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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Not the end! LOL... currently working like mad to get the next chapter up on the posting schedule. I will wait for your reaction... Thanks LadyDe for reading and letting me know your thoughts. Means alot to me.
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you WriterJT for reading and dropping a line!! I'm excited that you're excited, lol! More to come promise.
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    Chapter 2

    Toshiro will fix it soon, promise...lol. He's thoughtful, although I think he needs Jason to teach him to stop and smell the flowers. Thanks for reading as always, Lisa.
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    Chapter 2

    Fast is good...lol. Toshiro is a man done wrong, so he has to figure out what's going on first before he can see Jason..Thank you for reading, I'm glad you love this story of mine. I look forward to more of your thoughts and reactions.
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    Chapter 3

    Chapter Three Standing behind heavy curtains, Toshiro watched Kaito send his bodyguards away and close the bedroom door. Toshiro waited for the outer door to close, aware that those two burly men who followed Kaito everywhere waited in the hallway. Kaito removed his tie, dropping it on an armchair, his grey suit jacket followed. Toshiro moved from his hiding place when Kaito turned to the bed, ready to remove his shirt. “Leave your clothes on,” he said. Kaito's shoulders stiffened and he t
  6. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Lisa, thanks for reading!! The funny thing is when I start writing YMMC..Jaesun was Jae Sun, but writing it like that would have been confusing to people, so I put it together, and it felt like a korean version of Jason..lol. I really love the name Jason so in this story, I decided I had to have a nice guy called Jason. Thanks again...this one is almost complete, it came to me fast so it should all be up within the week, if I can figure out the scheduled posting system, just saw that my second chapter posted at a different time than I'd set (software systems = 1 Sui = 0). I'll figure it out. Thanks again.
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you so much for reading. Hope the second and the third....are just as good. Lol.
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Chapter Two Two days later, Toshiro sat on the chair beside his bed, his leather jacket on his lap as he stared out the window into the cool morning. The small quaint town was surreal. He'd never lived in one place long enough to care about the people. Running organized crime left no time for home making. He picked up his jacket and checked the pockets. Keira, the perky second-shift nurse, had told him they'd looked for his identification and found none. They wouldn't have, he thought as
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Hi John!! I'm glad, I've scheduled chapters to post, i'm just figuring out the logistics. I'm glad you're hooked lol.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for reading.
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    Chapter 1

    Chapter One He'd expected death, but not like this. Not leaning on a tree in the middle of the woods with no one to avenge his death. To be truthful, that last part was a dream too. The life he'd lived did not inspire love from others, not enough love for revenge. No, not many would notice he'd died. Meeting his killer's gaze, he chuckled. “I'm surprised you waited this long, Kaito.” “You are my favorite,” Kaito said, then leaned to press a wet sloppy kiss on his jaw. Toshiro clutche
  12. Stabbed and left for dead, Toshiro Shindo is at the end of the rope: no hope, no one to care, no reason to live. And then Jason rescues him, and shows him kindness and then love. When the man who stabbed him returns for him, Toshiro fights to keep the life Jason rescued.
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    Chapter 14

    Hahaha....I'm with ateneact79. That ending was the best comedy ever, endearing but funny. Benny is in a new world, that's all I have to say...loll!! Great job, I'm eager for the next chapter.
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    Chapter 6

    Hi Shadow Dancer, thank you so much for reading, and catching that for me. I'll fix it right now.
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    Chapter 6

    Kisses are great..right!! Thank you for your comments, I really love knowing when readers like my stories, or a certain scene, and I'm happy you let me know. Thank you again.
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    Chapter 4

    IsaFierce, I love your name!! Thank you for reading my story. Yes, chapter four was so much fun to write. Your comment made me go back and read that part too, and remember the fun of Dan and Jae's first meet. Thank you so much. Keep reading.
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    Chapter 12

    In a small way I pity Jaesun because he took the safe way out of the situation they were in, it wasn't a bad decision, just a careful one, so that's okay for him. But the part that annoys me is the fact that he's fixated on Jae, needs Jae to validate his decisions. So, this chapter was great, Jae going like, "Jaesun, time for you to prove if you can stand on your own like we had to do, or something like that...lol." Thanks for always reading and commenting Lisa. And your edits are always the best, you make what I'm trying to say in the chapter make sense, lol. You're awesome! .
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    Chapter 12

    It was about time for Jae to do that. I think he's held himself responsible for Jaesun so long, it was nice to write him making his stand. And saying, "Okay, the past is the past, time to look to the future." As for the time apart, lol, time to test how strong Dan and Jae are right...lol, Thanks Joann for reading, and commenting, it makes me smile.
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    Chapter 11

    Thanks Sacred, yes Jae has grown up some, and sometimes Dan has had to play different roles for the guys, he cares a lot for them. Thank you for reading as always. I stopped by your story, made me cry a bit... still need tissues.... Dragon's Kiss...**insert very low bow) this writer has wronged you.I'll fix that soon, promise) ** I love your reviews, keep reading.
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    Long Road Ahead

    Zune's return was happy and heartbreaking at the same time. Jenny's emotional reaction made me tear up a bit, she was so happy. As for Daryl, I hope they start believing Zune soon. Edward is my hero!! Yay. Great Chapter.
  21. To Love Someone is the Same as To Protect Them “We have tour dates without venues,” Harry said holding out the list of venues they'd planned to use for Rebellion's national tour. “Most of them have canceled our reservation. I'm starting to think someone is interfering.” Dan took the list with a sigh. Someone was interfering. “We're left with five venues; most of them are school gymnasiums, fields and halls.” “What do you want to do? That's a very small tour compared to the twenty stops we'd p
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 13

    “Mates sleep together.” Benny groaned and his ears flattened. “What? Does your stomach hurt?” Poor Benny!!! I laughed so hard, I think Timothy is right, about what you wish for. Great chapters, Yuri is so much fun, his innocent state is absolutely adorable, and I like how it comes out so straight forward. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Comicfan. I live for the odd. lol thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.
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    Chapter 11

    Thanks Jo Ann. I tried to cut back on the drama, but in the end it ended up that way, since the story is romance, can't help but wax poetic, once in a while Thank you for reading gal!! Made my day.
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