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  1. skinnydragon
    Candy to Heart teams to seams
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    Chapter 1

    skinnydragon commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Good characters, lots of potential for good and bad!! Anticipating more!
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    Thanks for the comments Parker! It was almost like a stream of consciousness It's a good thing Matty is in terrific shape ...hehe. David's meeting with a speaking Twoey ...could be interesting! As I hinted to CG, Kathy at the mall could be a game changer in our naive late bloomer's life
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    Thanks for the comments, as always, CG! Twoey and David have a date with fate coming in their second meeting ...so all bets are off. It's no great spoiler that we three (you, me and David) will only have to endure Kathy one more day. But please don't miss the icky hetero scene, it's amusing and ends with David symbolic washing his hands of Kathy. Don't let my carefully crafted scene go to waste!
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    Thanks JB! It's about to take a turn
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    There’s a XCountry race today, so shirt and tie. Our last two races are at home, Gary's JV races are on the road. I can't wait for next year when we're on the same team again! I feel lonely among all those juniors and seniors. Nels was the center of conversation on our walk to school today. He and Lauri had planned to go to Syracuse tomorrow, hit a mall and a movie. His mom and her friend were going to deliver and pick up, leaving them all day. I guess his mom and her friend were going shopping
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    Nuh-uh Wrong type. I envision a Maggie Smith, sans accent although not sans enunciation peculiarities.
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    Oh gosh Gary! It was so rewarding when David said, "You came back." This was the cream of the crop. Thanks for this.
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    Thanks for the review jess! Wow you summarized it beautifully! Let's hope David can find the magic key to allow him into Dr' Keating's office! I feel all the worse about Twoey. He's trapped behind prison walls and mute on top of it. Meanwhile he sees all this bad stuff going on with the boy he's sure is his soul mate.
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    No, you never will forget. A heart rending, but powerful poem Gary. The best response is the one you've take. To love and do good.
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    Thnks Val! Yes it seems Erik is pushing Twoey through the stages of a non-relationship. Twoey needs to remember this.
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    Thanks Val! Good questions. Donny will make cameo appearances for a while before he takes center stage. And will he ever!
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    Thanks for the comments Val! I know it looks obvious from the outside of this 'relationship' but David has zero experience and, of course, has his own world carefully constructed in his head. Yep ...gonna get worse before it gets better
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    Thanks for the comments jess! Twoey sure cuts through David's defenses, doesn't he? If David saw him every day, instead of only on Sunday, this story would be over ...hehe.
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    Well Robbie had his itch scratched, but what is it with him and these straight dudes? Although, to most of his classmates he IS a straight dude ...haha. My only worry is he appears to be a bit out of control. His multiple orientations seem ready to intersect or, more likely, collide pretty soon. It won't be pretty and there won't be a happy ending . An interesting and well written chapter Dodger!
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    Thanks Def! Toph certainly needs to figure out a few things, doesn't he? Let's hope he softens his jaded outlook as his Euphoria fades
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    Thanks for the review Parker! About the narrative voice. I hope the jarring shifts between 1st and 3rd person isn't too upsetting, but it obviously has a purpose.
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    Thanks for the nice words tim! I won't reveal where the soup idiosyncrasy idea came from, too many would make fun of me
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    Thanks for the review Ozy! He might seem even more quirky, considering where he's come from and where he sees himself going. It'll be an interesting journey, I'm sure.
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    Thanks Timothy! I wonder how this relationship would develop if (a) Toph wasn't so attracted and ( he didn't consider Gary off limits.
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    Late August

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late August

    Hey tim! Glad you found this interesting. You're very correct. Toph is about to discover himself. Hopefully we'll discover right along with him. 19 is pretty young - yeah.
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    Late August

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late August

    Hey Timothy, thanks for the review! I think you may both be correct re: Austin. Toph does need to move on. Any relationship based in Euphoria probably would be doomed anyway - you got that right too!
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    Late August

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late August

    Thanks Gee! I hope it keeps your interest as Toph slowly unfolds.
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    My room. Had it ever entered my consciousness before? Over my head, on the ceiling, band posters laughed down, mocking me. They must have been carefully attached by me, but memory fails. My head rotated on the pillow. Now the walls of my room were in view, but shyly hiding behind arrogant jocks. Those posters must have been attached by me too. Was I thirteen? Fourteen? At what age did I vandalize my room? Such a long time ago. Another life. Another me. Today begins Toph.2, the newest version
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    Only in his MIB body
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