Riveting, immediate, and told with a great deal of finesse and detail. Really well done Graeme. The triggers, the breakdown, and the loss of consciousness were all portrayed seamlessly. You've done a great job up until now preparing the reader for this event. While it was traumatic, you handled it respectfully and realistically.
This isn't an easy thing to do, but you made it feel like we were there. At least I got that impression. So, thank you for your hard work. Don't worry about if you did this right. You did a superb job, truly artful and compelling. Thank you for sharing it.