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Valkyrie

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  1. Valkyrie

    Bewitched

    Thanks for reading, LBO I appreciate the review and your support. Glad you liked it
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    Bewitched

    Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it!
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    Bewitched

    LOL Yes, the "Bewitched" theme song and Chris Issak's "Wicked Game" kept playing in my head when I was writing this. lol I'm glad you liked it, Lisa. I'm happy that I was able to surprise everyone with the ending.
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    Bewitched

    Thanks for the review, Cynus I'm glad I was able to keep you guessing and that you liked the ending.
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    Gillette

    I really like the addition to the ending. Like I said when I edited this, I can relate to Terry in a lot of ways. I'm glad you are going to write more about him. I'd love to get to know him better. Great story, Cole. Thanks for sharing it with us.
  6. I like the play on words with the antho theme and "Wiki" games. The first thing that comes to my mind when I hear "Wicked Games" is the Chris Issak song, so I enjoyed that aspect as well. I had that song playing in my head the whole time I wrote my story. lol I enjoyed these poems. Thanks for sharing with us.
  7. Yay! I look forward to reading all the stories Thank you for all your hard work, Renee. I love the banner
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    Bewitched

    "What sort of wicked game are you playing on me?” I murmured into my lover’s neck, kissing him just below his ear. His cheek muscles flexed beneath my hand, lifting into a smile that never failed to send shivers coursing through my body. “’Tis no game, my love.” “You have enchanted me as sure as any warlock.” He frowned and paused, leaving me feeling delightfully full, but aching for movement. “Don’t say such things, even in jest. If anyone heard—” My lips on his interrupted his sp
  9. After betraying his lover, Samuel is determined to make things right, no matter what the cost. They flee Oscar's captors, only to be confronted by the very truth that put them in their predicament in the first place.
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    Emergence

    Thanks for the great review, northie. It's not easy to forgive someone who's wrong you in such a horrific way, but as you said, it allows for closure. I remember when I wrote the ending that it surprised me. I hadn't planned on it and it really hit me, even as the writer, that Toby was able to forgive his abductor. Thanks for reading and I really appreciate the review
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    Garden Variety

    I loved these, Parker. You conveyed images clearly with an economy of words. It sounds like a great day and a great way to end the day Nice job.
  12. I enjoyed these. My sense of the poet is an old soul. Will your story be set in modern times? These poems evoke the sense of the past to me...like 18th or 19th century. I look forward to reading the story of the poet. Definitely intriguing.
  13. Happy Birthday!! I hope you have a great day!
  14. :hug:
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    Chapter 18

    I really enjoyed this story. I found it realistic, poignant, and moving. Thank you for sharing it with us.
  16. Write what your muse is telling you to write. If it's dark, that's just fine. We'll go along for the ride with you.
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    Breathe deep

    Very lovely, dughlas I'm so glad you decided to share your poetry.
  18. I haven't had a chance to read London and Love yet, but I've read other stories by carringtonrj and enjoyed them. Do you find that that it's the characters or the plot that drives your stories? Do you write outlines or notes when you're writing or just write as it comes to you?
  19. Speech and singing are processed in different parts of the brain, so people with severe aphasia that can't speak--or can only speak a few words--are able to sing fluently. The guy in the video reminds me of a former patient of mine that had severe aphasia and apraxia (difficulty with motor planning-so he know what to say, but can't physically say it) of speech. He couldn't say any words volitionally, but could swear just fine. lol He could also sing "happy birthday" perfectly fluently. Thank you for sharing this. It brought tears to my eyes. I am going to share with my speech therapist colleagues.
  20. I scored 22. I couldn't see the difference on the last grid to save my life. lol
  21. Welcome to the purple, Albert! I'm a huge fan of Albert's writing. This promotion is very well-deserved. Congratulations! :D
  22. Interesting start. You've set the scene nicely and given us a good glimpse into David. I'm curious to see Mike's side of the story. He already seems distant, just from the text exchange. I look forward to what's next.
  23. I started this story, but don't think I finished it. I'm not sure why, since I did enjoy it. I'll be sure to continue reading where I left off.
  24. I like both formats for Weekly Wrap-Up. It's nice to read the commentary about the week, but the quotes look like. I'm really looking forward to reading the Summer Anthology stories. I struggled with the theme, so it will be interesting to read others' interpretations.
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