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Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
Geemeedee commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
Yeah, I’m thinking one more for the bad-guy pack. I felt the same, but Mason trusts him and Vincent’s wolf trusts him. I hope their noses and instincts aren’t wrong. -
I’m thrilled to see a new story from you, Mrsgnomie! I admire young Matt. He could’ve allowed Aidan to be adopted or go into foster care, but it was a no-brainer to care for the baby himself. I also admire Seamus for respecting Matt’s struggle and his obvious potential, and being willing to help out so much. I think he’s normally a man of few words and just shy. I look forward to where you take these characters. Also, I can’t help but think Aidan lost his mom in a terrible way, but will have a better life. I remember Aidan being lifeless and blank-eyed when Matt came home to babysit. He’s certainly not that way now.
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Hot take: Fergus and Granger were MATES!!
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Welp, we suspected, and now we know. I’m just bummed we have to wait another week. Such a good chapter.
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I just finished reading “Running with the Pack.” Again. 🙂 The mention of Ethan and Aiden made me want to spend time with them. Such a great story!! I don’t know where you’re taking us this time with Brandon, but I’m happy to be along for the ride.
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Well, we know some toddler twins and their babysitter weren’t there. And as for the disappearing pack members, the packs are few and far between, so others don’t know what they don’t know ...
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This was FANFUCKINGTASTIC. Left me gasping.
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This was the sweet calm before the storm. Now they gotta go home to Sun-filled Manor and open up a jug of whoop ass. They probably keep it next to the peach wine, lol. I wish Andiya could go with them, but she’s gotta head back to have her baby.
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Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
Geemeedee commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
Informative chapter! I’d like to mention something that bothered me, tho. Cyrus has a rug that’s made to look like the hide of a panda. That seems so disrespectful, to be resting and walking (even metaphorically) on one of his own, different species or not. Like, that’s the act of a villain — open disdain for his own kind. Other than that, I like the faster pace of Cyrus and Kaplan’s relationship. And the more Vincent learns, the more epic his fights will be! -
Great ending! I admit, I thought Paul and Anselm would show up as a couple after realizing their love for each other, LOL. Well, you can’t squeeze everything in! I could imagine the adorable kids. Lovely close to the story.
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I love that the gang is headed to Maddie’s and am STOKED for the explanatory conversation. I also look forward to how any of these folks will make contact with Doris. Maybe they never will.
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It just hit me — Jada’s gonna be piiiiiissed! LOLLLL
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I’m sitting here wondering why Patton attacked. He could smell Sawyer wasn’t home. If Jada called the police, all she could say is a suspicious guy was there. Both wolves were going to kill her, not torture her for info. So they planned to kill her as a message to Jimmy and Sawyer, I guess. Dumb move, Fergus. Jada essentially got bit by TWO wolves. This should be interesting. Wait — if she goes to the hospital, they’ll discover that she’s no longer completely human! Has Fergus unmasked wolf shifters with his stupid plan??
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My stomach clenched when Anderson patted the back of his neck with the bite comment. But what Joseph seemed to miss was Anderson said, “we know you’re gay because...” WE. Maybe more fellow officers will attend the wedding than Joseph thought. Great chapter. I especially loved that Harlan noticed Lee’s potential. Having Harlan on his side would be a definite plus. And another thing: did Mason and Jeremy move into the Airstream?
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Oh, that’s a given. And methinks poor young Patton is gonna get effed up.
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I’ve been thinking along similar lines. The main problem here is a lack of information. For all they know, the bite from a true mate can help. Yes, I know what Jimmy’s maman said. But I also can’t believe Mann plans nothing but tragedy ahead. If I’m wrong, well, lots more tears are coming.
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Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
Geemeedee commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
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I use the site exclusively on Safari, on an iPhone SE. My main page is the Stories page, which updates every time there’s a new chapter or completed story posted. There’s a row of filters above the story list: Category, Genre, Tag, etc. On mobile the row of filters doesn’t wrap to fit on a mobile screen — they are one long string that extends way off the page. I’ve added images to illustrate the issue.
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Biiiiiiiiiiitchhhhh ... *spoken in an awe-filled tone* This chapter ROCKED. It was cinematic. Sparks and smoke and swooping eagles and speeding ghost warriors and Temu and Firuz’s swords of fury and Firuz going all black-eyed uber-assassin and the mad jump off the cliff ... Thank you for not making us wait until the new year! I look forward to the revenge carnage. Dumb-ass Rushi and Nisa are gonna get it. Those heffas really tried it! My heart is still pounding. I gotta read this again, LOL.
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SAME! But thank you for the chapter that moves the story along. Curious to see how the decision to start with the carriage will play out. And I hope someone got Jihan’s money back from that stall owner, LOL!
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Fantastic chapter. Thank you! Take care of yourself during this hectic time. Be as safe as you can.
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Chapter 23: Alpha Arriving
Geemeedee commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Alpha Arriving
How cool that a bear can lead packs primarily made up of wolves! OF COURSE New York would be ahead in the diversity game, LOL. I find it interesting that Cyrus is taking on this pack as his next assignment. He’s there to figure out how to break it into more manageable territories, perhaps? Let’s see, we have a fire mage, a couple of ice mages and a lightening mage. We have a shifter Avengers in the making! 😄- 35 comments
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Huh, Jimmy *didn’t* hear Fergus’s howl. That means he has no idea of the danger they’re in. Man, if Sawyer leaves ... 😳 @centexhairysub said they can’t believe Jimmy doesn’t know he’s an alpha. Makes me think alphas aren’t born, they’re made.
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Chapter 20: Master Mole
Geemeedee commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 20: Master Mole
I think I know who the mole is, but I ain’t sayin’. 😄 I hope Mase pulls in the New York contingent to help ... and gives Vincent his own set of house keys. Hey, I hope Stefan hasn’t been in and out of people’s houses all this time!- 24 comments
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He did smell Sawyer before tonight. The last time we saw Fergus: “He could have sworn he caught another man’s scent on Jimmy, but couldn’t be sure with the smell of decaying flesh in his nostrils.” He smelled him another time as well. My guess is, he never goes to the bank and has some “subordinate” take care of the task.
