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Mann Ramblings

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  1. Chardonnay, Dirty Vodka Martinis and Brandy to be more precise
  2. I take that as a GREAT complient!
  3. I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to write !
  4. Mann Ramblings

    Chapter 1

    To repeat: This is a great beginning. Expand. Expand. Expand. I think we'd all love to see what happens next. Great work.
  5. I just couldn't resist making the vamps a couple of nasty, bitchy twinks. Thanks for checking it out.
  6. Saved by projectile vomit. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
  7. OO!! I haven't read this yet!!
  8. I don't care how long it's been since I've gotten laid. There will be no more blind dates in my future. And I sure as hell will never let her plan one for me ever again. A secluded, candlelit romantic Italian dinner complete with violin playing waiter should have been a perfect setting. Well maybe for a second or third date, maybe. Or even an anniversary date. But for a first meeting, getting to know you kind of date? Not so much. Where did my mother find that idiot? I'm pretty sure he showed
  9. This prompt was a bit of a challenge. The projectile vomit was part of the prompt details so I made it integral to the story. Not my usual, but I had fun nonetheless. Thanks for reading and reviewing
  10. Mine's in!
  11. well at least it wasn't titled, "Knob Polisher." I just couldn't have accepted that...
  12. OOooo... I think I have an idea and time to play with one of these
  13. “How can I make this situation worse?” :D That is my mantra. LOL. I love all your points and wholeheartedly agree with every one. May we all use them successfully and create compelling fiction!! Good post, Libby. I think we all need a reminder now and again of what drives our story and makes it work.
  14. Mann Ramblings

    Party from Hell

    Loved the cameo appearances by JoAnn and Cassie! Tense chapter. I can totally see an overprotective friend pushing the new boys buttons until it bites him in the ass... or the jaw. Tyler's appearance can't bode well as this point. I'm curious to see if they can salvage the party with all this drama going on! Great chapter!
  15. I really enjoyed reading this. I found Rob's work a while ago and paired up with a few other writers, I finally got the urge to write my own stories and wound up here on GA. Thanks!! It was nice to see the development of the way you handle characters. The smaller guy didn't cry at the drop of a hat and grew quite a backbone. Bastian's disappearance from the story for several chapters worked extremely well and created a great anticipation when his shuttle was finally discovered. I'll be reading the Cassini Mission as soon as I can get my hands on it. I wonder sometimes how much you can read into an author by the way he/she writes. How much of their private (or not so private) wishes end up on the page. Don't think I haven't noticed the prevalence of uncircumcised men in your stories. Not complaining. Can't wait for the next story to come along!
  16. wouldn't it suck if you were at 49 rep pts.right before this change hit?
  17. I'm okay with pure smut.
  18. Binding really is a sexy, fun ride that's worth the read. Think "Fantasy Island in Space!"
  19. Thanks for all the Birthday wishes everyone! I like liquor as a thoughtful gift... or diamonds...
  20. There's so much ugliness going on in so many directions. Way to keep us on our toes. The courtroom drama to add to the mix is a path I wasn't expecting. Why do I think it's not going to go well? Good chapter as always, KC
  21. Happy Birthday, Layla!!! :D ok... party's over get back to work...
  22. Mann Ramblings

    prompt 244

    Nice start. The main character will have it rough it the new guy isn't into guys. It would be interesting to see where it goes from here. You should be sure to link to this in the prompt forum so everyone involved gets a chance to read it easily.
  23. That would be the mystery wouldn't it? Chad freaks out after being saved by Chuck and afterwards Chuck tells Jess, crying, that Chad didn't make it. Something bad must have happened while everyone was out... Thanks for reading
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