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You ran me through the gamut of emotions with this batch. Your poems about Ripley are so moving and brought tears to my eyes. I can really relate to the one about self-doubt. I liked the humor you injected, although I have to disagree about bees. I'm terrified of the stingy little monsters. lol Congrats on completing the month. It's a great accomplishment and I'm so glad you participated.
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Four
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Four
Thanks so much I'm glad you enjoyed my poems. It was my pleasure to start the forum and I'm thrilled that so many people participated. It was great working with you on the VAMP poem and getting to know you a little bit better. -
Poem #21 Travel My heart beats in time to the engine’s thrum In a musical pantomime. Coffee-fueled energy Drives me on As I sink into reverie. Anticipation, exhalation Mind racing with ideas That will never come to fruition Poem #22 Friday Haiku Anticipation Alarm blissfully silent Tomorrow morning Poem #23 Hyperacusis Music and conversation clash In a cacophony of chaos Difficult to discern din from dinner. Silent sanctuary, the car is welcome relief At the e
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Yup. Thanks for reading
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Thanks for the review, AC. Your support means a lot to me.
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I love your description of this story! Yes, a tangled mess indeed. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for reading and all the reviews
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Yeah, Josh was a brat and Galen is definitely in denial. There's a lot more to come!
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Josh is a complex guy with a lot of issues. Things are a bit clearer now, but there's more to come. Thanks for reading
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Thanks, Tim. Galen is trying, even if his efforts seem a bit strained. I appreciate your review.
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Thanks for the review, Puppilull. You'll get some of those answers in the next chapter.
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Thanks, Lisa! Thanks again for your awesome editing. Hopefully I'll have Ch 18 to you soon
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This is the point in the story where I figured readers would really want to go after Josh. To be fair, he did admit to making a mistake...now what he does with that revelation will remain to be seen. Liam and Alannah are pretty awesome together. I figured it was about time...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate all your support
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There is a time and place for everything...well, most things We'll see what happens with these guys and what happened to Galen. I'm hoping to get the next chapter done and through my team in the next couple of weeks, so hopefully the wait won't be too long. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I really appreciate it!
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Thank you so much, Cole. Your support means the world to me. I'm hoping to have the next chapter to you sometime this weekend. Fingers crossed!
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What tidal wave? All I see is a giant tsunami...
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He's trying... Thanks for the review
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Sorry! I'm about halfway done with the next chapter. You'll learn what happened to Galen. Maybe Would I be mean enough to post two cliffhangers in a row? Possibly. mwhahahahhahaha Thanks for your support and the review. I really appreciate it.
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Thanks It's fun re-living the beginning of the story from all your reviews. I'm glad you like it so far.
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Awww...Galen's not a prick. A bit oblivious maybe We haven't seen the last of Ethan yet.
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You'll learn more about Josh and Roger's relationship in upcoming chapters. Jody is awesome. You'll get to know him better, too. Thanks again for all the reviews!
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You'll see Thanks for reading
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Thanks, Parker. This is not Josh's finest moment, that's for sure. As to what happened to Galen...that will be revealed next chapter. Maybe. My goal is to have Chapter 18 finished this weekend. Fingers crossed I make it!
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I really enjoyed this. I love endings where the reader has to guess what happened. Did Mahui drink or is his newfound confidence from the journey that brought him to Tlacloc? (sorry if I butchered his name). I suppose in the end it doesn't really matter as long he has found some measure of inner peace. Nice job.
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You are so right...things are rarely black and white. There's a lot going on here that will be revealed in upcoming chapters. Thanks again for the reviews
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There are lots of mistakes all around. I don't think Liam anticipated Galen and Josh's reaction to each other. The reason for Josh's actions will become clearer as you read more. Thanks for the review
