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    Thanks Parker for the review and probing questions! Twoey's in danger, but more from his desire to not live than from black helicopters ...so far. David needs help ...for sure, and not from his church. Twoeys mom, good question. She might be too analytical to blame those 3 boys ...as long as Twoey lives.
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    Thanks for the review and thoughts CG! Yes, it might me early to come to conclusions, Things need to shake out and settle down a bit. This was a major happening. I'm beginning to get a funny feeling about Kathy too. Maybe David's acknowledgment re: feelings for Twoey, are repressed thoughts now breaking through bit by bit? Not sure yet, but a possibility.
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    If outside forces trump you, fold your hand. Gary and I went for our lonely morning run. Again, we didn't say much. Later, I was picking at a banana when Tommy answered the door. Greg came in and walked right over to me. As I stood up, I received another giant fullback hug! He didn't say anything. He didn't have to. Actually I think he might have choked up if he said anything. He looked very emotional. I simply said, “Thanks Greg, that means a lot.” Liz came in and they left. The minute I g
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    Chapter 3

    skinnydragon commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Hmmmm... I wonder what Hunter's scheme is with the party, etc. I mean, we know what he's ultimately up to. It was nice meeting Kevin. His crush is behaving strangely, in his eyes. That's a clue too. We'll have to wait, I guess ...nice chapter W_L! The plot deepens. Anticipating more
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    mjb, don't be so pushy! Well now it's been 21 1/2 days! When are we gonna see more?
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    Improvement

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Improvement

    Thanks Reader! I'll bet Markey took advantage of Ian the whole time they were together. It was just too easy for his type. Ian was probably too trusting. Thanks to Shawn and Miles, Ian is slowly coming around. They are the best medicine for him.
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    I wonder what Mr. Whitley is thinking. He can't be buying Eric's story completely. One good thing, Eric is getting the experience of someone appreciating him. That's probably going to payoff down the road sometime. A good chapter Parker! It's nice to see something developing between Eric and the farmer. Looking forward to more!
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    Improvement

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Improvement

    Thanks for the comments CG! Of course, everything you said is true. But they are in love, and Miles understands Ian. Ian better get comfortable fast, because there's only two more of these to go! Hmmm ...I'll think of something!
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    Improvement

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Improvement

    Aw, thanks Parker! They are truly in love. When is Ian going to finally realize he's in a safe zone with Miles? Maybe sooner than later
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    Improvement

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Improvement

    Thanks Tim! You're right. Ian needs an event that will be a page turner for him. Hmmm ...maybe in a couple of weeks
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    Improvement

    skinnydragon posted new chapter in Vignettes

    “You really are worthless Ian. Less than worthless! You only draw dumb illustrations and whine. I’ve had it with you! I can choose from so many better guys. I’ll have another boyfriend tomorrow. And where will you be? I can see it already. You’ll spend the rest of your life alone and depressed. Why don’t you become a priest or something. At least your life would have some small purpose. I mean, look at you now. Who the hell would even notice if you suddenly vanished? Nobody, that’s who ...and le
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    Fear

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Fear

    Oh hey! You're back! Hope everything's fine. Yeah ...I had to get Miles in a little. hehe Only 3 more Vignettes to go before we give the boys their privacy.
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    Wanted

    skinnydragon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Wanted

    Gosh Tim Not sure if I'm repulsed or aroused Actually both But I was invovled
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    Chapter 1

    skinnydragon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A lovely story Cynus! Well told. Buy stock in Kleenex.
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    Thanks for the review Lisa! I'm glad you're still slogging through "Twoey" ...haha. Danny's behavior has a cause, as most people's behavior does. You'll find out soon enough. I'm glad you like Tommy. He's both fun and difficult to write. Difficult because, while I think I can remember when I was 15, being 13 ...and how we spoke ...is right on the event horizon for me ...hehe. Good news! We're not done with Deena!
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    Work

    skinnydragon commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Work

    It's nice to see 'Eric Anderson' catch a little break. Food, a place to sleep, promised money. All he has to do is stay anonymous for a week or so, I wonder how long it's gonna take Mr. Whitley to figure it out? Probably not long, if he hasn't already. It's pretty difficult to be an outsider in such a rural community. In any event, I don't think he'd pose any danger to Eric. The only problem, of course, is Eric. Once he gets found out his urge to flee is going to be very urgent.
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    Thanks for the comments/questions Parker! There will be no media circus (Ch. 30 for that) David is entering terra incognito (Ch. 32, the beginning of Part 2 for that.) in other words no spoilers ...hehe. These few chapters are to short for that!
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    Thanks for the great review CG! Maybe Sam's smoking makes him so sensitive ...haha Danny gave Twoey something to rebuild with. We can only hope he will use it. I think Danny needs to work with David, but y'know.
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    Thanks mmike for recapping cap for us, who by now have all forgotten everything it's been so long! Sort of like a cap of cappuccino.
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    Chapter 1

    skinnydragon commented on Gee Whillickers's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Giggles Perfect! Just the kind of Halloween story I like. Great little story Gee!!
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    We need to stay together as a gang. Ten o’clock, we gathered at Nels's house. Finally there were some leads. Sam had friends who knew one of the responding EMTs. He said the boy who was alive had a bullet wound in his neck, lost tons of blood and isn't expected to live. He said bullet wounds of the neck are almost always fatal. The dead boy was shot in the head and the man was also shot in the head, but his looked like a suicide. We spent most of the next few hours trying to come up with scena
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    Aw C'mon you guys, who could pass up good Champagne! I drink good whiskey too, but never a whole bottle at a time. Now a good bottle of Cedric Bouchard, I can finish after dinner!!
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    I have it on good authority he's drinking Champagne in Palo Alto
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    Another super chapter Gary! We'll eventually find out the bad stuff Bodie's been through, I'm sure. As Drew pointed out, it's interesting both he and Nate had a rough time. I don't think it's gonna take them long to figure each other out though, if they haven't already. If I'm not mistaken they'll be pleasantly squeezed together in that Ford pickup on the way home ...hehe. M&K might have to be a little firm once they move, Nate & Bodie might want to take advantage of them and their house a bit. I mean, it's gotta seem safer for them than a home with a mom in it. lol Next the dog! OK I can wait a little!
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    Tim As we expect, Lovely writing throughout I feel aspects than unveil me It's what poetry's all about It's not just rhymes and meter wrought But heart and fear and soul let free
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