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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    Thank you so much for this. Yay!! A fellow Mo Dao Zu Shi fan! I love, love that novel. The author (MXTX) is someone I look up to. I find her work very captivating, so I've ended up reading a lot of it. She does silent angst in such a beautiful way, and her characters are quite impressive. As for this story, I might call it a bastardized version of xianxia. I haven't stayed as true to Xianxia traditions, choosing to create a different mixed world. It's been a challenge to remember that I don't want to pull the traditions in as much and I truly felt that pressure at this chapter because weddings are so full color and traditions. I'm hoping readers enjoy it as is. You've caught me in a season of ancient times. I'm all like my characters are riding horses right now and wearing robes. I do miss writing Modern Stories. Just yesterday I was wondering what Jihan's Tiktok videos would be about (obviously how to clap back on Kiyan for threatening his big sis ), Then I had to return to the actual plot plan. I'll get back to modern times soon when TRC is done. So true. Guess the next part is all about getting to know each other. Yes, everyone is always after something in life. I guess it depends on what people are willing to do to get what they want. You're welcome. It's really interesting how this traditional rites sort of trickle down into our own modern times. I mean if the family is not really keen on them, they won't happen. But then you'll find these pockets of communities that can't ignore them, and it is really fun being part of it all. little story--> I thought my Mom would be cool about not really following wedding traditions when her kids were tying the knot. She ended up surprising me. Because she had to go through them, so she wanted us , also to do it too. She turned into a tradionalzilla if we tried to talk her out of it, so culture costumes were a must for all of us. I really thought about it, her meeting Jihan, but with so much happening already, this confrontation will come later. Rushi is also a passive attacker, she waits in the shadows. Hahaha. I know right! I mean it was all fun and sweet when Rashan was meeting him as someone who saved his life. Soon, they'll be meeting as Step-Pa and Step-son. Jihan inherited a tween. hahaha. Fun times ahead.
  2. Jihan Weds Kastan Firuz rolled on the floor in the vault Jihan used to store valuables. He strained to undo the chains tied around him. Chains forged to haul crates of iron in the depths of Mount Kin. He was driven by two fears. First, that Jihan would face an unavoidable calamity. The second was that he would be too late to save Jihan from that calamity. Firuz could not escape the pain of losing Jihan if something fatal happened. The tattoo on his wrist would turn into a wound that wo
  3. Lisa!!! thank you!!!
  4. Apparently, I've written a lot! I'm handing out candy later, and some drinks...the virtual bar is open! Thank you for this, I'm honored!
  5. lilansui

