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Caz Pedroso
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I loved this story. I came across it in a random search when I was looking for something new. Once I'd caught up to the then current chapter I was always keeping an eye out for the next one and pouncing on it as soon as it appeared. The characters really drew me in and I found myself really rooting for them and their mating. A wonderfully written story that will keep the reader on the edge of their seat and reading until they reach the equally wonderful ending.
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A wonderful, emotional short story. It has action, love, tears, and a wonderful unexpected ending.
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I've read this story several times and only just realised I haven't commented on it I love the emotion that is packed in to so few words. And of course the twist at the end is beautiful. A wonderful piece
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Kitryn clenched his fists and pushed his rising anger down, hard. He spoke as calmly as he could so as not to scare Fran. “Fran, can you tell us anything else about what’s happening? Every little thing helps.” Fran frowned hard and seemed to be trying to concentrate on something. “She think I should be hers. She had papa first. Mama took him. She got sent away. She got more magic now. Papa gone so she want me.” “Cheryl!” Meg interrupted and Simon and Kitryn swung their attention to h
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Great ending, Gary Maybe we could revisit for the wedding ?? Pleeeease
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Welcome to GA Larry
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Chapter 19 - A new beginning
Caz Pedroso commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 19 - A new beginning
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That is usually a good rule for almost anywhere on GA. Also, don't drink anything unless you want to end up with a wet keyboard Worse? Or hotter? A great chapter as always. It was great to see another side to Viktor and to see him find his soulmate, I think Farshael will keep him in line from now on.
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Yep, very Hopefully all will be revealed soon...but, my characters aren't known for being forthcoming very quickly. Thanks for reading and commenting
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Chapter 11 Missing Pieces
Caz Pedroso commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Missing Pieces
I'm glad that last declaration had the effect it did. I'm also glad Jimmy took it at true and rush around the confirm it in person. Although, I do think there will be many bumps in their journey and Drake will need to get help to deal with his past properly so it can't affect his future in any way. As always a great chapter, Gary. -
Loved it Sweet, Cute, funny and Sexy all rolled into one short story. Of course, the ending will leave the reader wanting to know what happens next and I think the pitchforks will come out if Tim doesn't deliver
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This short scene/tale has a lot of emotion packed into only a few words. You get to hear every thought running through the MC's painfilled brain as he makes the decision whether to head for the light or the dark. The ending left me breathing a sigh of relief. A great read
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I can't believe i haven't commented on this before. Although, looking at the date and year, It was in my early years and i wasn't as comfortable commenting as i am now. This was great, Gary. The way you built the tension until the last moment. Very well done
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An add-on to my first comment - I would love to see a short scene sometime of Blake introducing Ryan to his parents as his boyfriend I can just see his mum hitting the deck in a dead faint at what it could mean for the family reputation and the other kids' careers.
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Stepping Through the Mirror
Caz Pedroso reviewed Headstall's story in 2016 - Winter - Rewind: Pre-2016 Themes
The joy of being the odd one out, even to your family. I really felt for Blake, his mum comes across as an airhead, and his father as only interested in 'manly' sports. I can't blame Blake for his reaction to Ryan at first. I'm glad when Blake finally gets his head out of his...um...bottom...and looks at what is right in front of him. A great Short.-
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Boxed In: A Christmas Story
Caz Pedroso reviewed Headstall's story in 2016 - Winter - Rewind: Pre-2016 Themes
Oh, the joys of misunderstandings Clint wants to talk to Rory but doesn't know what to say, and Rory thinks Clint's silence means Clint doesn't like him, mostly because he's gay. When the truth is revealed the men are left astounded by how wrong their assumptions about each other were. As usual an entertaining read-
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This is a magical tale of love winning in the end. The use of Santa bringing the men together is wonderful and just adds to the Christmas feel of the story. A heartwarming well-written read.
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That's nothing, I've fallen off the bed at the wrong moment That was humiliating and painful, Mark still brings it up occasionally Here's to having something to laugh over 🍺
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An intriguing tale with twists that keep the reader interested all the way through. There are a couple of characters I wanted to ensure saw the errors of their ways (as painfully as possible) but otherwise, the MCs were adorably sweet in their own ways. A wonderful short story.
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This tale s a perfect blend of past and present. The memories the MCs share of their lost loves, and how those memories and experiences make them the men they are now. Another well written great short from a great author
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A sweet third installment to the Watcher series. Saying goodbye to the past doesn't mean you have to forget it, it just means you are making a new future. This has a few laughs in it (cramps at the wrong time ) and has a real feel good feeling to it.
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I had to laugh at the image of one of them getting kicked off the bed due to cramp I could almost imagine that happening as i read it. A very sweet addition to the watcher series, and a good example of how the old and the new can do not have to be separated but can blend together.
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So sweet Wonderful to be reminded that just because you've loved before, does not mean you can't love a second time and just as strong.
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Hmmm, so when will Jany break Mabry Wardell and his co-conspirators into small pieces? Another great chapter
