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  1. Timothy M.
    Thank you, glad it worked for you too. Teen romance is so difficult to write, so I'm always when my readers like my efforts. Only Nelson gets a first person POV, everyone else is written in third person POV. I don't know why, it just happened that way.
  2. Timothy M.
    Why Caz, are you saying you approve of Rob's plan ? Well, it may work out, we shall have to see when I get that far. I got distracted in the next few chapters.
  3. Timothy M.
    LOL. I think Carlos was disappointed Rob didn't do a CJ and thump the idiot, but I decided to give Jazz a chance to shine. Glad you liked it.
  4. Timothy M.
    How could you forget Kyle and Eric and Will's broken nose? It was the incident which led to one of the most painful moments in CAP when Will once more was betrayed by someone in his Family (his Grandmaman and Claire). But at least Brad was there for Will, standing up for him - one of Brad's finer moments. If Will wants to salvage his relationship with Zach, he should stay away from Tony - hell he should stay away from him in any case. It seems to me whenever Will gets involved with Tony in any way it fucks him up - including his relationships with others. I want him to write off Tony as anything but an old acquaintance he's polite to when they meet. Sorry, but I hate Tony.
  5. Timothy M.
    yes it is. Gary isn't the only author wanting to create wonderful, slightly-larger-than-life characters.
  6. Timothy M.
    So I'm planning to get up early tomorrow to get my Leopard fix. Will we being seeing the first round of the finals? Or is there something else happening before that?
  7. Timothy M.
    YAY another book lover lol the banging of heads and does occur to me at times when writing Rob chapters. and now you're making me miss Irri, because she would be right there with you about Rob and Jazz. But you may be surprised about the redhead
  8. Timothy M.
    Well, don't expect me to always be this productive, although I have to admit your enthusiastic reviews and comments in the forum do inspire me to keep writing. All authors thrive on feedback and I'm lucky to have many GA friends responding to my stories. Anyway, I'm glad I fulfilled your expectations about why Eric did not come out to Rob earlier. It made sense to me. I would like to add that not only does Rob feel entitled to meddle in Eric's life, but he expects Eric to meddle right back. Ignoring Rob would make him unhappy, and Eric taking an interest is important. Baseball is the prime example so far.
  9. Timothy M.
    Thanks Gary, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've been having difficulties with writing Rob for a while, trying to balance the carefree, fun guy with the caring brother who appreciates Eric. I hope I managed it here.
  10. Timothy M.
    Thanks Caz, I did luck out with this chapter, all my hungry birds liked it. I'm glad you liked the crucial part of Nelson dealing with Eric's insecurities, it was important to me to get it right, so it came across as real and true.
  11. Timothy M.
    LOL. donuts twice in one day is OK with you too? Glad you don't think they are getting intimate too fast.
  12. Timothy M.
    Indeed, you have a very good memory, sir. And this was actually a Rob POV chapter (the only one so far), so we know he actually thought so and didn't just say it.
  13. Timothy M.
    Somehow I knew you'd like that scene, Caz. Hope you enjoy the sequel too.
  14. Timothy M.
    Great review, Isaac. I love how you identify the important points. The brotherly affection becoming clearer and how Eric can help Rob and not just the other way round. Rob may have ignored Eric's opinion at first, but he would have taken a closer look at Melanie rather than letting matters slide and staying in an empty relationship. I'm still not sure about Rob expressing admiration for a male ass. Is he doing it to tease, to show Eric he's cool with 'gay stuff', or does he actually appreciate male beauty? Perhaps time will tell.
  15. Timothy M.
    That is a very astute observation. Eric teasing Rob is noteworthy and signals his growing confidence and a more relaxed attitude. And Rob telling Eric he respects his opinion was important. They need to gradually become more equal as brothers and friends. The age difference still plays a role, but it will disappear eventually. Thank you for reviewing.
  16. Timothy M.
    Thanks CG, I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully, Eric is slowly working out that voicing his concerns and wishes is better than hiding them. Not only in relation to Rob, but even more so with Nelson. Communication is a must in a relationship - not all the time, but keeping quiet about important matters is stupid. I'm speaking from experience here. I'm not sure we'll ever get as far as the prom, but whatever happens, Rob is likely to do well. That boy is destined to come out on top in every situation.
  17. Timothy M.
    So simply having Rob dominating a lot of the chapter is no longer enough ? He has to be naked too? Jeez this is going to be difficult. You will have to revisit ch. 32 for your Robgasms. Did you get the joke without the footnote? I wasn't sure whether I could leave it out. But hopefully it can be ignored if unnecessary.
  18. Timothy M.
    Well, is she evil or simply not too smart and sort of uncaring about others? In any case, Rob doesn't seem to heartbroken.
  19. Timothy M.
    Thank you - I wouldn't be able to write this without your first line prompts to inspire me, so I'm delighted you approve. I was worried I'd run out, but the most recent ones have worked well. So keep them coming, please.
  20. Timothy M.
    Yes, I think you're right, LOL. I laughed so much when I wrote the start of this chapter. I'm glad you caught the painful incidence of being told to buy nice clothes. Eric and Nelson have to snatch those sweet moments together whenever they can.
  21. Timothy M.
    Oh goodie, another friend of my persuasion. How anyone expects me to think at seven in the morning will always be a mystery. Even with doughnuts
  22. Timothy M.
    Aww, thanks Caz. I'm repeating myself, but it really is a relief whenever my readers praise me for this chapter. Writing sex scenes is hard, but phone sex is fiendishly difficult.
  23. Timothy M.
    I'm glad you find them understanding, Caz. An unlocked door prone to being opened at any time works just as well, right ?
  24. Timothy M.
    Well, sometimes these things just slip out when you least expect it. Thanks for being so diligent with reviewing, it's nice to revisit old chapters and comments this way.
  25. Timothy M.
    LOL, let's hope so. You got a good Meta prompt today. Clears up a few questions - and raises more in true JAR style.
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