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Valkyrie

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  1. I enjoyed all of these, Parker. It's interesting to see how you interpreted the prompts. Glad you're on board and I look forward to week 2!
  2. Valkyrie

    Days 1 to 7

    Such a variety... I love it! You evoked a lot of different emotions - hunger, laughter, sadness. I look forward to week two!
  3. Poem #1: April Fools Gray skies menace green shoots clawing like zombie fingers through thawing earth. White flakes attempt to impede their progress – not succeeding as the laughing tendrils reach for the hidden sun. Poem #2: Three Reasons for Eating Ice Cream in Winter Cold headache, hot shower. Creamy sweetness melting over hot apples in a flaky nest. Blanketed by the fireplace like hot fudge cascading over vanilla mountains. Poem #3: Sleep-addled brain struggles to fin
  4. Thank you so much, Lisa
  5. Thank you so much for the kind words, Dark. I'm glad you enjoyed The Old Ways so much. I'm thrilled to be included in this blog. It's one of my favorite features and I look forward to reading the authors' responses every month. I've read both Second Shot and Gemini and enjoyed both of them. It's nice getting some further insight from both authors. I can relate to a lot of what you've been through, Dark. I'm so glad you've found a measure of peace.
  6. Congrats on the feature, DDK! I'll be sure to check the story out before the discussion day.
  7. :wizard: Happy Birthday!!! I hope your day is as awesome as you are! (Did you wish for snow on your birthday? ) Here's a book cake for you. Plenty to read! And eat! lol
  8. Nice job, Tim. I could really relate to the first one. The one about the family portrait brought tears to my eyes. Well done. I look forward to what else you come up with.
  9. Love it Glad you decided to participate!
  10. Congrats!
  11. What an amazing story! http://blogs.timesofisrael.com/miracle-on-dan-bus-4/
  12. OMG I used to love "Renegade"! lol Lorenzo Llamas... I grew up in the '80s - the decade of cheesy TV shows. lol "Mama's Family" comes to mind... "Soap"... There are tons of others, but can't think of them right now.
  13. Thanks for the review I'm glad you liked it.
  14. I think I have to agree with Cole about liking "Line of Sight" best. I enjoyed all three stories, but there was something about the two main characters that made this story special. I can relate to being shy and not liking confrontation. I'm a lot better than I used to be, but still mainly prefer keeping to myself and get very anxious when meeting new people. I also have a lot of trouble focusing. I'm very easily distracted and it can make it difficult to actually get any writing done. I've seen other authors respond that they need music or the tv on or something like that in order to write. I'm the opposite in that I need peace and quiet. What type of environment do you like to write in? Do you find it easier to write when you have a deadline, such as for the anthologies?
  15. I really enjoyed this. Nice take on the prompt.
  16. Thanks so much I'm glad you liked it.
  17. What a remarkable young man. http://www.wfaa.com/features/surprise-of-a-lifetime-grandson-pays-off-grandparents-mortgage/103698965
  18. I did worse than the teenagers! lol Give me an '80s music quiz and I'll probably know them all. lol I've always been more into classic rock and blues than pop, though. I was never a big fan of '90s music.
  19. Thanks, AC! I'm glad you liked it. We don't know what the writing on the doors was. I think the colors/paintings were a bit of a foil, although I envisioned one leading to life and one to the afterlife. I think which door depends on the individual. I appreciate the review and look forward to the next prompt
  20. Rudy pressed the down button on the wall panel repeatedly, scowling at the numbers above the elevator doors. The arrow was on the lit-up two. He was on the top floor. The twentieth. He shoved his hands into the pockets of his tattered jeans and paced back and forth, muttering to himself. So much for his little ‘adventure’. He’d have to have a word with the behemoth outside. Rudy pulled the crumpled business card out of his pocket and stared at it. The Green Door were the only words impri
  21. I have an idea churning for the O. Henry prompt. We'll see if I can get it written along with all the other ideas clamoring for release. lol
  22. My story The Old Ways won third place in the Secret Santa story contest in December. My prize was a free month of Premium. I am more than happy to pay for a subscription, though. This site has given so much to me, it's one way I can give back.
  23. Valkyrie

    Epitome

    Wise yogurt Great quote. I love Whitman. I try to embrace the same philosophy in my own writing. Thanks for sharing
  24. Valkyrie

    Chapter 12

    There's a couple of places where you refer to Donnie as "Tommy" and in the scene where they're eating dinner, you refer to Casey's father as talking basketball with Rodney and Curtis, but Curtis never sat at the table - he went right to his room to do his 'history report'. I'm glad that Casey's father finally talked to him about why he left. It seems they have more in common than they think. I hope Casey will take the olive branch that's been offered. I really like Shade. I think that taking that drama class will be a really good thing for Casey.
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