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Wow... I can see why Toby is so overprotective, especially when it comes to Doms in his brothers' lives. I wonder what Toby was told about what happened to Silas and Daniel? I can't imagine him not trying to keep in contact. More questions for the next chapter

Curiouser and curiouser. It seems Sybil senses that Kellar and Tobyn are earth mates. Having found her own many years ago I'm sure she recognizes the signs. It sounds like walking away from each other might not be as simple as both men trying to do the right thing. With K being a healer (and possibly a savior?) is the pull T feeling even stronger? I can't imagine the mate of a wolf healer and possible salvation for the pack, wouldn't feel a strong pull to their mate. I get why Tobyn is making the choices he is, but this seems to be bigger than his pack and his personal choices. I have an image of T and K and a road trip, but I won't elaborate yet. I want to see if my 'vision' comes true I am curious about humans though. Why would Kellar ask? Is that a plot thread or a red herring? I think I agree with Sybil... Not having fresh blood in the pack will eventually weaken the bloodlines. I also feel like I should mention that it's all well and good for Tobyn to want to do the 'right' thing, but is he thinking about Tilly? How does he think she's going to feel when she realizes that the guy she's with is in love with someone wake else and she's the sacrifice he feels he has to make? Too bad they don't have actual wolf doctors because surrogacy would solve this mess. Great chapter, Gary. As always there are more questions, but that's keeping us coming back for more.

Well someone is awfully grumpy. I wonder why he's acting so jealous? Is it something Noel has actually done, or something completely in his head? I have a feeling it's a little bit of both. Of course, regardless of why, Diarmid is acting like a spoiled child and Noel is not going to respond well to that. There are better ways to express himself that embarrassing Noel in front of his friend... and making that friend feel uncomfortable as well.

I think as time has gone on, Jason has found it more difficult to deny that what he feels for Corey goes beyond missing sex. I agree with you... he's falling and he's falling fast. The fact that Corey showed up at his door after being gone for a couple of days is also telling. Yes, they do still have some important things to address. I don't think they can avoid those for much longer. Thank you for your review and your support, Spikey.

I think you hit on something here, tim. They do need to be sure of themselves. Jason isn't 100% sure his feelings aren't due to prolonged lack of sex and Corey isn't sure his aren't caused by a past crush. They need to trust themselves more. The more time they spend together seems to give them more confidence in how they feel though. Thank you for your review and your support, tim.

Thank you! I appreciate the vote of confidence jtpawlik.

lol I have that urge in some of the stories I read too. These two are pretty cautious right now, but they are getting there Thank you for your review and your support, Dr.P.

Thank you, impunity Who knew snow could heat things up?

The idea of Corey being alone for Christmas really bothers Jason. He doesn't want to let that happen if he can help it. I've fallen asleep on the coach with someone before too and it was also with someone I loved. I liked how, while asleep, they were drawn to each other, wrapped themselves around each other. Thank you for a great review, and all of your support, Gary

lol we'll have to see what happens with all of this snow. I've always enjoyed stories where I know what the MCs are thinking and in this case it seemed important that the reader not only be inside Corey's head, but Jason's as well. Thank you for your review and your support, buffywillow

Jason doesn't want to get his hopes up, so he's denying what seems obvious to other people. He knows if he lets himself believe and Corey rejects him, it could shred him. He also doesn't want to risk a friendship he finally got back. Who is going to be the one to finally crack and make the first move? Thank you for your review and your support, Def.

Haha I think they need to take their heads out of certain places and at least talk to each other. They're so busy worrying about what to do with their own feelings to realize they might be reciprocated. Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi

Haha I guess we'll have to see what develops Thank you for your review and your support, Reader

It probably wasn't as clear as it should've been, but Corey did go home first, he just didn't stay there very long I agree, dating doesn't necessarily have to include sex, and these two have been 'dating' for months without even realizing it. Thank you for your review and your support, Dugh.

It will be a tough decision for Jason. He doesn't want to disappoint his family, but he also can't stand the idea of Corey being alone for the holidays. He has less than two weeks to make a decision. We'll have to see what he finally decides. Thank you for your review and your support, Parker

I'm intrigued why they didn't realize there was a neutral zone to the south. How far reaching are their borders? And why wouldn't Deke know why Park was down there? The idea of a stray is also interesting. Why is he at Park's house? What happened to him? As always, so many questions

Kevin sounds like a real piece of work... a complete bully. From the sound of things he used those boys for his friends' amusement. I can't wait to hear how they got away from him.

Chapter 12 Jason read the message on his phone and snickered. Corey had sent him a text from the two-day training course he was attending in Ottawa. ‘Sooo bored. You should come here and rescue me. ;-)’ ‘So you want me to drive two hours to start some sort of ruckus so you don’t have to sit through a course YOU paid to attend?’ Jason hit send. Before he had a chance to put his phone away it buzzed with another incoming message. ‘Yes. Yes, I do.’ ‘Step away from the phone and get

Although it makes me incredibly sad that these two men are doing the 'right' thing (we can debate on what is actually the right thing later ), I completely understand why they're making the decisions they have been making. Tobyn is destined to be an alpha some day and his first priority is and should be to his pack. He's decided that means marrying and having pups to grow their numbers, so that's what he's determined to do. Kellar is just a plain good man and wouldn't poach, no matter what his heart wants. Right now, their choices appear to be setting them on different paths. My hope is that this trip with Elinor will give them some insight and maybe bring them closer together. My thought is that together Tobyn and Kellar would make an incredible team that would do more good than having a few pups could do for that pack. Wonderful chapter, Gary. Next one please

All I have to say is I'm happy your curiosity about life is keeping you around. And that you're going to stay for the second show.

Good for Mr Archibald. It may not do any good with that battleaxe, but it's good that he showed that kind of public support I'm very happy for Patrick that Fiona contacted him. It would be wonderful to have a supportive family member in his corner. I think my favourite part (besides seeing Imp and Angie again ) was how Patrick immediately made the decision to close down his shop for the week to be there for Michael and Peter. It shows how much his family means to him, in action and not only words. Great chapter, Tim

There was a lot of inner strength in this poem. There are trials we must face, but we soldier on. The line that got me was "By no means an ending, but an unrelished date". That date is looking for me as well. Not welcome but inevitable.

It does heal, and it does seem to be don't that now. It's been slow gong, but I think it needed to be for these two. Thank you for your review and your support, tim.

Thank you, impunity! I'm pleased you're enjoying the story