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    Falling to Pieces

    What a nasty little brother...and for some reason I think he´s wrong and Steve won´t be angry with Chris
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    Prologue

    Looking like an interesting story
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    Chapter 10

    Great chapter but much too short There´s something about their relationship that makes me wonder how long they´ll stay together. I´d love them to be together but Bernard seems still so insecure and Jack is still thinking about Randy. It´s not a bad thing to remember someone you´ve loved and who´s dead, but somehow their conversation made the whole situation seem a bit....unstable (can´t think of a better word). Just have to wait what´ll happen in the next chapter.
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    Brotherhood

    Josh´s reaction to Jacob telling about Phillip and Parker was just what I´d expect from him. Josh might seem fairly confident about himself when he is Jacob but things are different when he is back to himself and has to face Parker who has been bullying him for so long. It´s funny, but I had pictured Phillip to be a middle-aged, slightly overweight, sleazy man...and now you tell he is good-looking 20 something Wonderful chapter
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    Chapter 3

    It says that the story is complete, but it isn´t, is it? This is different and it´ll be interesting to find out how Rick will get out of the messy situation
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    Chapter 2

    Not sure who I feel more sorry for, Rick or Drew. They are probably both going to get hurt. This is a very intriguing point of view for a story.
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    Chapter 1

    And all the time I presumed Rick`s gay It´ll be interesting to see what´ll happen in the next chapter
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    Chapter 3

    Now I´m disappointed ....Colby broke up with Jake and you didn´t invite us there, had to hear about it from Brett Sam really, really should stay away from Amber...but if he doesn´t I hope you invite us too. I´m sure it´ll be a meeting worth attending Great chapter
  9. Happy Anniversary, Mark!
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    Chapter 2

    Loved the beginning with Ryan and Caleb they are so sweet together, so loving and supportive Totally understand Jacob yelling at work, he is frustrated with the situation with Colby and he needs to do something, but taking it out on his men isn´t nice Colby made me feel bad for him...though I can´t believe he is still even thinking about Amber I know it´s easy to say: move on and forget about her, you have Jacob now and he´s so much better than she ever was Looking forward reading more
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    Chapter 1

    Lovely chapter, sad but lovely Poor Jake! You aren´t letting Jake and Colby have an easy time Jake needs to talk to Colby, tell how feels about him and hopefully Colby will tell that he feels the same. One thing....don´t Brett and Sam live next door to Jake? Why they need a car to get home?
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    Chapter 5

    Lovely story I did guess who the family is, never heard of Chris Kringle before (googled it and now I know about him) but I knew Chris´d be Santa´s son
  13. 10pm and I´m going to bed as soon as I get both cat indoors, they think it´s spring and spend lots of time outdoors. Anyway, tomorrow is Monday and it´ll be back to work and that means plenty of early mornings and long days.
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    Story

    I knew it would end this way...so sad
  15. http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=uT3SBzmDxGk
  16. Cute little story
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    Prompt 303

    All my cats ever have done is scratch furniture into shreds Lovely story
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    Prompt 301

    Alyssa and her kitty ...such a sweet and funny story
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    Prologue

    I´m glad you have started to write the sequel and the prologue is very hot Looking forward reading more
  20. That´s one of my favourites here too, I love knowing when a story is complete, especially an older story, I just hate it when after reading a long story there´s no ending...
  21. I had been reading stories on Nifty for a long time when decided to google what else was there and found myself here
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    Chapter 9

    Great chapter! Their first fight poor Bernard, another thing he has no experience of There was one thing Bernard was thinking You almost ruin the guys range because you can’t cook! that made me think that after all those months living with Jack, he is still very insecure about his surroundings and doesn´t feel he is equal in their relationship. That´s something they should talk about
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    The Blizzard

    Such a lovely story
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    Introduction

    I was looking for something fun to read...and this might be the right story for that
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    My Teddy Bear

    Must agree with Daithi, they are just that.
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