The size of your canvas keeps increasing, and what the characters represent are becoming clearer, it's almost breathtaking.
Felicity and Eric are like twins, people of a similar age, whose true selves, joy, and passions were repressed by society, family and convention. Each is now slowly stepping out from the shadows to the sunshine.
Ben, who seemed like a throwaway character at the start of the chapter, another layer to your exploration of modern gay life: the young queer who refuses to be put in a box (gay, straight, etc.), who isn't hesitant to let you know, and who is not afraid to stand up to bullies. (“Yeah, I'm queer. Not that it's any of your fucking business. For your information, I'm pan-sexual. You know, willing to take anyone and everyone on their merits.”) Ben is the opposite end of the pendulum from Eric.