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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter 2

    - even if you did leave out their time in bed. Please tell me Moshe did something nasty to Miah's former room mate. Although I guess he's to kind to do that, and he doesn't want to cause trouble with human authorities. Anyway, I hope Miah will let them help him - the moss idea was cool, I had to go look up mosses to find out if there were species that could live under such dry conditions. Lichens might work too, they are extemely hardy and some of them are edible. Kudos to Miah for standing up to his parents, now I must hurry on to the next chapter to hopefully see it continue.
  2. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    Why am I reading this when I'm out of likes! You'll have to have some Kitt likes for now. I love these guys, they are so perfect for each other. And Miah seems to slowly accept they honestly love him and want him. But he really needs to understand he cannot keep his emotions from being smelt by them, lol.
  3. To me it's more specific scenes in films rather than the whole film which come to mind. The final scene in Brokeback Mountain when the camera focus on the postcard and the shirt. The goodbye scene with Frodo in Grey Haven in The Return of the King. The almost final moment in the Swedish Astrid Lindgreen based Brødrene Løvehjerte ('I see the light'). (Puppilull will know what I mean with no 3. If you ever want to read or watch The Brothers Lionheart don't read the list of book-film differences on Wiki, since it has major spoilers.) Oh, and the ET scene is a classic for me too, Graeme.
  4. Timothy M.

    Chapter 32

    Now I'm depressed. Poor Deon, poor Dave, poor Jim and Ty (when they realise Ty is the one Charlton wants), poor Neil and even poor Liam. Neil doesn't seem to have taken Ty's advise of keeping the door open. But I guess it's not surprising he can't do it right now. Man, it's going to be awkward at school, but I have the feeling Liam will refuse to go on Monday. And Paul making that comment on Radio Pride is going to make things worse - although hopefully noone from Neil's school listens to it. I wish Todd had told Paul about Liam, but of course he couldn't have predicted this might come up. Tony needs to get Neil that job at the radio asap ! I wonder how Doug will feel when he realise the bullying he instigated is now the reason his best friend got his heart broken and is sliding into a severe depression? I hope he feels like a heel. I hope Ty and Todd told Paul and Ollie what was going on. Somebody needs to keep an eye on Neil. Although him being angry is better than him being depressed, I still worry about him. And now I have to wait another week to find out what will happen. Bastard
  5. Now you've made me cry. I wish you could find your Danish friend again some day. I'm sure he remembers you too. I'm glad he and his mom were nice to you, you deserved it.
  6. Damn, the redhead is taken. Oh well, plenty of fish in the sea it seems. And it's good that CJ is slowly meeting people his own age, he needs friends.
  7. Donuts I should apologize, but it was sweet and funny, I loved the idea of making you having dreams of longing. Eric bursting in on Rob may be my favorite moment so far, I'm glad you liked it too. We'll have to work on the alone time
  8. You may be right about Rob - or maybe he's putting a brave face on matters. or whatever the expresson is.I thought you might like the underwear banter, lol. yes a whole day in front of them - and us, I predict lots of chapters before the second Date Day is done.
  9. I'm out of likes right now, so you'll have to wait for that, but this was a great follow up to the first chapter. We now have two confident males seizing each other up and trying to get the upper hand. They like what they see, and so do we.
  10. I'm terribly glad you're enjoying the banter, and thank you so much for telling me so.If you check out the forum you'll see small discussions on whether Rob is straight, bisexual or perhaps just curious, or even gay. I won't be able to please all of you. But I'm enjoying the speculations and even fanning them with a few hints.
  11. You're welcome, Batman. Yeah, I want them to be four guys hanging out, but of course this is not quite possible when Eric and Nelson are so new as a couple. They will want to hold hands etc, but I'm trying to keep the sappiness down. Rob and Jas have promised to help.
  12. Thank you CG ! I'll do my very best.Why do I get the images of ice cream fights in my head when reading the first part of your review? As for Rob and dating I'm - mainly because I don't know yet.
  13. Thanks Robert, such nice compliments. I'm lucky I have a fair number of prompts to chose from, but I do cheat from time to time, when nothing fits. It's part of the fun to think up situations to go with the prompt.
  14. At the point where Rob said that, it's true he hasn't been with a guy. In fact, he's only been with Melanie. So I think he's ready to explore. Whether this includes guys remains to be seen. I'm sure various opportunities for fun and trouble will materialise in the park and the mall. Suggestions are welcome.
  15. Well, somebody hinted at the possibility of Melanie using Rob being gay as her excuse for having dumped him if he did have a fling with a guy. It went into my story notes and came out this way. She's not saying he's gay, just making his joke into a fact. But yeah, she's still a bitch.
  16. “But I never said that!” Rob objected loudly to Jasper as he opened the door. I held up a red shirt in front of me, and Eric shook his head. Discarding it I grabbed another favorite, a dark blue one with white buttons, and Jasper groaned. “Fuck, Nelson, that shirt was outdated by the time you bought it. Eric, promise me you will tear it to pieces if he ever wears it.” My boyfriend grinned and nodded, and the look in his eyes told me he enjoyed the thought of ripping my clothes off. My cock like
  17. "I want that second guy to be my dad, but this is the first time I’ve seen him, and I’m as confused as fuck." I think that sums it up extremely well. For the first time in his life - or at least after he grew up - Kendall sees a dad he might like and want to know. How sad, but also promising. Oh there will be setbacks and there's still a lot of anger and hurt to deal with, but the chance of healing is there.
  18. I notice how noone complains about a cliff hanger after the next chapter has been posted, lol. Anyway, I think Kendall's mum has had to think long and hard about why her son chose not to visit for three years and made his life far away from his parents. It's probably not easy to face your own failings as a mother and even less to admit it, so I'm suitably impressed. And Michael is certainly making up for the years where he hurt Kendall by being with all those women.
  19. I think Ischa did a pretty good job of keeping Hel calm. He's not to blame for Hel freaking out, and maybe it will help that he meets Hel's spirit form. Clothes shopping should probably wait until Hel has gained some weight.
  20. Rob and Eric's dad has been William (or Will) since chapter 14, but I'm glad you approve of him. Yes, I'm hoping the Mall can provide us with various interesting situations. Right now I'm writing the part where they're on their way.
  21. Sometimes high school reunions can bring a surprise or two. I'm glad they were both brave enough to admit to their crush. But why not stay and show everyone things are different now?
  22. Finally ! I'm so glad Gunni and Dimitri talked about this. Hopefully, Gunni will be less of a nervous wreck from now on. It was gettting sort of annoying, lol.
  23. I'm glad I managed to tickle your romantic bone once more, Gary. Hope I can keep you satisfied as the story develops.Yes, Nelson and Eric are connecting in several ways.
  24. Oh CG, you do leave the most delightful long reviews. Indeed, I could see Rob's smirk too. And I agree Jas and Rob will make a good protective team: brain and brawn. I'll do my best with the Mall chapters.
  25. You don't know how pleased I am with this compliment, Jaro. I try hard to make fun dialogue and interactions, since it's not my strong side of writing, so knowing I succeeded is a big deal.
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