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  1. Caz Pedroso
    Thanks Val I was surprised when i found the fact about fish, but also glad i checked Thanks for reading and commenting
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    Wrong Footed

    Caz Pedroso commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Wrong Footed

    It is great to hear about Faris and James again, I love reading about their antics. A great short timmie
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    Crack Someone Up

    Caz Pedroso commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Crack Someone Up

    A great take on the prompt and a good read
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    Wonderful...I loved the twist at the end, and the best thing is you don't see it coming.
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    All at sea

    Caz Pedroso commented on Puppilull's story chapter in All at sea

    Loved it I hope the cop uses his time as a translator wisely
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    A barter system sounds better than slaving for hours for barely enough money to pay rent and other bills. So, where do I sign up for this agency? I have office experience A great fun short Val
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    A wonderful short and a great use of the idiom.
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    A wonderful short, that will make you laugh and leave you wanting more. The world created is fun and imaginative. The competition that grows with the story is well done and will leave you wanting to know who will do what, to whom next.
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    A Great take on the idiom northie And I'm with @Valkyrie about placing an order. I'll have warm (not hot), and dry, please. I assume you take payment on delivery? I seem to have left my purse somewhere.
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    A great short piece that ties in with a previous story (details in the chapter note) but can be read standalone as well. From the creative way a jail break out is done to the way a king is assassinated. This story is full from beginning to end.
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    The Escape

    Caz Pedroso commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    A great short BH I love the world you created and I have added your companion story to my reading list.
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    Comicfan always writes fun things and this is no exception. Thi is a fun little short that is a great way to getting a taste for his writing and leaving you looking for more. Comicfan's creative use of the idiom he was given was well done and the characters were engaging. As always I would love to see this short continued into a longer story
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    This was fun to read and a great take on the pigs fly idiom. A great short
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    Thanks jp I'm glad you liked my take on this Thanks for reading and commenting
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    Thanks I was inspired by off site author Lisa Oliver as i was recently reading one of her books Thanks for reading and commenting
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    Thank you BH It took a lot of thinking about how to make any sort of scene out of my idiom, but it was a fun exercise Thanks for reading and commenting
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    Thanks timmie I didn't know either, Google is a wonderful thing Thanks for reading and commenting
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    “You should have seen me.” Belus spread his arms almost losing his balance on the table he was standing on. “There I was surrounded by no less than five mer-guards. I’d already lost my sword and all I had was a short dagger to fend them off with. “I feinted to the left.” He suited action to words and knocked someone’s ale over. “But, the one in front of me anticipated it and knocked me down. I got a knee ree to hit him, flipped him off me and got up, just in time to catch another jumping at
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    Saw this today and instantly thought of moggy, she was always sharing some great music.
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    Chapter 8

    Caz Pedroso commented on wolfwriter's story chapter in Chapter 8

    So good to see this story back. Great chapter and I'll look forward to the next
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    Fury and Ire

    Caz Pedroso commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in Fury and Ire

    Another great chapter. I liked how Ra came down to save the day and punish the other two. And i do love the mates' interactions with each other and Ra. Eli reminds me of an eager puppy a lot of the time.
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    Hey, Dugh, She certainly did . As i told the others I will revisit this as soon as I either get more voices that won't leave me alone, or get more time. Thank you for reading and commenting
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    Simon and Kitryn crouched behind some bushes near to the entrance of the bears' den. “What do we do now?” Simon whispered. “It’s not like they have a doorbell we can go up and ring to get their attention.” “Oh, they probably know we’re here already,” Kitryn replied as he shifted trying to get comfortable. “Bears have a very good sense of smell and they would set guards.” True to Kitryn’s words a voice echoed out of the darkness. “We know there is someone there. Show yourselves and st
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    We'll see if any more bangs against the inside of my head. Untill then i will write planning notes as they come to me while i finish some other projects. Thank you for reading and commenting
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    Thanks, Gary I will probably make it part of a longer story eventually but you know me i like to plan these things to death. Thanks for reading and commenting
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