Timothy M.

LOL, I know you were an early member of the Peter club. I'm glad you liked the review and I've already caught one new reader.

I'm delighted you're convinced about the story being worth continuing to read. I shall look forward to more reviews from a clever dragon. LOL and on the good point about who will be sharing who, and I love that you're thinking of them as a family already. As for the living arrangements

Thank you, Def. I hadn't considered Michael has having any special ability apart from the normal childish curiosity and forthright way of asking. But he's certainly doing his best to help things along. As for the devil of doubt

I'm glad you think so. I assume you can read the Danish sentences in the story without translations?

Tack så mycket. Hur att ha en annan svenska läsare. (I hope that was more or less correct.) Jeg tænker du kan forstå de danske sætninger i historien.

That's great to hear. It's been enjoyable but difficult to expand the story, so I'm very relieved it works for readers of the old version too.

Thank you, Reader, I'm pleased you think the story develops naturally. And I'm you liked the angel.

Romantic devil, LOL. I'm glad you liked the angel/devil dispute, it's one of my favorite moments too. Yeah, Patrick has humor as well as self-insight, even if the former has had much opportunity to show itself yet. You're spot on with Michael, even though he has his normal childish moments too. I'm so glad you love him.

You're welcome - thanks for reading and reviewing.

Thanks, Caz. I hadn't thought about Michael that way, but you're absolutely right, even if he doesn't do it on purpose. Budding relationship is a great way to put it.

Thank you, Mike, hopefully this story will brighten your Sunday mornings for a while. I'm glad you liked the sweet stuff, I always worry about getting it right.

Thank you, tim. I'm glad you embrace them and the sentimental stuff too. I hope they'll continue to touch you.

You know I hadn't thought about it being a 'general rule' that gifted people cannot use their abilities for their own advantage, but now that you point it out, it makes a lot of sense. This rule holds true for plenty of stories, and for this one too, even though Patrick has used his talent for rejecting unsuitable 'suitors.' I'm glad you point out the way Patrick lets his mind (and hos fears?) overrule his instincts and his heart. He dreams of a future with Peter and Michael, he falls in love, he even see a glimpse of an intimate moment, but he dares not believe or act. It makes the courage of Peter even better. Oh, and having you tell me, you love the story is the best compliment of all.

Uhm, did Ehren actually understand what Tris meant, when he said he came out of the closet? Oh well, at least he must have understood Tris was gay when he started talking about dating a guy, but we didn't get to know his thoughts about it. I liked how he simply went with the cover of being Tris' boyfriend all the while worrying about how he was supposed to act. And now we have to wait a whole week for the talk.

No matter what the future would bring, Patrick knew he would cherish this moment of unbelievable joy for as long as he lived. The man he'd fallen hopelessly in love with was on his knees in front of him and had asked him to be his Valentine. It was as if his lonely heart had been hidden in a tightly held and secured box. Peter's words had unlocked and flung open the lid to his secret desires. All of his repressed feelings poured out in a huge flood, like a dam bursting, and only the unexpec

Glad to see the boys getting some serious studying done too. I was wondering: does Joel never call home to let them know how he's doing?

LOL, I'm so glad you find them fun. You might want to try out my new story (The Cardmaker and the Caretaker), which will have more Danish quotes and is set to post a chapter every week, unlike this story which only updates at random intervals.

Wow, cocoon, what a lovely surprise, you certainly made my day with this review. I'm delighted you like both sides of the story. The emotions related to Russell and the romance, and my attempt to use the Danish landscape and Copenhagen as the setting, including showing our way of life. I'm glad to hear you recall the Danish beaches with fondness. I have to admit you're probably right about Swedes being the ultimate blond Scandinavians, but Danes and Norwegians are close behind, and Finns too, I'm told. But as for Vikings, Danes and Norwegians are the classical types. Your comment about my proficiency in English has me blushing with pride and joy. I put a lot of effort into my writing (with the help of my beta and editors), so having you notice makes me profoundly happy. Lots of reading, speaking and writing brought me to this point, but there is always room for improvement. for reading and reviewing and please feel free to comment in the story forum too.

It's probably better that being toast.

Well done, Rex, keep telling them to admit their feelings and commit to love and each other until they give in. Those two guys need to start building their future together right away, why waste any more time when it feels right? Oh and well done, Robert, on getting the hungry birds cheeping.

Tait does not seem like the kind of person who would squander his money, so I guess he can life off his savings from model work while he finds out what other skills or possibiliteis he has. I hope Philip will admit his love for Tait at some point, I know it's much too early, but I want them to find happiness together. Loved the description of the house.

Donnelly seems to be the only nice, sensible person around. I hope he will take care of Kye until the Lord he saved wakes up. Sam is an insensitive idiot, so we cannot rely on him to get the story right.

Thank God for that - or I guess I should say Thank Dragon for that. Toph is still ignoring Gary, he did not go to his parents' Christmas dinner, and Steve was the one to betray him (twice) and not the other way round. Who is Oscar? I need to go back over previous chapters?

at least the toad error was funny (the your instead of you're was ) or maybe they get all the kids to collect toads and stick them on the car?

I often have to correct words with unnecessary double consonants: Stared and starred are two very different words in meaning, the first means to look intensely and the second to be the star of e.g. a show. Similar with scared and scarred (afraid and having scars).