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Chapter 104 The End of the Rainbow
heifel35 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 104 The End of the Rainbow
I think Nathan somehow knows about Robbie and Alex. And he certainly knows about what kind of relationship Robbie had with Tom. I´m afraid he will use that against Robbie one way or the other. Can´t say I have a lot of love in regards of Nathan. He simply annoys me!! -
You made me cry!! 😭The emotions in this chapter takes my breath away. I hope Declan can live up to his words. Bailey really needs his help in getting better. And then I hope Bailey soon realises that his mother needs Daniel as Bailey needs Declan. She needs the comfort in Daniels arms as well as Bailey does. Maybe Declan will be the one to make Bailey see that. And get mother and son to actually talk about the loss of husband and father. Love the story! And the roommates makes me laugh 😄
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Break Ups and First Dates
heifel35 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Break Ups and First Dates
I wonder if Mark will be Oliver´s "Teddy"?? He certainly needs that friend who will have his back when school and classmates are being unfair. Love that Oliver sees Teddy as "his hero". And Ryder is a welcoming part of Olivers confused teenage world. He just gets him!! -
Noooooo! You can't just leave us like this!!! Not another cliffhanger. Please write super fast..... 😧😉
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Please correct the first paragraf. You keep calling Gene for Allen.. So confusing. I really like this story. I had high hopes for Gene admitting his feelings for Joey to Star. But no....
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Hmm.. why do I have the feeling that Rachel will be Antons new girlfriend??
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The best kind of family is the one that chooses you and the one that loves you unconditionally. So happy Joey finally have found his 😍 And gets to be just.... happy!!!
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Talk about being the bigger man! ☺ And I like that Joey somehow trust Gene enough to tell him about his past, considering how hard it has been for him to open up to others about his uncle and his dad and living conditions. Love the story.. ☺
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I wonder why Anton didn't jump in the car/plane to go see his grandfather if he nearly died in the accident. I miss some kind of deeper emotions from him. I know he cried when Anita told him about his mothers death, but other than that he's not showing any emotions. The boy is only 17 but going om 50.. ☺
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Hoping to see some love between Anton and Simon... 😃
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I just love this story. But my guess is that Jake is about to tell Andrew about the girl in the picture. And that he's in the closet too... maybe..
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Simply beautiful ☺
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You made me cry. Must have been a difficult chapter to write. May love always be with in your heart.
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Good start ☺
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Goodbye to your Daniel. My condolences.
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Sounds like a truely beautiful life You had together. My deepest condolences. May your love rest in peace ❤
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You Can't Always Get What You Want
heifel35 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in You Can't Always Get What You Want
I like Dustin and Billy. And an so sorry for Dustin and his homelife. Wish Billy would just talk to his mom and maybe Dustin could come and live with them. I don't really like Brett. His temper and mood swings.. I would long since have dumped him. The drugs and all the lying... ? -
Poor Anakin! 3 months without a sign of life from the love of your life is so hard.I hope Tina get thrown in jail and the key will be missing. Crazy psycho bitch! Love the story, wish you would update more often. ☺
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I'm with Graeme on this about the ending. Leaving us hanging like that... ;-) Can't wait to "hear" what Josh will tell Ethan. And I keep wondering what's bothering Ethan. The boys are taking quite the risk with this weekend- swap. Hope they don't get found out. Like your writing style. It's lively and easy to follow. Keep up the good work :-)
