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Yep, I think Steven is going to have to learn to swim very quickly before he drowns and takes his pack (or whats left of it) with him. Thanks for reading and commenting

I have a half-formed idea for this but I want to finish a couple of my open stories first, or I may start to get a bit mixed up with storylines. Thanks for reading and commenting

“Do you have any idea what that brat has done now?” Alpha Steven demanded as he strode into the bedroom. Dee continued folding clothes instead of answering him. “Dee, are you going to answer me? Do you realize what that boy has done and what it could mean for this pack?” “Yes Dear,” Dee replied absently as she refolded a shirt that wasn’t done to her liking. “Hey, mum. Have you seen my favourite red shirt?” Dee turned to see Harry had stopped and was staring at his father. “You red s

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And let the groveling begin Great chapter Gary

Wonderful as always. A few questions answered, still more to go. I wouldn't want to be Nephthys when Anubis finds her

Great scene Kitt I could alomst feel Carman's panic myself as I read it.

I'm cautiously optimistic about the bears they are heading for. At the moment they seem to have thrown the hunters off their trail, here's hoping Thanks for reading and commenting.

I think they will find some more allies soon. But, as for safety? I think that will be longer in coming. This story is unfolding as i write it so i'm learning as you all do. As for the bad vamp? Well, Kitryn may be able to track him down at some point. Who knows maybe he has something to do with things? We'll find out together Thanks for reading and commenting

Hi and welcome to GA. There are a lot of people here who would be happy to help you. And I think Bob said it perfectly so I won't try to add to it. I'll just send greetings and a

Hopefully, the bears will protect them and they can start getting some answers. At least may find some respite and maybe some new allies. Thanks for reading and commenting, Gary

Maybe the bears will be able to give them a chance to rest and regroup. Then they can make more permanent plans. Thanks for reading and commenting

I think they are going to have to find some allies first and then find out how the hunters are finding them and why the hunters are so intent on getting them in particular. Thanks for reading and commenting

“When can we go home?” “I want to go back to grandma’s house.” “I’m tired.” The kits had been wonderful, but the constant traveling was wearing on all of them and the kits most of all. Simon felt Kitryn tense and placed a hand on his shoulder. “Deep breath,” he muttered and received a tight smile. Meg had moved to walk with the kits and she could be heard explaining once again why they couldn’t return to her house. Simon looked at the sky. “We need to find shelter soon.” Kitryn nodde

I'm going to go against the crowd. I feel sorry for Drake. I can see where his thinking and feelings are getting muddled together. add into that his increasing feelings for Jimmy (with Richard there to reinforce why he shouldn't trust the feelings) it's a problem waiting to blow up. Every time it seems he may have got himself onto an even kilter something comes along to knock him off again. I think Jimmy will just have to be patient and keep showing Drake though actions rather than words what he can offer that Richard couldn't. Another great chapter, Gary

Mysteries within mysteries. A Great chapter

Nolan is so sweet Looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for finding out and posting. moggy was a great and supportive friend to me and I will miss her very much, as I'm sure many others will. Her poetry spoke to many and her friendship was given freely to all. R.I.P my friend, I hope you have found the peace you deserve.

I'm sure everything will work out in the end. It always does. Kitryn has kept them all alive and free this long and he has Simon and Meg to help now as well. Hopefully, they will find a forever home soon. But, I think they will have a few more hoops to jump through before that can happen. Hopefully, they can find a way to either evade the hunters or deal with them soon. From memory they don't know about Simon yet, however, they did nearly find them at the cave so they may know someone else is with them. I'm guessing the length??? Sometimes I dislike it too but if i didn't have the incentive to join my fellows doing this as many weeks as I can, it could take months just to write one chapter in between my other writing off-site and my home life. Hopefully, i can find time once school is back to add an occasional bonus chapter here and there. I think the kits' don't really understand everything that's happening (except Fran). At the moment it is an adventure for them. That may change any time though and then i think the adults are in for a lot of hard questions. A car would be an inconvenience. If they needed to shift and run through the trees to lose the hunters they couldn't do that in a car. Also, they left with only the things they could carry to escape the attack on their group to start with. Thank you all for all your wonderful comments and for continuing to read Kitryn's and Simon's tale

Of course, she's smart She was the only girl for a while, someone had to keep all those boys in line. In all seriousness, she has had to be smart and has had to grow up far too quickly. Thank you for reading and commenting

We all want to make our parents–or someone close to us–proud. Brady is no different. I have heard so many bad coming out stories that I can understand young people being very scared of telling their friends and family that they are having feelings for someone of the same sex. This is a short snapshot into the mind of one such teen and the turmoil it creates inside him.

I really felt for Ryan in this story. If I hadn’t already read the previous story from Brady’s POV I would have been very angry with Brady. Although I would have taken into consideration that he was a confused young man as well I would also have been annoyed to see another young man’s feelings being played with. I know there are people out there that aren’t sure about who they fancy or why. But, that does not give anyone leave to mess with someone else’s feelings, paying attention to them one moment and pulling away from them the next. This story is short, to the point, and will leave you wanting more. A very good addition to The Line series and I’m looking forward to what happens next with this couple.

This short story is basically all one scene But, that one scene hits quite a punch to the reader. In one scene we get to know that the Colt has regrets from his past and he is hoping to not make what he sees as the same mistake again. We find out that Ryan is in a position no one would want to see a child in. and lastly, we see the war going on with Colt, between his job and his conscience. I would like to hope that any decent person would make the same choice as Colt does.

This short made me laugh at the end. Colt shouldn't be eavesdropping outside Ryan's room. Of course, he takes what he hears completely the wrong way and ends up looking rather stupid. A funny short to cheer you up on a dreary day.