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    I think the first version of the poem is to the point and AC's tweak added to it. Going in for the kill (sorry...) and being more honest works better for me. Good job! As for death... It's to me more like a Vanitas painting. Since it's an animal dying I don't feel warnings are required. A child dying...? That's another thing. Still, poetry is emotion and reading it you should expect other themes than wind through trees or sunsets. It's seldom graphic or long enough to trigger.
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    I have to read Band again, but I think it's an old band used as tracking device for many, many years. Colt is not the first. So the tracker bands are replaced, but not the base of the band where they are attached. As for the smart one - Amanda? She isn't a vampire, not wolf and not human.
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    Well, we've already established Fate's a douche, so then I understand. And I can think of quite a few more things that are way more fun...
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    Life? It's the douche singing who turned her that way! 'The last footprint's mine'!?! WTF?!? But I love that you posted a song!
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    There can never be enough hugs in the world! *hug*
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    Andy wanting to discuss his feelings with dr O'Shea is a major break through! He's thinking about hus reactions and feelings and is learning to handle them. And wow for Zander coming out like that! Honesty will set you free.
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    Prompt 388

    Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Prompt 388

    I thought the boys needed a bit of closure, even if i'm not sure this was the final chapter. If another prompt strokes me the right way, they might come back. I don't want to say goodbye... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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    Chapter 1

    Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Chapter 1

    It's so interesting to read reviews! I (knowing where the guys were headed) just saw this as a Little romantic fairytale, but it seems to have impacted on you readers a bit differently. I love it! I try to keep it a bit fun too and I'm glad you enjoyed those moments. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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    I'll be sure to follow. That diamond looks really good. A 20s/30s feel to it. Did you draw that yourself? What is that plant? Looks a little like rice, but that's probably my prejudice talking.
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    Oh-oh! Iceman is going down! When will we get to Iceman cometh? LOL I'm hoping they can work it out and get busy. Give Efrain and Cory some peace.
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    Chapter 2

    Puppilull commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 2

    So Kye is more or less a prisoner? So lonely and even blaming himself. He needs a friend.
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    I'm a lawyer, not a saint! But true, I mostly bend rules.
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    When it produces things like that, I can't stay mad at it.
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    Oh lordy! That's stuff for dreams!
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    A new and improved. None of that apple crap...
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    I think we all struggle and feel inadequate. I bet even Shakespeare struggled a lot. It's part of being a writer, an artist. And for me rules are there to expand, not constrict. To challenge, but not hinder. Like AC said yesterday, by following them strict on certain occasions, you know how to disregard them when you feel like it or the writing demands it. Besides, what does it really matter if our perception of different styles are different? If the writing comes from the heart, it's all that matters. Rules be damned!
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    More music! This I thought for CE. He's taking Colt's disappearance very hard. And I like the idea of him having a really nice falsetto. LOL And this is for Colt himself. Just to get his spirit up for MW6. (Ok, mostly the refrain was funny...)
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    You're so honest it hurts. I'm glad to see you can keep putting one foot in front of the other and keep going, even when your past is doing its worst to haunt you. I'm also grateful that you share not only your life's story but your talent with us. Thank you!
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    Tanka #1

    Puppilull commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Tanka #1

    LOL You are hardly challenged Mr Writer man! But poetry is scary, since it's so much more emotional. You're off to a flying start!
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    Chapter 1

    Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Wow, what a set up! This has 'great story ahead' written all over it! I can't wait to read how Nobu handles his attraction for Victor and his need to please his father.
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    Oh please don't! Stay and wrestle words with us!
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    I did and I see what the difference is. I think my geese are actually pretty good (in this respect), but the others are more forced together. Oh, you...! *blushes* LOL
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    That was hilarious!
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    I did think the slightly 'naked' style was sort of part of what was a haiku or a tanka. Knowing no Japanese what so ever, I have no feel for the language. That makes it difficult to understand something so personal and culturally entwined as poetry. I sent you that Swedish poem once, AC, and remember I winced at the translation. So I guess many Japanese (being or speaking) feel the same about this poetry. Add to that my own habit of doing poetry kind of choppy and it's a double effect. Food for thought indeed!
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    My little lawyer soul went 'Sigh...' at this. LOL
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