    Chapter 9

    Duke Silver lost some points at this time, 😆. I'll have to redeem him, hehehe.
  6. Will it be a Prince Consort? A heavy wave of festivity filled Kamran Estate. Jihan’s staff swept the courtyards clean, lined them with hanging red lanterns and festive streamers. Beautiful flowers in vases lined the paths to the inner courtyard, and the steps into all the buildings at the estate. Deora had all the staff working in the kitchens busy preparing food for the guests who were arriving every minute. Every merchant who worked under Kamran knew how important Andiya was to
  7. Andiya’s Marriage Kastan studied the map Temu’s messengers had drawn after their daily scout of Kamran Estate. The vast swath of land tucked in the northeast coast of Silver Kingdom was impressive. It was now clear that Jihan had invested some of his profits on the large estate. His lover had then taken the time to hide the estate’s existence creating a sanctuary for himself and his family. It was hard to imagine Jihan was Lord Duyi’s son. They were so different. “He’s paid handso
  8. The Emperor’s Fig Tree Days moved in a whirlwind of activity for Kastan. Each day, he waited for news of Jihan, but none came from the men he sent out in search of his lover. He could not leave the border or the ten thousand miles of West Nation land he had seized. His hopes hinged on his sister who worked day and night to reach a deal that would suit both West Nation and the Empire of Akasha. On a sunny morning at the end of fourteen days, Kastan sat in the command tent listening
  9. Duke Silver – Hottest Fire in Existence Jihan prepared for bed, keenly aware of Duke Silver taking up half his bed. He came out of the bathroom wearing a light shirt and pants. Pushing his hair back, he stared at the man on his bed and wondered what Duke Silver would do if he slipped right next to him. Too brave of you, Jihan thought, it will be courting trouble. His gaze lingered over Duke Silver. It was hard not to when the Duke looked so enticing asleep on Jihan’s bed. Jih
  10. Betrayal at the Imperial Palace Kastan studied the mysterious scholar who saved his son and realized fate was weaving a curious game. Kastan smiled when Jihan glared at him for his comment. The urge to lean in and kiss Jihan, taste the tea he drank while bluffing Jozi, was strong. “You look tired,” Kastan noted, tracing his thumb over the dark circles under Jihan’s eyes. “When did you last sleep?” “This morning,” Jihan lied smoothly, shifting in his chair so that Kastan had to dro
  11. The Burning Feather “I understand Pa,” Andiya said, studying the sweets their mother had given Jihan. She picked one out from the box and ate it. She chewed on it for a moment, and then nodded, picking out a second one. “These are good, Jihan. I’ll have Deora taste them so she can replicate the recipe. We can find a way to produce them on a larger scale.” They were in Jihan’s library, a room he used to curate all Kamran information. Andiya sat on a chaise opposite Jihan’s desk, as she
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you too!! Perfect, exactly as I hoped.
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Jihan is to answer your question next chapter He really will, hahaha. I'll get it posted. Promise.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thank you for asking this, I got lazy on description here, and will edit it by this weekend. The idea is that Jihan's family being merchants could find themselves having followed the wrong court officials, and be part of a corrupt plot that ends in an inquiry at royal court. If any evidence to show corruption appears then they get convicted and lose all their business or lives, depending on the seriousness of the evidence. I'll make this clearer, currently working on chapter 4 and will get to the edit Saturday or Sunday. Thank you.
  15. Congratulations!!! Carlos.
  16. Aww...I'm excited to be mentioned! but I'm with @CassieQ. I also guess it's her,
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    1 - A Missed Date Bas Emmerson sat at a café called The Pear waiting for his date. It was late July, the weather hot outside on a lazy afternoon. It was the perfect time for a date. If only his date would show up. He smiled and continued reading on his kindle. He sipped his coffee and glanced at his phone. Liam was late, but it was usual. He often came in thirty minutes later than planned. Liam was the swim team captain, and often had a hard time keeping his promises when he got involved
  18. Liam Fenton was Bas's first major crush in college. When Liam stood him up on a date, asking for a rain check, Bas figured their timing was not right. They meet again after six years. Bas has scars from a failed marriage and a volatile ex-husband. Liam has thought about Bas and their missed date for years. After they meet, Liam decides to take the chance fate has given him and works to get to know Bas better.
  19. Kastan Visits the Eagle’s Claw After two days in a palace preparing for war, Kastan was glad to be on his way back to Silver Shore with Rashan. Kiyan and Kyra were over the moon, having showered attention on Rashan at every moment. It was nice to see, but Kastan worried their attention only made Rashan stand out. Kiyan’s wife, the Empress Rushi, was a hard woman. Her temperament was not easy and it upset her to see the amiable relationship Kastan had with his siblings. While
  20. Happy Birthday Lisa!!!!! I hope you have a lovely day.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Jihan built a strong business in an effort to protect him and Andiya from their father, who is a man he can't really touch as he associates himself with powerful people. It places him in a very difficult spot especially when Duke Silver gets into his life. That is a very huge compliment! I feel the pressure right now. Hahaha. Yass!!!! Doing a little dance....hahaha. Very true about ambition. Jihan's thoughts are definitely for let's-not-break-what's-working-for-us, his Pa is like, um, no, let's climb the steep mountain...and maybe try to balance on the tip. Let's just say that Rashan is a mini-Jihan, he does what he can to push the line, in other words his over-protected status makes him very naughty. As for a Shadow Guard, getting one might not be easy...to come later. Jihan and Duke Silver will have a proper intro next chapter.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    He does what he needs to, which makes me smile for some reason as I think it gets him in trouble, hahaha. I'm working on it very hard.
  23. A Day in a Merchant’s Life Jihan Kamran loved rainy days. He enjoyed the sound of raindrops rapping on the roof, on the stones in courtyards, or on the grass. The rhythm soothed him. Twirling his fan, he watched raindrops hit the stones in the inn courtyard where he was staying. Big fat drops overtaking the smaller ones, it was a wild dance. It was a far more exciting dance than his time in this little town in the Sun Kingdom. “Jihan.” His name came in a quiet tone no higher than
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Andre!
  25. lilansui

    Prologue

    It is! I know! Beginnings are really hard, hahaha.
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