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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
My pleasure, Drew. Rob loves getting attention as well as going all out to reach his goal. Let's hope I can come up with a good plan on his behalf. Glad you liked the coffee shop scene too. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Oh dugh, I'm so pleased you read and reviewed. I think Trevor may have had the same feeling about Rob and the Prom possibility. Or they could go with other stag guys in a group. Time will tell, or is this where I dig out the ? Yes, Rob has become the rising star of the story somehow. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
You can pat your own back too, my friend, since you helped out with both the coffee shop and the ending. Oh yes, Rob's on a mission, and since Eric and Nelson won't be part of it anymore (as per their deal), Rob has to find another play fellow. Is Trevor game for this? We'll see. Maybe. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
You're welcome, JAR. Don't forget, Rob had plenty of time to plan what he would say to Trevor, who on the other hand took everything in his stride and played the game too. -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (III)
Timothy M. posted new chapter in Timothy’s Terrible Prompt Stories
“Why do I even bother? You’re determined to take anything I say the wrong way.” Ryan looked half furious, half resigned, and Rob decided to give him the benefit of the doubt. “OK then, explain to me why you made a fuss about my brother and his boyfriend joining us?” “This get-together is for the baseball team and their supportive fans. All the non-players here are involved with helping during games or practices. We’ve never let general fans join, apart from girlfriends of the team- 20 comments
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Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
Timothy M. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
The rules of the game: to me the title not only covers the two rules Michael set up for Nodie sleepovers. The day showed more of the smart playing and respect by all our boys: Lessons of Love: Bodie found out how you can feel connected as a couple without anyone being aware of it. Role models rule. Family rule: If you love an Aceto man, you get adopted and loved by the whole family. Teasing game: Joking and teasing is fun and friendly in the family. Taking it slow may be hard, but it's the best way. Anticipation is good. So is kissing and holding hands. Showing emotions and caring and appreciation is OK for guys too. Protecting and helping each other is the duty and pleasure of partners. Sleeping in the arms of your man is the best. Did I forget anything? Oh, yeah: LOVE is wonderful and takes your breath away and makes your heart go all giddy. The scene with the gift to Nodie (early house warming) was exactly what we all hoped for. Thanks Happy Author Anniversary, Gary. You deserve all the praise and recognition. -
Me too. Tillykke med fødselsdagen !!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review and letting me know how you feel about the story. Please visit the story forum too, and feel free to ask questions and leave comments there too. You're not the only one to have reviews adding another layer or revealing things you haven't thought about. It happens to me too, both with my own and other stories. It's awesome. Like you I hate being the center of attention. I'm glad you can identify with Russ although I hope you don't have his less than happy experiences and issues. But he's slowly emerging from his shell.
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I have no idea what was going on in the game, but it was still fun.
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Thanks, buddy, I had a feeling you'd be happy with a chapter almost wholly devoted to Jacob and his love for Russ. I'm glad you liked all the romantic moments - and the hot ones as well. Showing the vulnerability of Jacob more clearly is something I've wanted to do for a while, and I felt Russ was grounded enough to be there for his man. You are the master of stories of commitment between two equally vulnerable and strong guys, so I know where to look for inspiration.
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Thanks, dragon, yeah I apologize for the long wait. Hopefully, the next chapter will be faster to write. I'm delighted you felt the impatience of Russ, he'd been away from Jacob for too many hours by then. And I have the feeling some of my readers were missing Jacob a lot too. for mentioning the shoebox scene and calling it touching. I have to admit my heart ached a bit while I wrote it. I'm not quite sure why, but perhaps it'll come to me.
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Awww, Drew, you write such awesome and fun reviews. I'm glad you felt they made love beautifully, and that you liked the romantic monents. You're right about them not being too clingy, because they are still in the bonding phase. At some point they'll be able to be apart for a few hours without missing each other too much. And yes, Jacob knows exactly how much Russ' declaration means. I'm glad Evan and Chris had you laugh, I did too while writing the beginning of the story.
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Lunch ended soon after my little outburst. Chris gave me a hug and told me it was one of the best compliments he’d ever gotten. Thankfully, everyone else tactfully ignored it, but I noticed Mom discretely wiping her eyes. Nothing memorable happened the rest of the afternoon. We did some sightseeing after lunch, walking past Rundetårn to Kongens Have, with its renaissance castle Rosenborg, home of the Danish Crown Jewels. After a stroll in the park, which Chris was impressed to hear had been
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Arrrgghh, I'm out of likes. Oh well, I'll probably read this chapter ten times or more, so I'll be able to do more than Sorry about not getting any reviews done either, especially since the past few chapters have been awesome. I love the slow but sure development of their attraction and relationship. I hope you'll keep writing this for a long time.
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Just to be sure: the prompt thing quickly became a continuous story, so don't make the mistake of reading random chapters. I wish I could change the story title, which is really now.
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Take a couple of weeks off before you start on CAP. You won't be able to stop.
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See, I knew Marshal was right. And I wouldn't trust Dustin one little bit. I bet this is why he doesn't have any friends, he does not respect people's limits and personal space / privacy. I jope Marshal tells Lee every single word of this conversation and Lee apologizes. Afterwards he can take on the task to teach Dustin proper manners, if he wants. Or preferably kick his ass and tell him to f... off.
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Well, I liked it right from the start, so it wasn't because of anything I did. You made Destiny into a great tale of love and redemption.
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its upcoming sequel Destiny This must be written a while ago. Destiny is fully posted and in my opinion better than Dignity. Oh, and Jonah caused more ranting that most other GA story characters I've encountered.
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Tillykke med fødseldagen are you Dutch? then you might like this SATW comic
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CSR Book Club C S R Feature: The Life Of Seeon By Comicfan
Timothy M. commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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I liked the whole set up and his realization he needed to change, and also his boss pushing him in that direction. But I would have loved to have the part of the story after his move fleshed out, because I'm sure the joint story of Ray and Josh would be great to read about.
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Made For Him - The Story of Ten E
Timothy M. commented on comicfan's story chapter in Made For Him - The Story of Ten E
I've read this story before and was fascinated, but forgot to review. I was relieved Tenny not only got away from the bad guys but that his escape ruined the disgusting project. And TJ was the perfect man to find him and cherish him. Thanks for this wonderful story. -
CSR Book Club C S R Feature: The Life Of Seeon By Comicfan
Timothy M. commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
so please tell us...
