even some kissing.. I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks so much!
  11. Music Like Spring Jae walked into Jade Entertainment awed by the progress Dan had managed in their absence. Their offices were on Gangnamro Avenue in a three-story azure glass building. He paused at the receptionist’s desk; she was busy on the phone. Taking off his dark glasses, he leaned on the counter and looked around the waiting area. Posters of the Jade Entertainment musicians and actors decorated the walls. He noted in disappointment that there weren’t any Rebellion posters. “How ma
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Yes, you're right about Jaesun, he's the kind of guy to make a decision in the heat of the moment to satisfy the immediate needs. Finding later he should have taken his time. I think that's the quality I don't like most about him...lol. But, we'll see where it takes him. As for Jae's mum, she has a sixth sense about Jae and Dan, you're right about that too. Always a pleasure to read your thoughts Daithi, thank you so much.
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Jae is protective toward his mum, so I feel he keeps a lot of the ugly stuff he goes through from her. I find he's into taking care of her so much...lol Thanks for reading Lisa.
  14. Spicy Gimchi and Old Wounds Jae drove home to Gong, his thoughts centered on Dan and their scorching kiss. Dan liked him, enough to kiss him, Jae mused. A sigh escaped and he gripped the steering wheel tight. This wasn’t a good time to think about relationships. He and Dan, they had business together, there was Rebellion’s plan, and he couldn’t allow anything to jeopardize that, not even for a stunning kiss that had left every cell in his body trembling. He hadn’t known a kiss could fee
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 6

    You've made me crave chocolate **going to find my stash** lol. Dan is loveable isn't he? The kiss was unexpected, but it felt right to put it at the end. Lisa's accepted to edit for me, so she has the next chapter right now. I'll post it when she gives it back. Sacred, you're awesome!! I'm happy to read your reviews, they make me smile. Keep studying, wish you the best in that.
  16. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    Yes, the leap seemed important to put in there. There was just so much I needed to get through and skipping a few years ahead felt the best way to cover it all up. Glad it worked out for you. "The Plan", hmm..still plotting that out by the way. To come in the next chapters. Lol,
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    Dan and Jae moment coming up!!lol. thanks for reading Joann, and for reviewing. Truly means a lot to me.
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Jaesun is a user, he doesn't stop to see who he's hurting ever, just takes what he needs. Dan was the hero in this chapter,
  19. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Poor Jae is right, he's had it rough on this chapter. Dan the doctor, lol. Great one! Thanks Joann.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    I knew you'd like him, he's so out there isn't he? Congratulations on guessing right, lol.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Dan is a fun character to write, he always has everything handled. That one guy you can count on..hehe...he'll be good for Jae.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    N-sang is trouble, and there's is always that one person who should have stood by you but didn't. Lol, Jae is not yet ready to give up. Thanks for another review.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Yes, home is always gives you this reboot mojo, and heals the pain, right. Thank you, Joann.
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Sacred! I've missed you! hehe. Yes the first chapter is all about Jae's happy place. Glad you liked it. I should PM you, wish you the best with your studies.
  25. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Hi Joann! Great to see your review on this story. Thanks so much for reading!
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