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  1. Timothy M.
    I enjoyed reading the story again, even if the urge to punch Sar was bigger than ever.
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    Thanks dugh, I'm glad someone appreciates the idea of Jazz naked and soapy. I know CG will agree with you. I'm glad you can find the time to keep up with the story and I hope your head behaves.
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    Hey Victor, not to worry I'm happy to know you're reading and very impressed you managed to get through all 46 chapters in one go. And that you like the story. I suggest you leave reviews on those chapters where you really feel the urge to comment, rather than feel obliged to do all of them. You can go read he Rob parts in Meta without reading the whole thing, though of course there will be a few spoilers if you intend to read all the books. Just make sure to only read the parts with Jett, Rob and Bradley. I can see why you understand Rob's need to get away from his parents, even if they are nice and accepting. We all need to spread our wings and achieve independence and then we can hopefully return to their love.
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    Blond boys in the shower with soap, sigh.... The trio of Rob, Jazz and Mitch could get anyone in a good mood. Tobias may have attracted the attention of the wrong guys at first, but now he's offered protection and friendship by the really popular teammates. He'll be OK, but I loved that you cared about Tobias, it's very telling of the great person you are. LOL, yeah the coach - to be honest I forgot about him, so I had to add the chapter note at the last minute.
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    Thanks, Drew I'm glad you approved. It really is a win-win situation for the Perry brothers, and yes Rob knows Nelson will take care of Eric. Of course, Rob will still be the meddlesome older brother until he leaves and during holidays. I shall try to come up with some Trevor-Rob situations just for you. You deserve it for always giving me such nice reviews.
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    You know I like to suggest. But I'm sure Rob is happy to date a hot lady in California. Thanks for referring back to his story in Meta.
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    Beginning a new day in a family embrace in the kitchen with Michael in the middle and his dad smiling tenderly at both of them filled Patrick with joy. The young boy was still babbling on in Danish, and he caught various distorted versions of his name. “Jeg kan kalde ham pap-Patrick. Pappatrick, Pappa-trick, ej Pappa. Er det OK, tror du, far?” [1] Peter’s smile was delighted. ”Papa betyder far på fransk og engelsk, så jeg er helt sikker på, det er OK.[2] Patrick, Michael wants to know if he ca
  8. Timothy M.
    Hey Reader, not to worry - better late than never. I'm happy to know I make you smile, and I promise there will be plenty of good moments ahead.
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    Chapter 2

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I agree with impunity, it's gonna be so funny to see them all trying to keep their interest hidden - but pretty hard for Ty, who will believe no one wants him. Somehow I think it's pretty unfair the players have no say in where they go in the draft. They should be able to chose between the clubs that are interested, but hen I guess money and stuff would get involved. I'm liking Kevin more all the time, I hope we'll see more of him. The interview went well, hopefully his club will be pleased. Good idea to get David involved in the training, I bet Charlie will go too, and more people might join as well. Julie will end up busy, lol. I hope she gets the brat to shut up about the Mum nickname, or perhaps Peter can kick his butt once more.
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    “What the hell are you watching?” Rob asked Tobias. “Your toenails grow, or how the tiles have been laid out?” His voice was low, but Mitchell on the other side of Tobias in the showers heard him and chuckled. “I bet he’s being considerate and giving everyone else a chance to check him out.” “Ha, as if they would look at him, when I am on display.” Rob did an exaggerated soaping of his chest and underarms, almost worthy of a porn movie, and Jasper let out a wolf whistle from across the aisle.
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    I sure hope Luke is right about Simon's friends being able to keep their mouths shut, or his brother may have a hard time forgiving him. Oh, and did Luke even listen to them or to anything Si has said in relation to Toby for the past weeks? Why on earth would he assume Simon is with Toby? Please, no stupid running into burning buildings by Luke or Simon, right? It's bad enough that Si will probably end up blaming himself for this too. I hope his parents find him a really good therapist.
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    Memories

