Timothy M.

You may try to hide it away under lots of happy, sappy and lovey bits, but this chapter upsets me. For two reasons, one being the obvious scene of Linc crying over Jack's hair. But the other one is this sort of insidious little thing niggling away at you afterwards: the medical center would not quality Lincoln as 'family.' Those words hurt - and while I realize Dawn would not qualify either, so she's another reason to stay at the Motel, I still seethe at the implications and the injustice, particularly since I have the feeling Jack's girlfriend might elicit another answer. Oh, and Dr. Kimball gets on my nerves, but I'm sure he means well. Let's hope he and his colleagues can work some miracles.

Noooooo, how can there be only one more chapter left ??? That means we'll hardly get any more time with Jonas and Lu than in the first version! And we're just getting to the good bits about dating and all. *pouts* But this was a nice chapter and I'm glad to see Jenny and her mother are supportive. I'm dying to know what Opie will do about Jonas' father, but not if it takes time and space from Lu and Jonas and Lu getting to know each other.

does this help ? http://satwcomic.com/national-personifications It's definitely Mor Danmark - even if we're represented by Holger the Dane in the comic.

sorry about that Victor, didn't mean to rant in you birthday forum Here's a nice satw birthday comic with a Danish hug in compensation: http://satwcomic.com/happy-birthday-norway (oh and in case you wonder why I'm always waving the Danish flag in my birthday greetings: http://satwcomic.com/evil-flag )

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10101 will be nice too

?? who or what is Comsie ?

once you get to be the one chased around in every single forum you visit by a mob of hungry birds crying 'Rob! Rob' or the equivalent, you can whine about injustice! Edit: not to mention the use of Kittens !!!!

was that supposed to be "Won't you promise me" or "you won't promise me" ?? Actually I will promise you a chapter, soon I hope.

WOW awesome, congratulations

Tillykke med fødselsdagen from Denmark where you've been an adult and able to drink Carlsberg for the past three years

Welcome my friend, I'm glad you liked the first chapter. You have good instincts concerning Jacob. Don't forget to visit the story forum if you want to see photos of where they went.

One of my favorite Will-as-Tonto chapters.

I loved Jay's summary of how he came to notice and like Mickey. Interesting how he considered them friends, but Miles hardly dared to think the word. I may have to go back and read the first chapters again with this new knowledge in mind. Lovely surprise, but a 5 dollar tip on a meal which cost less than 15 bucks ?! wow I'm not surprised Jay worked things out about Greg and Denny, he's almost as observant as Greg. Good call on not asking them outright, but now they'll have to wait another day to be sure. I wonder what kept the new couple away... Hopefully something good. Gæk, gæk, gæk, du skylder mig et påskeæg.

More indications of your ability to spot the main themes in a story early on (or perhaps like me reading ahead, before coming back to review, lol). But yes, Rob is the big brother I always wanted, and Jazz is the ideal friend. Sometimes it's good to dream and I hope you'll go along and enjoy the ride.

Thanks Victor, I'm glad you decided to give my story a try. And I'm thrilled you like Nelson, since he's a favorite of mine too, but has few fans. I hadn't thought about the overbearing bit, but you're quite right. You have very good instincts, min dreng.

Four of a kind, yeah, that's what they are. Four honest, romantic, hot, strong guys with healthy appetites on life. You know I'm more pleased for Chet than anyone else, he was so lonely and desperate for friends and a partner and he deserved the best for his honorable behavior when he got to know Kendall. I'm glad Michael acknowledges that once more, and I'm thrilled Chet's vision of M&K in the vintage house will come true. Over here it's quite normal to overlap by two to four weeks when moving from an apartment to a house, particularly if you need to paint and clean and perhaps buy curtains and furniture and stuff. The expense of extra rent is well worth is, also because getting your belongings moved can be cheaper if it's not around the 1st. So how far is the stone house from Chet and Arron's place ? I noticed it was close to the place Michael's dad worked, so I get the feeling we'll have Colleen popping in to mind the baby regularly, LOL. How is the 'paternity' leave struvtured in Canada, Gary?

I this, Kitt. I hope you're right and that ED can rein ME in and prevent physical violence. After all ME wants to avoid Alex suspecting her involvement. But accidents can happen... such as JJ gettting kicked by a horse or falling down the stairs (I'm sure Mark can think of something better ).

You have a very good point. Maybe it was not a coincidence that Will assured JJ he would be there for him. However, I fear all there will be left to do is revenge (something Will is good at, of course ), since the most logical 'price' for ME to engineer would be to kill or maim JJ. (Can you imagine JJ as a hepless cripple in a wheel chair ) But it might bring Brad and Will back on the same side...

Ohhh, lots of football stuff, I like it. Damn shame about the loss, but I guess you're setting us up for a nailbiting final game of the regular season. That's OK with me, as long as the Leopards get into the finals. Perhaps a few of the other players need to start on the endurance improvement. So many interesting developments, I'm glad Dave has been invited together with Deon, but it's gonna be even harder on Ty. Interesting that the two recruiters considered the brat the best player of the game, the Blues must be keeping their fingers crossed that no one else cottons on to Ty. I hope they'll approach him, before he gets too upset about being ignored. A bit sad about Jim, but he's working hard and I feel there's some genuine interest in him, not only because he's gay, so I hope he gets drafted too. The part about Josiah was a nice touch. I liked the talk between Deon and Clarissa, friends first will work well for them. And all their friends will be happy to see they are dating. Somehow I think Deon's agent will be pleased too. Now all we need is for Paul to shape up and ask Deon's sister out, lol.

Ohh, I love it when Will makes plans to get back at Brad. The best thing is Brad may see him spend millions, he'll rant and rave and then be exposed at an utter fool, when most of Will's spending turns out to be quite sensible. But of course I want to see Will do some fun shopping too,

I'm still trying to work out who Benny is asking the question of, but it must be Greg right ? Busyed is so right, and I felt sorry for Miles who asked an innocent and friendly question and was naturally taken aback at the reaction. I'm glad Denny worked things out in his head and took care of Greg after their little meltdown. You really do write teen boy drama well, CG.

Yes, I'm caught up and so is the story (in relation to the short version). Now don't you dare end it too soon. I want to know all about Jonas' mysterious stranger with the blue and green eyes. Particularly after Opie's hint of Jonah living with his man's family. Also I want to know what happens if the other romances are not compatible, will Jonah see the visitors leave as they arrived?

So I wonder who ordered the cup? Maybe a fortune teller, since it probably only works once per person. A boy with wings, hmm sounds interesting. You really have to write about some of the nicer (male) visitors, please. And this is only the beginning

LOL, they were both in a foul mood, but a hot hunk cured them. When I read this line 'If you’d be so kind to open the trailer, I’d like to take a quick look at your cargo.' my dirty mind immediately translated it into If you’d be so kind to open your trousers, I’d like to take a quick look at your package. Followed by a long lick and a closer investigation.