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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Thanks so much, AC I credit you with pushing me to better my poetry and I really appreciate you taking the time to review them all before I posted them. I'm glad that you liked this batch. -
I agree completely. Good writing does amaze. Great job, Tim!
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Four
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Four
Thanks for the thorough review, Parker. I'm glad you liked them all. I think the Judas poem is one of my personal favorites. The sermon that inspired it was incredibly thought-provoking and had me looking at Judas in a completely different light. I'm so glad you were along for the ride this month. I am so happy that so many took up the challenge this year. It was a pleasure. -
NaPoWriMo 2016, Week 4 and 3/7
Valkyrie commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016, Week 4 and 3/7
I don't have much to say other than I loved reading your poetry. You have a true gift for it and I don't think you wrote a poem I didn't enjoy reading. Congrats on finishing the month and I never knew leap year applied to April, too. Thanks for participating. It's been a fun month. -
Such a powerful group of poems, Addy. 25 and 26 brought tears to my eyes. 27 was just plain sweet. Great idea to color code the VAMP poem. Thanks for suggesting it. It was a lot of fun. Congrats on completing the month. It was nice to have so many people participating this year.
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You ran me through the gamut of emotions with this batch. Your poems about Ripley are so moving and brought tears to my eyes. I can really relate to the one about self-doubt. I liked the humor you injected, although I have to disagree about bees. I'm terrified of the stingy little monsters. lol Congrats on completing the month. It's a great accomplishment and I'm so glad you participated.
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Four
Valkyrie commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Four
Thanks so much I'm glad you enjoyed my poems. It was my pleasure to start the forum and I'm thrilled that so many people participated. It was great working with you on the VAMP poem and getting to know you a little bit better. -
Poem #21 Travel My heart beats in time to the engine’s thrum In a musical pantomime. Coffee-fueled energy Drives me on As I sink into reverie. Anticipation, exhalation Mind racing with ideas That will never come to fruition Poem #22 Friday Haiku Anticipation Alarm blissfully silent Tomorrow morning Poem #23 Hyperacusis Music and conversation clash In a cacophony of chaos Difficult to discern din from dinner. Silent sanctuary, the car is welcome relief At the e
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Yup. Thanks for reading
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Thanks for the review, AC. Your support means a lot to me.
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I love your description of this story! Yes, a tangled mess indeed. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for reading and all the reviews
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Yeah, Josh was a brat and Galen is definitely in denial. There's a lot more to come!
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Josh is a complex guy with a lot of issues. Things are a bit clearer now, but there's more to come. Thanks for reading
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Thanks, Tim. Galen is trying, even if his efforts seem a bit strained. I appreciate your review.
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Thanks for the review, Puppilull. You'll get some of those answers in the next chapter.
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Thanks, Lisa! Thanks again for your awesome editing. Hopefully I'll have Ch 18 to you soon
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This is the point in the story where I figured readers would really want to go after Josh. To be fair, he did admit to making a mistake...now what he does with that revelation will remain to be seen. Liam and Alannah are pretty awesome together. I figured it was about time...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate all your support
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There is a time and place for everything...well, most things We'll see what happens with these guys and what happened to Galen. I'm hoping to get the next chapter done and through my team in the next couple of weeks, so hopefully the wait won't be too long. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I really appreciate it!
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Thank you so much, Cole. Your support means the world to me. I'm hoping to have the next chapter to you sometime this weekend. Fingers crossed!
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What tidal wave? All I see is a giant tsunami...
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He's trying... Thanks for the review
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Sorry! I'm about halfway done with the next chapter. You'll learn what happened to Galen. Maybe Would I be mean enough to post two cliffhangers in a row? Possibly. mwhahahahhahaha Thanks for your support and the review. I really appreciate it.
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Thanks It's fun re-living the beginning of the story from all your reviews. I'm glad you like it so far.
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Awww...Galen's not a prick. A bit oblivious maybe We haven't seen the last of Ethan yet.
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You'll learn more about Josh and Roger's relationship in upcoming chapters. Jody is awesome. You'll get to know him better, too. Thanks again for all the reviews!
