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Wow! What a way to be confused!!! Creek is just coming through a period of grief. Marvin and Dailin are giving him attention that he needs desperately. Marvin does have the hots for him. Dailin seems confused as to his real feelings. And Creek is totally confused. Let's see how this conversation turns out!
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In it for the long haul
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in In it for the long haul
Vince has "thawed" immensely from the uptight and cold person we first met thanks to Peter and to Gray! His enthusiasm demonstrated to Dawn is proof of that! Gray and Matt are developing their own way at their own comfortable pace. Very nice chapter!!! -
Nature Reserve – 24 December
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Nature Reserve – 24 December
Might there be a possible dalliance with a threesome here too? Russ is really showing his warmer side. -
And the self-reflection is happening on Creek's part... Another step closer to seeing if Marvin and he will eventually be together....
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Jer has found "family" in Peter and Marty. This is what chosen family is like as we grow into adulthood. What a beautiful chapter!
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I am neither team Marvin or team Dailin yet. Dailin hasn't intrigued me yet as a firm possibility, but more of an interest. I could be missing something. Marvin and Creek are really building a friendship - and that gives me a hopeful possibility.
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Baking day – 23 December
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Baking day – 23 December
Russ is definitely becoming much warmer as a human! We get a good insight as to how and why he became that way from his natal family's interactions. One can feel the warmth he has for Toby in the phone/video call. That was also projected in his dealings with his nephews. Con and Lisa were pleasantly surprised at the accomplishments of their sons! -
I love how this family takes care of each other! I hope we get to see on to the next generations....
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Well...Nate is off to his next chapter of his life but with the experience of what could be his life after his tour of duty with the Army. He will bring back skills which will be useful to the community but to a truly accepting and welcoming community. Beautiful ending!
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What a lovely story of friendship, love, idealism, acceptance and self-discovery. Is it possible for people to live in a true commune-type community? Kandanga Falls is just that - what is similar to what is described by Thoreau among other authors? It seems so here. It is one which is warm yet challenging traditional beliefs about how life should be.
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Poochie and Dane - The Car Ride Home
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Poochie and Dane - The Car Ride Home
I enjoy the stories you've created about talking furniture and now "talking" pets! Very clever! -
The memory chapters are giving us deeper insight into what is happening in the main story. Brad wanted to speak with Lyn privately but still couldn't get to the deeper level of his feelings. The wedding is nothing more than Brad's fulfilling his family's expectations and he feels trapped into it. That Lyn is not trapped into the same expectations as Brad and Alexander does not mean that he is not a victim of expectations - however, the difference is that he is the one creating those expectations and works toward them.
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Not at all surprising for someone who has been emotionally abused for so many years! Marvin has the opportunity now to develop a healthy relationship with Creek, whether it turns into a serious relationship including sex or not. Dailan brings lightness and joy into Creek's life, but I am not sure of there being an equal relationship rather than an older-younger one. I could well be wrong. Creek's move to living on his own with Forest may well be a long time off, but he needs to get away from his smothering, yet well meaning, mother!
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Private view & public spectacle
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Private view & public spectacle
I really understand cranky Gray: he's more of an introvert, except in situations where he's surrounded by people he knows or in a one-one situation. Thus, he appears gruff when he really is protecting self. -
Will friendship turn into something more? Both guys seem very interested, charming and real!
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Yes, health issues are very present with the family, but I admire how they work through them. They keep life as normal as possible and work around them supported by intense love!
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Considering they raised all their sons from birth, they would have to be at least in their 50's I would think.
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A bit of a shock – 22 December
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A bit of a shock – 22 December
Now on to the wonderful insights into Russ, his family, and his consideration of his relationship with Brian, Gordon and Toby. I am most interested in seeing where this goes! -
A bit of a shock – 22 December
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A bit of a shock – 22 December
With such a superb vocabulary, I thought this statement was made "tongue-in-cheek"... Admitting my ignorance of the etymology of the spelling of various words used by both English and American vocabularies, I have no idea how the difference in spellings have occurred, but do know they exist through my reading and learning from various authors, including yourself, @Robert Hugill. I thank you for the continuing education you offer. -
I love how the ordinary becomes special in that the Philpotts are finally growing out of the cages that were their lives before Gray arrived and became one of the catalysts for change.
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I have loved every chapter in this volume of the adventures of Peter and Marty! Hint: I expect to see another volume!!!
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A razor blade stuck into a crack wouldn't cut too deep to begin with, but always safe rather than sorry in getting it checked. It was pure "luck" that Michael turned on that exact spot, as hoped for by the perpetrator. Still, very poor sportsmanship. That the event will allow timings done at another time is admirable on their part. Michael's response to the doctor was perfect! And the doctor's reply was equally good! Good writing!
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It appears that there are two people interested in Creek. Getting interesting!
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I have never seen so many similes and metaphors in any story, but each was needed to complete the poetry made prose! What powerful writing, wringing emotion with every paragraph, teaching with grace, and filled with unconditional love. Each character was rich in themselves, but Daisy, Jackson, Blake and Cash stand out in the crowd of what a true village is. Thanks for sharing such an amazing talent, @CasualWanderer82.
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It's so good to be back into the Devlin-Major world once again. It is especially wonderful for the kids to visit their grandparents. That house for two people is amazing, but filled with love! Now to experience Scotland once again! I echo the sentiments about patience - the story is worth it! Take care. It will all work out!
