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Prompt 387 - New World
Puppilull commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 387 - New World
Suddenly, Rudolph's christmas makes sense. Oh, wait, it doesn't and neither does this! You can really go from the most sad (like The Anniversary) to the very silly and still every word seems geniune and true. -
When you turn up the intensity, you really turn it up! Great chapter, even if I'm on needles and pins here waiting for the next chapter. Good thing Nelson didn't kill Carl. He should have to live with what he's done. All alone, rotting away somewhere...
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Oh, wow! I hope Matt thought to bring Nelson! Can hardly wait untill tomorrow!
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The world of Craftingmom -inhabited by the scummiest scumbags ever... This chapter made me think of this song: I'm not a violent person, but where is Samuel L Jackson when you need him..? He would go medieval on his ass!
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I've read all the chapters now after New Years and I have to say it's a wild ride. Tears and laughter, terror and friendship. Can't wait for the next chapter. Is there maybe a dormant virus among the settlers?
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Oh, ye of little faith! Ashlee might appear delicate, but to be delicate in that environment you have to be tough as nails. I think we've only seen the softer side of Ashlee so far. I for one think he will put up one hell of a fight (physical or not) for his man.
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I stumbled upon this series this morning and have read them all by now. Such great stories, all of them, but this one actually had ne crying. For real. So sweet and sad. Love is truly wonderful.
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Prompt #340: The Nuptial Dinner
Puppilull commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #340: The Nuptial Dinner
That was so sweet... Almost gave me cavities -
I really liked this story, but it struck me as more of a sketch of a story than a finished one. It would be wonderful if you went over it again and fleshed it out a lot more. Or maybe I'm just greedy..!
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What in the world were you smoking when you wrote that? It must be highly illegal, because that story was bizarre and very, very funny! Merry christmas!
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Oh... Poor Clem! I hope he finds himself a gorgeous, sassy firecracker of a boyfriend who's an expert in... let's say... krav maga and can hold his own in a fight with Nathan. Because there will be a fight when Nathan understands what he has lost. But then it is TOO LATE, IDIOT!
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Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Puppilull commented on Aditus's story chapter in Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Well, it is pretty obvious Chris is lying. The name of the chapter kind of says so... Maybe he blames Jonah for his break up with Eric. But that doesn't explain Ren being all nice and shit with Eric. Sure, they are friends but why would he act like that towards someone who treated Jonah and him like dirt? Ren probably thought he had everything under control, as usual... Ren will have to go to Sicily. Like right now. A bit childish of Jonah to run, but with his history it's logical. -
Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Puppilull commented on Aditus's story chapter in Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
I'm warming a bit to Ren now, but both of them really has some growing up to do. As much as Jonah needs to let Ren in, Ren needs to learn how to let Jonah go when needed. Otherwise, his beautiful bird will fly the coup pretty quickly. I mean if he is this controling when they haven't even started dating, what will happen when things get serious and they fight..? -
I just find Ren a little too creepy. The ringtone- fine, a tattoo - WTF?!? If someone did that to me, I would seriously run and I wouldn't need any red shoes... Love the story anyway, but I can understand Jonah being sceptical.
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Difficult to say where this story is going, but nonetheless I am hooked. I am feeling kind of sorry for Hani right now, but somehow he will land on his feet. After all, he is feline... Great story!
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Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
Two chapters in one weekend! Nice! Can't wait for the boys to get to the next phase. Who will be the first to ask the other out? -
I really liked this story and didn't even want to go to work today, because I just wanted to keep reading. I think you created a wondeful little universe and the characters were well written. I especially liked that you let their relationship develop slowly. No insta-love. It made it much more believable. Looking forward to more from you (and Kayden and Damien)!
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Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Thanks for the sequel! Self-contained, compact and concise chapters that form a story nonetheless and are based on prompts - just say to yourself "Challenge accepted!" -
Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Nce going! And it's your first time! You know it only gets better with practice... Immeditely, I want to read more. What is is with these high school love stories that is so captivating? Oh, yeah right, young, beautiful guys in love getting busy. What's not to like? -
I read this story on Lit a while ago and since then I have stalked you a bit to see if you will finish it. It is such a great story. I hope you find inspiration and time to get it done. I'm impatient, but I would rather the story be written well instead of quickly.
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The Death of a Good Dog
Puppilull commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in The Death of a Good Dog
You have to google Ladyhawke! A masterpiece of 80's movies! If you like Rutger Hauer that is. Did I just reveal that I am indeed ancient? -
Oh, new story! Excited! I think the flashbacks mixed very well, since you used the words as bridges (if you get what I mean). I kept thinking Ladyhawke while I read it. But my imagination often runs away with me.
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Well, now you have me longing for fall and summer has just begun. I feel sorry for Miah being so helpless, but if he just accepts it he seems to be in very good hands. And "gentle giant" cracked me up.
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Oh, the Hives! I like the Scandinavian references you make from time to time. Like Pilkvist. Your stories are so good.
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Have been away without internet for the weekend (gasp, the horror) and had made sure to get my Rob-fix by buying An American lamb in Europe. My cunning plan backfired when I couldn't stop reading once I started... Saturday was torturous but now I'm back to civilisation and everything is alright! Great chapter! I won't even try to speculate what is going to happen between who. So many possibilities! You can write this series for ever. I know I will be reading!
