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DynoReads

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  1. DynoReads

    Zugzwang

    I could relate to your characters, the inner turmoil, second guessing. I'm glad the main characters worked it out to try again.
  2. DynoReads

    Chapter 1

    Great story. I like how Elliot was reminded what was really important. And how he socked it to the big guy!
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    Chapter 1

    The warning was correct, so raw. I liked the story telling, and how things gradually unfolded. I'm glad Rachel was there when Sam reached out, even if it was too late.
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    Chapter 1

    I get to leave the first review! Yeah! It was an interesting take on the theme, backup boyfriend. I wish you had gone into a little more detail on Jason's refusal. I also hope we'll see more of Greg & Angus *hint hint*
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    Chapter 1

    I loved the story, and the way the title came about. Good consolation parents!
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    Chapter 1

    Great story. I wonder though what kinds of deals Paul had to make to pull the wedding together.
  7. A man who feels invisible finds out he's important to someone.
  8. Jean Claude "Savage" Saville sang along with Alan Jackson as "I Wish I could Back Up" (1) played on the garbage truck radio. Halfway down the east side of Burled Oak Drive, a sudden movement out of the corner of his eye caught Savage's attention, and his foot slammed down on the brake pedal. Savage's fingers clenched the steering wheel as if he could stop the truck by sheer strength alone. A silent prayer on his lips, Savage helplessly watched a toddler, wearing only a diaper, running down the
  9. Happy Birthday
  10. Happy Birthday
  11. I had fun writing it, coming up with silly things the bugs would say. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
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    Resignation

    Thanks for the work you've done so far. Hopefully the current team can continue to grow the site.
  13. "Hey, Dude. Dude, wake up...dude?" "Huh?" Bill rolled over and rubbed his eyes. Music throbbed in his ears. The frat house down the street must be having another party. "Dude, you're out of toilet paper." Still half asleep Bill rolled out of bed to get the extra roll from the linen closet. Walking down the hall he thought he heard a mosquito buzzing past. Bill yawned and set the roll on the sink. "Finally some service around here." Bill thought that was a lady's voice? In his bathroom? And
  14. Let your clothing be your guide. If you are dressed up, professional appearance or Sunday go to meeting clothes, gum is inappropriate. Casual or club clothes, gum is probably ok.
  15. I do not remember what kind of mice these were, but every time I went to the zoo they would be lined up like this.
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    warning

    Thank you for reviewing my story. I think most of us hide something from ourselves, for whatever reason we justify it.
  17. Happy Birthday Adam!
  18. Happy birthday Cole, enjoy it
  19. Nice story...short tux though? Seems an odd.consequnece
  20. Happy Birthday Never
  21. I know that flowers use bright colors and/or strong scents to attract the insects and birds that pollinate them. Perhaps the monkey face is to attract monkeys? Or the pattern of dots that look like a monkey may look different to an insects eyes.
  22. Meant to say this yesterday, but life got in the way. Happy Birthday
  23. I thought Connor liked Toby as more than a friend. Where did Connor go? I hope Toby can find him.
  24. Foster posted pictures of his lady slipper orchids. They're beautiful. Then I found a picture of monkey face orchids, odd flowers. See how many of these you recognize: http://www.thefeaturedcreature.com/2013/01/6-amazing-orchids-that-look-just-like-animals.html
  25. So who is the Menace who Kissed Toby? Will Connor tell Toby how he feels? What happens to Connor? Please write more.
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