Miles Long
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More people would have likely perished if Dalen had not been with them. Exciting chapter, thank you.
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I'm sitting here wondering how Dalen's mother is wrapped up in all this. It's a good thing he has others to help support him.
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Yikes his mother is a really creepy piece of work. Nice work, thanks.
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This is my second read and while I'm not familiar with the source story, I must thank you for laying out such a complex universe with just enough to capture my attention without overwhelming me with lore I'm not ready for.
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What a nice bit of chocolate to stumble across. I had read the original story before I joined GA and I just reread so I could finally pay my overdue compliments/thoughts/observations to the author, but I was not aware of this little extra so it was a fresh read, thank you.
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Robbie would be a little jealous, but he'd get over it . Fun chapter...it's funny to think how naïve Brad is when it comes to the "hook up" scene. It is a by product of meeting your soulmate as a teenager. I'm glad JJ is bringing Rosa back into the fold. Thanks.
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What a fortuitous meeting for both characters . Thanks for the story.
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A story so good I wanted it to go on and on, thank you.
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Just the quickest yet loveliest bit I've read in a long time. Thank you.
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L. O. V. E. this story. I'm glad I wasn't drinking anything or it would have come out my nose.
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Obscure and hilarious little story.
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Informative beginning that led to a moving vignette of what might have been. Masterful and creative work. Thank you.
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Kind of an outlandish premise and while Jase and Rory are quick to forgive, I think the overall deception was a bit inconsiderate on the part of the parents. The wild scheming of the two young lovers was funny so it helps to offset my pique at the adults. Thanks for the work.
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Interesting start. The imagery in the beginning was well crafted and very compelling. Thanks for sharing the vision.
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Excellent advice that is so easily forgotten when one is dancing in the bliss of character and story creation. Thanks for the great reminder!
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Darius is like JP when it comes to advice about love and how awesome is he for coming up to support Will? Super Awesome! Alex's interest in JJ makes me uneasy because I am still not convinced that Alex isn't dodgy, and bitchy or not, JJ is really vulnerable when it comes to sex. I'm pretty disappointed in Cam; he left the impression that he was going to meet Brad and like Brad I assumed it was at the flat...technically he met the letter of the obligation, but I still find his actions a bit if a cop out. Looking forward to more, thanks.
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Thrilling chapter made even more so by the storm and Lady Elgin's peril. I wonder if George saving her life will change her attitude a bit? As much as I love George I think he is being terribly unfair to Calvert. Calvert has always craved a monogamous relationship and had to settle for being sometimes first, sometimes second and sometimes third in George's hierarchy of lovers. I get that George is hurt (rejection stings worse than wasps) and his grace has been faltering with the blows he's taken, but if he truly cared for Calvert he should try to extend the same understanding, Calvert has had to in the past. Thanks for the brilliant story; I eagerly await more.
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I'm with JJ on the driving front. Fun chapter with all the back and forth perspective. I still am not loving Alex but I will try and keep my opinion to myself . Thanks for the work.
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Bertie goodbyes are always so bitter sweet. His self absorption is understandable and even forgivable in light of the compassion he has for his family (Freddie excluded). Lovely work, thanks.
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Chartley is my third favorite of George's lovers, but I am grateful for his supporting our hero as he returns to health.
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I will forgive you this cliff hanger only because I've read this before .
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I hate this part if the story. It's a brilliant twist, but still...errrrrr!
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I would call it Byzantine like plots but honestly it's more like Escher in how convoluted these dealings are. Thanks.
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I'm looking forward to the antics that are about to ensue. Thanks.
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Fabulously rich!
