OMG! Wtf, Jack??? God, I hate him so much right now! Poor Damon... Fuck Jack. And fuck his dad, and Alyssa, and even his mom. And definitely fuck Damon's mom. Jesus Christ, I just can't with this story! Too many feelings. Okay. Breathe.
This is a really, really fantastic story. It's gut-wrenching, and it hurts, and it makes me feel awful. But that's what good stories do; make you feel. So, thank you. Can't wait for more!
EDIT: Also, read Ezekiel 23. Damn! That is some awful shit, lol! I knew the Bible was full of porn (Song of Songs, anyone? That one is beautiful and loving, though; "Like an apple tree among the trees of the forest is my beloved among the young men. I delight to sit in his shade, and his fruit is sweet to my taste." "Your breasts are like two fawns, like twin fawns of a gazelle that browse among the lilies."), but I was in no way expecting that.