it’s in my chest
thick and heavy
dragging me down
pulling me taut
like passing through
a singularity
improbably large
impossibly small
gravity too great
swallows all of me
constant pressure
i’m out of time
and i want to cry
no tears left in me
but still i’m screaming
inside my mind
in this cold vacuum
silent and dark
i’m but an atom
a single quark
Excellent chapter! I really like Maya. She's a good egg. Can't wait for Ronnie to begin training! ❤️
Just one thing. I've reread this line like three times:
And... huh?
Poor Taran. Must be rough, living in your parents' shadow like that, feeling like you're never enough just being you. I can relate on a much smaller scale.
I love how accepting Ronnie's dad is. No drama. It's nice. Hope Ronnie does call that number... but then, it would be an awfully short story if he didn't.
Thanks for the updates, Myr, and for your hard work. I have a question about the guest control feature... Are you saying you'll be locking mature rated stories for members only? Or is it an opt-in kind of thing?
Ooh, those chops look amazing! Wonder if it would be doable with chicken instead... We don't eat a lot of pork at present, due to the state of pig farming in this country.