    Timothy M. commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Memories

    I think it's good that Tait can be removed and dispassionate about what Sean did to him. It will help him keep calm in court, if Sean's lawyers try to ratle him. At least he has the hospital records and his therapist as witness as to the damages done to him. I think the criminal case attorney is right, Tait should go for the money, as I bet that would hit Sean harder than anything else. Uhmm, one small detail: 250,000 dollars for one painting?? I could see that sum for all four, perhaps, but it's still a huge amount of money.
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    Chapter 26

    Timothy M. commented on LitLover's story chapter in Chapter 26

    I'm still trying to work out how all this ties together, but I feel there are some imporant pieces of information missing. But perhaps with Merrick waking up, he and Jenson will be able to figure out the puzzle. I'm sure Merrick will refuse to go back to the ship, if he's able to function without too much effort and pain, and surely he'll be safe in their suite?
  14. Timothy M.
    To sjæle, én tanke is what we say in Danish for great minds think alike. The literal meaning is Two souls, one thought (mind), but with M&K we might as well say Two hearts, one love. This chapter revealed how they had both collected the same cards: A puppy for the man they love, care for the mother of their unborn child, a need for expressing their feelings: romantic, sensual, horny or longing for togetherness. I loved that they had a quiet and hot Christmas time together before the madness of Nodie and family descends on them. Everything is coming together for a wonderful future for the best Cards on the Table of your story: Ace and Deuce.
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    Chapter 6

    Timothy M. commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Thank you for making this sweet couple real. I hope we'll hear more of them as the story progresses. And those Elders need to be taught a lesson.
  16. Timothy M.
    Those two prompts could actually be combined into one story !
  17. Timothy M.
    Cuddled up to a 210 pound kitty, LOL. And I have to agree with Cory on being about being woken up. They're on holiday, damn it. Anyway, the burst airbed led them to a real bed behind a lockable door, and we all enjoyed that.
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    Chapter 9

    Timothy M. commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Ohh, a serial killer ! The stakes have suddenly gone up. Hmm, tim's objection seems valid, but perhaps Toby is doing this on his free time?
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    Thanks, LL - glad you noticed the teasing. on edge and anticipation and being worth it are good words to describe more than this chapter. Michael's easy acceptance was an important moment for all of them, and probably a relief for the adults. And you're right about the special gain for Patrick. He needs love in his life so badly. Mmmmm, pancakes. Definitely one of my favorite things.
  20. Timothy M.
    He, he - how about a trip to Scandinavia? I know how you feel, I like them blond and hunky, too.
  21. Timothy M.
    Thanks, my friend, glad you liked every part. You're right about Michael. Peter has built most of his life around the boy and one of the reasons he dared to trust his feelings, risk his heart, and knew Patrick was the right one, was the way their budding relationshp happened around the boy, with him as a vital part, in focus as you say. I did not think of it this way before reading your review, and as always I love when my readers make me see my story with new eyes, make me understand it better. Patrick has had many years to think naughty thoughts and imagine stuff. Peter will indeed reap the benefits.
  22. Timothy M.
    Thanky you, Drew, for another amazing review. I'm happy the imp and angel banter keeps amusing you, but also gives you useful insights. You're on the right track. I think the imp was more than just speechless at Patrick suddenly yelling back at him. I can't say more on that right now. I hope the teasing and exploring will affect you / them for quite a while yet, for calling those parts beautiful. Micheal may only have appeared in a small part of the chapter, but he certainly makes an impression, eh? (secretly satisfied smile)
  23. Timothy M.
    Thanks Def, I'm very pleased you liked the breakfast scene. 'home in every sense of the word' I promise Patrick's worry won't get too far before he talks to Peter. At least he's aware of the need. The devil going 'poof' was one of Kitt and Carlos' favorite moment as well, and mine too to be honest. Implode ? hmm
  24. Timothy M.
    LOL, dragon, no delusions there and I loved the 'marking their territory' allegory. Very apt. Thanks for the great remarks on Patrick's personality. I loved writing this part and showing him as more than a 'nice' do-good guy. There was a tiny helpful impish prod though - or maybe it was all Patrick? Your review was my reward so we're quits.
  25. Timothy M.
    Thaks, tim. I agree this is one of the nice advantages of big, hunky, kind men. I love my bed too. Yes, Michael is lucky in this respect, but I think they're also lucky to have him.
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