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Wish I could give more than 5 stars to this amazing story. It's the kind of story, that you don't really want to end. Laughter, tears, happiness and anger, it's all there. Mrs. G has an engaging way of telling her stories that just makes us readers come back again and again. Jay and Loe are the ultimate couple who brings us out on the edge of the seat and back again. Everyone around them brings the story to life, making you feel like a part of the family. Just read it, allready 😀👩💻
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First of all I love this story. But I'm honestly a little confused about the timeline in these last 2 chapters. They still talk about the assult where Jamie hurt his ribs and Ben learns about Jamies black belts and Mason's bullying... but somehow they have 3 kids now.. Where did they come from? Am I missing something? 🤔
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Cj plays a dangerous game....
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I keep wondering if anybody ever found J.J.'s father's body? And has it been mentioned if there is a case with the police? I feel sorry for Shaun for loosing his dad and I know he's lashing out, but blaming J.J. is not the answer.
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I hope Adrians mom is still alive. But if the way he behaved is a warning, my guess is she's in the final stage, I'm affraid. Poor Adrian going through it alone 😭
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Parental Blind Corners
heifel35 commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Parental Blind Corners
I feel the need to point out the mix-up with their names. It confused me a bit. I hope Jennie makes Cody tell her the truth about what happened between the boys. -
Wasn't James Deans uncle? I've noticed that you haven written brother in the last two chapters. So maybe you can clear that up? 🤔 🙂
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I wish both of them would be brave and just be honest for once. Nathans dad doesn't approve of him.. how much more obvious does it get?
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Hunter is a very damage boy with a very troubled past. A dad in jail, a psychotic mom and a dead twin. Poor guy!! 😭 I hope he survives and will get some help. Taylor can not loose his whole family.
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Am so happy Ethan is back home.
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Poor kid 😢 Is there something going on with Belle?
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If You Go Down to the Woods Today
heifel35 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in If You Go Down to the Woods Today
It would be best if Marcus and Rodney found the boys camp instead and have them "dissapear in the night" before Christopher and the monsters attack them. -
Becoming One with the Bear
heifel35 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in Becoming One with the Bear
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I sure hope they all survive. 🤞🤞🤞
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I really hope that Elsie can help Ethan so he can start to heal and relax a bit more. And that everything surrounding Michael will be okay. Ethan needs to find his peace 🙂
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It seems that Connor in his head had allready left for Ireland with Jason. He was so sure he would come with him. But Connor should have realished that for Jason to just up and leave when his dad just came home from hospital, would'nt be a so easy. I hope he's mature enough to at least say goodbye to Jason, but maybe not...
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I sure hope Dale is out to his dad.. can't remember if it has been mentioned?..
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Ethan not being able to turn of his power can't be a good thing. Something is fighting back. I sure hope both Lackie and Brandon will be allright. I like the way the guys tried to bond with Brandon. And absolutely loved the Kardasian line🤣😂
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I still think Syl is a b.... all she does is namedropping and makes Ed feel lousy. Poor kid!
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Men. They are un-understandable
heifel35 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Sounds like Matt is growing up and realise he needs to talk to Seamus about the summer, where he should live and actually ask Seamus what he thinks and wants.- 37 comments
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Like the story. And the fact that the danish you write, has gotten so much better than the early chapters. 🙂 But I just have to point out a few danish mistakes as a dane myself.. I would say Ditley must be Ditlev. Thats the danish/norwegian spelling. And hyalros is hvalros 🙂
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I'm from Denmark, and have to ask what is 1893? Tried google but it only came up with a footballclub... 🤔 no matter what..remember it is actually pretty cold here right now.
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I really don't like Syl. The namecalling has been going on since Edvard was little and it is all he believes of himself. Poor kid!!
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I don't think we got to know Edvards IQ. He believes it to be 73, but the new tests must have been higher, taken in consideration the comment from E3.. 🤔🤔 Diagnosis confirmed yes, but not his intelligens, I Think..
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I'm really curious about what you do with a dog (Rascal) on a boat when he "needs the toilet"? I have wondered about it for some time, and just have to ask 😂🤔🤦♀️
