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    As noted by @Seraph28, Gray is making wonderful progress in his social evolution. Peter and Vince are very comfortable together. Sandra is a very down-to-earth woman with few filters. I wonder if we'll find out what her issue is with Peter.
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    A very interesting story about two main characters and their path to unveiling their identities not only to each other, but to themselves. The journey involves deceit, getting caught up in a "reality" show and finally being able to reunite a family. It is a worthwhile read not only because of the story, but because of the wonderful writing of @Laura S. Fox.
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    Chapter 20

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 20

    A Hawaiian pizza is good if one can overcome their limited view of what is "proper" on a pizza - just as what is "proper" for relationships. I'm sorry Dallas' dad can't open his mind and heart more. He knows what is "proper" - at least in his worldview. He's losing a family over his narrowmindedness!
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    Ed has to be in school or his bail will be revoked, but there are so many options that should be taken to keep him safe from bullying and teasing. However, this is me as a former school counselor speaking and having arranged situations for many students before. It boggles my mind that the court would not seek educational arrangements - but then, this is not the story. Thus, let's see how Ed is handled at trial. George is young and acting both foolishly and admirably! I hope he keeps his brain in charge (the one in the big head, that is).
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    Matthew continues to amaze me with his thoughtful approach to everything! Rory was the catalyst for the truth finally being brought forth, but Gavin stepped up to be fully honest too. His worries about Matthew were real to him, but he did face the tough choice of being honest - which is where Matthew has learned the same value!!
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    Chapter 19

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 19

    I fully agree with you on this but I didn't say a formal organization was formed, only that an alliance was informally begun. Still, you are correct about Dallas' role in gaining acceptance among the students. Even though the Catholic church apparently has changed attitude toward recognizing gays as persons but not their intimate relationships, there is still too much homophobia still present.
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    Chapter 19

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Without calling it as such, a gay-straight alliance has formed! That no one even looked (other than Timmy) when Dallas and JJ entered class shows a great change in atmosphere! Callum is a wonderful friend and protector of Zach and Alex. Lovely chapter!
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    Not the end of summer I experience in Florida, but did when I lived in West Virginia and Massachusetts. It is lovely and brought back wonderful memories - but also a reminder to me of how much I dislike cold weather! I can appreciate the beauty of it in a picture, but I have no desire to experience snow, ice, sleet, and very cold air blowing on me ever again!
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    As for Ed going to school - big mistake. That is only leading to trouble. That should have been addressed so that he would receive home education which most school districts provide especially to students who can't attend due to health issues.
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    The judge seems very thoughtful and fair. I'm eager to see what the psychiatrist has to say. I agree with @centexhairysub: George does seem to be at least teasing Cal. That is not fair to Cal!
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    I don't like Pink Towers: not the style of either Vince or Gray. They are not the flamboyant type (Jacob, on the other hand, would fit that description!). Gray is developing the confidence that was denied him in his early life of neglect by his parents. I don't give his father credit for bringing Vince and Gray closer: I do believe this is happening via the choices they are both making. Matt is growing in his own confidence too and at his own pace. Gray is very respectful of his pacing. This was a very warm and delightful chapter!
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    Chapter 18

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 18

    So much happened in this chapter: Zack opening up, the surprise backing of Dallas' teammates for both of them, Dallas and JJ finally enjoying a much more intimate relationship...now let's see what the exclamation in the final sentence is all about!
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    What Lyn is taking for disdain is, I believe, Alexander's frustration at not having the level of feeling from Lyn that Lyn has for Brad. And, what's worse, he is unable to allow himself to appear so vulnerable as to say so! This does set the scene for what happens at the wedding later on.
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    Chapter 10

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Life is presenting Kieran and Charlie with the beginning of a new chapter. It will be interesting to see what becomes with Patrick.
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    It seems time for Jason and Gavin to confront Gavin's "fear" of telling Matthew the true nature of their relationship. I do believe Matthew already suspects what the relationship is and has no problem with it. He is far more accepting and understanding than Gavin realizes. Rory is finding great support in his friends, even though they outed him publicly. So far, he doesn't appear to be getting any negative response in school.
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    Ed is quite adept at legal terminology! He will need a psychological examination before his memory lapse can be explained. George and Callum striking up a friendship is good for both! M-L is still up to her conniving behavior. I'm truly shocked that her aunt seems to be so blind to her after all she said to her in the doctor's office! She can't figure out that allowing M-L to go out with a boy will end up with her having sex? Inconsistent in my view!
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    I really like how this story turned out. Hearst has truly matured and gained personal strength. His standing up to Wen is proof to that. Jamie has also tamed his wilder ways! Great story @Laura S. Fox!
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    Chapter 17

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 17

    The proverbial excrement is about to hit a fan! I do hope it turns out in a positive manner for everyone concerned, even Timmy!
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    Scott certainly has opened up his horizons in the last 24 hours! Alina is quite the charmer!
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    Jacob arrives

    pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Jacob arrives

    What a delightfully normal family situation is emerging. All of the players at Philpott Towers are truly becoming a cohesive group. Gray finds the assistance provided by Vince and Freddie keeps him organized and able to express himself better in his press releases.
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    Chapter 16

    pvtguy commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 16

    I'm not sure a law was broken in the text, but it is definitely a threat to be taken seriously and could be used to show a pattern of behavior should things escalate on Timmy's part. I like that new friends are being made! They are finding and forming a peer group who is accepting and supportive of each other. Additionally, I am so appreciative of the supportive parents!!
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    Ok...M-L is a nymphomaniac with no conscience! Todd had a good time (including a live show to fuel his fantasy. And Ed seems to be exhibiting multiple-personality - disorder. Wow!
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    Prologue

    pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Prologue

    I do believe it was left in the package....
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    Scott seems thinking with the wrong head! Sudden lust does not translate necessarily to a good relationship. Lots of red flags raised here!
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    Prologue

    pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Prologue

    I would say that definitely qualifies as a taco supreme, extra meat....
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