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Thanks, Parker. This is not Josh's finest moment, that's for sure. As to what happened to Galen...that will be revealed next chapter. Maybe. My goal is to have Chapter 18 finished this weekend. Fingers crossed I make it!
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I really enjoyed this. I love endings where the reader has to guess what happened. Did Mahui drink or is his newfound confidence from the journey that brought him to Tlacloc? (sorry if I butchered his name). I suppose in the end it doesn't really matter as long he has found some measure of inner peace. Nice job.
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You are so right...things are rarely black and white. There's a lot going on here that will be revealed in upcoming chapters. Thanks again for the reviews
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There are lots of mistakes all around. I don't think Liam anticipated Galen and Josh's reaction to each other. The reason for Josh's actions will become clearer as you read more. Thanks for the review
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It really made my day to see all the notifications for reviews for this story. I'm so glad you're reading it and I'm glad the first chapter drew you in. Galen is exactly where he needs to be. Liam's a pretty awesome guy.
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Liam I watched Alannah as she saddled the big bay horse. He was a relatively new addition to her show string. He had been sent to the farm for training because he refused to jump, but it turned out that he wasn’t jumping because he was being abused. A groom who worked for the horse’s ‘trainer’ had contacted Alannah after the horse arrived at the farm. He showed her video of the horse being beaten after refusing to jump, and being poled when he knocked a rail down. Poling is a technique use
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I loved it, Addy. I think Christian and Steven need their own story. I want to know more about them!
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Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up (Apr 17 - Apr 23)
Valkyrie commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
It was authors who had posted chapters recently if you looked at the stories list close to the time she posted the blog. -
CSR Book Club C S R Discussion Day: Dean Warner Intrigues By Daddydavek
Valkyrie commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to read it in time for the discussion. It's on my list, though so I'll get to it eventually -
:wizard: Happy Birthday, Carlos! I hope you had an awesome day! Here's a cake for you...I found others you might like, but I don't want to get any warning points.
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I'm very afraid of what's going to happen to Colton, Bobby, and Tiffany. I have a feeling that things are going to get worse before they get better...if they do get better. I loved the conversation between Bobby and Tiffany about the name change and understanding what it's like to be trans. I'm glad that Bobby finally admitted he is gay. Maybe now he'll start to feel better about it.
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
There's a longer poem in me right now that is begging for release, and 18 and 19 are snippets of that. I think there's something holding me back from writing it...maybe not wanting to delve too deeply... we'll see how insistent it becomes and if I can get it written this week. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked them -
NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Thanks for the review, Addy and for organizing the Renga poem. I'm glad you liked this week's selection. -
NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Thanks for the in-depth review. I'm glad you liked my selection -
I love stories like these. I used to teach therapeutic horseback riding and can attest to the wonders it can achieve with both the riders and the horses. Thanks for sharing
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Thanks so much for the kind words. I really appreciate them I've lost quite a few pets over the years and have a great deal of empathy for those going through the same thing. I'm glad you liked the poem. -
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing it with us and I look forward to your next story.
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I enjoyed all of these. I'm pretty sure I own the same mirror as you... lol
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I love this selection, Addy. The first one is just plain hot . The chocolate one makes me want to go to the chocolate store down the street. lol I also really liked the last one. It was nice reading the German one too, even if I don't understand the language (thanks for the translation)
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Nice selection of poems, Tim. Your tributes to Ripley are very touching. I liked the one about planting the garden then enjoying a beer. I'm also glad I'm not the only one that finds Tinkerbell annoying... lol Nice job
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Two
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Two
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Thanks for the review. VAMP was definitely a lot of fun I love that you came up with that name. Very clever -
Poem #13 Written for Mikiesboy Loss Empty sunspot, Devoid of warmth. Cooking dinner With no fear of tripping. Silence When the doorbell rings. Hope We will meet again one day. Poem #14 Music of the Barn Rhythmic footfalls clop a beat – One two three four One two three four Light snorting breathing On the last, Head nodding on the first. Lowing bass joins in, Followed by baying howl, And clucking counterpoint. Tympanic clang of horn on metal, Signals feedi
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Who doesn't want to ride a Zamboni? Or more accurately, ride a hot hockey player on a Zamboni... I'm really enjoying this story. Onward to the next chapter...
