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We learned of someone in the last chapter, who did the same movements as Gabriel as young in connection with the martials arts. Someone who knew who he was and is. Could it be this person that are after him now? 🤔 Somehow I also can't help thinking that Tom is somehow involved. And not in a good way....
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All the pretty boys as emo's 😁 😂 ohhh yeahhh... nice that Luke and Simon finally sees Blake as he really are.
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Chapter 5 - Long Night
heifel35 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Long Night
Rowan's "well placed" remarks is taking hold in both Christian and Henry. It's really sad that they are not more secure in each other, because they have been together for a number of years by now. And never unsure of their love... until Rowan 😔 -
Nick.... never realised how close to a predator he actually was.. But good that Rick was honest about what a scumbag Cochran is. And I would like to hear Adams version of gay birds and bees 😂😅
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Well that was one way to get rid of Russia as well 😅 The game is on, and the little orange man are finally scared because somebody is a "bigger bully" than him 💪💪💪
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Joel sure has balls the size of baseballs 😂 loved it!
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I have an idea about who "Smith" is.. And if it's true then we are talking a very high level persona 😳
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In my mind 😅
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Yep, the second one would be me 😂😂
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Yes, please 🙏
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So Enrico doesn't seem to know about the explosion? Or am I in the wrong here? 🤔
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Chapter 5 - Sam and Ben [split POV]
heifel35 commented on JJQuinn's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Sam and Ben [split POV]
Happy memories for both men with this beautiful wedding. Loved that Sam got to say what he wanted, without 'chickening' out. Just another testament to how good Ben has been for him. I actually felt sad for Max a few times, and most during Sam's own revelation about how much Max actually has loved him for as long as they have known each other. And loved Sam's family like his own. Max did a good job with his Bestman speech. Nothing to corny or bringing up to much from their past. I would love to read a chapter from Sofias pov in regards to her relationship with A.J. Do they figure it out? Will they get their HEA? They sure as h... deserve it. Sofia needs to be loved for the amazing woman she is, and A.J. adores her. -
Looking forward to hear from Max, Roman, Tara and Ben. 😀
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I had a feeling about Brandon being a part of this, just to punish his dad. He has a darkness inside of him. Possible brought to life, when Nicholas belted him. And Tom's sinister mind gave him his outlet 🥹
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Hmmm... Drew did hit his head while playing basketball.. Hope it's not anything related to that 🤞
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Wow!!! I had a feeling it could be Todd who was the killer, but the way he killed nearly all his family, was just insane. Poor Killian has to live live with having killed Todd, but I hope some much needed therapy can "do the trick". I feel very sorry for Jake who's lost all in one cruel night.
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That's what music can do to you 😅 (One thing to correct in this chapter is mixing up the names when Zach falls asleep on Thomas' shoulder 😉)
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I can't believe Maks missed Aleks first concert. Forgivness won't come easy...
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Kage 🎯... (In danish it means cake by the way 😂 just had to let you know)
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I'm afraid my guess would be either Silas or Rosalie. Maybe both.. They've both lived very full lives and Caleb saw how they both moved with difficulty and maybe even a little pain. All the others are just too young.. and you can't be that evil, can you, Kbois????????!!
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Sounds like The Burn is either an old enemy or friend of Codys. And somehow knows a lot about Zaf and his state of mind... 🤔🤔
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The heat between those two.. 😅 😍 But a well hidden secret in smalltown USA and then Sawyer on the other side can only bring some kind of heartache for one of them..... or..??
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Them wee babies... a good idea to get them to talk to a professionel. They are clearly still quite traumatized about mommys death. I hope for a speedy recovery for you 😷
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Wish I could give more than 5 stars to this amazing story. It's the kind of story, that you don't really want to end. Laughter, tears, happiness and anger, it's all there. Mrs. G has an engaging way of telling her stories that just makes us readers come back again and again. Jay and Loe are the ultimate couple who brings us out on the edge of the seat and back again. Everyone around them brings the story to life, making you feel like a part of the family. Just read it, allready 😀👩💻
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First of all I love this story. But I'm honestly a little confused about the timeline in these last 2 chapters. They still talk about the assult where Jamie hurt his ribs and Ben learns about Jamies black belts and Mason's bullying... but somehow they have 3 kids now.. Where did they come from? Am I missing something? 🤔
