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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Thanks AC! Well this is certainly not my genre, but your 'queasy' feeling was what I was trying to achieve. (actually I was thinking 'unease.') So, at least in that respect, it was successful.
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    Chapter 7

    skinnydragon commented on Gee Whillickers's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Parker's correct. The boys might think their only foes are wild animals. The human kind can be even more dangerous. Keep those weapons strapped on boys!
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    Alone 8

    skinnydragon commented on WolfM's story chapter in Alone 8

    Very Moving Wolfman! I'm obviously happy you made it and proud you could discover the inner drive to succeed and rely on yourself. Many in 'better' surroundings never do.
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    Chapter 6

    skinnydragon commented on Gee Whillickers's story chapter in Chapter 6

    It look like Craig and Joel overcame a little orientation hurdle. Good for them. The scene of them looking at the photo album was touching. Joel getting as much out of it as Craig, even though he was looking at strangers. At least they have a task now, besides survival. They're going to become even closer. Hopefully they'll find a girl for Joel and a boy for Craig, although that might seem unlikely. But then so is everybody disappearing in the first place ...so there's hope
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Thanks Defiance! Obviously SkinnyD DOESN'T write poetry! But hell, I tried. Maybe I'll try a few more.
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    A great chapter, full of love. Love of M&K for each other, and of each, in his own way, for Nate who certainly feels it. Not to mention the blossoming love of Nate and Brodie. I think it was brought into greater focus for Nate in the 'scar' scene. An eye opener for him. Of course we shouldn't forget the love of the puppy, claiming her new family ...or of big Mike for his truck Thanks for this chapter Gary!
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    Thanks Defiance for the great comments! Haha ...no peeking! I have a feeling that first meeting is going to be wrenchingly emotional for both boys. Strap in.
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    Thanks for the review Lisa! Haha ...yes I think you're right. He's given up denying it. Probably going to put all his effort into the Twoey "did I say I loved him?" denial.
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Thanks Lisa!
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Oh Drew! I'm so happy you found it. I'm already polishing up the next which is dedicated to YOU. There's also a contest involved, cuz I know you like that sh*t
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Thanks Gary! It means a lot. Anyway, I probably used my year's allocation of words on "Twoey." I need to be parsimonious!
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Thanks Tim ...it was your comment that dared me to try
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Yeudos

    Thanks Parker!
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    Yeudos

    skinnydragon posted new chapter in Quirky Poesy

    Be there for you, Always have your back, Until death do us part. You complete me, And provide what I lack, Betray you never. Live in my heart! Love you forever! Never anyone new! [Yeudos] (n) lie, falsehood
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    Quirky Poesy

    skinnydragon posted a story in Poetry

    This is a collection of poems by a non-poet. Thanks tim for inflicting me on everybody.
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    Oh Dear Mitchelll ! I hope I don't violate too much medical accuracy. Give me just a little bit of poetic license, please! Haha ...anyway thanks for your concern. Twoey thanks you also, although he can't talk just yet
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    Hey Parker, thanks for all those leads ...hehe Yep to most all of them, with a few twists here and there. It won't be giving much away, cuz it's pretty obvious, that David and Twoey are going to encounter some wrenching times once D. can visit the hospital. They love each other, no matter what denial is present, and it's gotta cause something to happen.
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    Thanks for the review and thoughts CG! Poor Twoey's mom! She'll have two adolescent puppies in her hands soon ...hehe. Now the dance is over maybe David will move on, but there'll be a Halloween dance in a few weeks. He better extricate himself ASAP! Actually, Martin is David's friend, as you'll soon see.
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    Aha! A little more about the mystery lifeguard who began our story. Ambrose is not going to be satisfied, ever! Eric won't be able to go to school without a parent or other credentials. It's interesting to hear him talk about using the cabin during the winter. Interesting because he's unconsciously chosen Eustace's farm to be home. Funny scene with him avoiding hats associated with the two worst adults in his life, so far. A lovely chapter Parker, especially the midnight swim and Eric's musings. Waiting for the next!
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    How much one cares for you is how you know. After this morning's run I crossed the street as soon as I saw Gary go into his house, and ran over to Plum. Since the car was still there, I rang her bell. Twoey's mom invited me in and forced me to have breakfast. “I'm sorry, I probably smell awful. I came directly from finishing my run. I couldn't be here last night because of the game and can’t tonight because of the dance.” She laughed and said, “You know David, I'd rather smell a boy who's bee
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    Chapter 3

    skinnydragon commented on mitchelll's story chapter in Chapter 3

    A sad chapter but ending with the mysterious Viktor and his Limo. It sounds like Denise is thoroughly weaved into his life, tough. Good stuff Mitchelll !
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    Thank you Tim, Very lovely thoughts, beautifully expressed.
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    Well now! Nothing but trouble ahead for Robbie if his gayworld and straightworld overlap, which ...how can they not? The school and town are only so big. Maybe he needs to talk to someone. Who? Fire up Skype. Robbie is going to make problems right in his own home if he doesn't do something smart ...fast!
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    Chapter 5

    skinnydragon commented on Gee Whillickers's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Well I guess Craig will have to turn Joel gay, right? ...hehe Lots of possibilities ahead for the boys, but they do need to talk. Thanks for an interesting chapter Gee, and for making us wonder a little more!
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    Alone 7

    skinnydragon commented on WolfM's story chapter in Alone 7

    I wonder what it's going to take to get Matt out of this prison he's constructed around himself? The longer he lives there, the harder it will become. He had a shot with the guys at Christmas, but that asshole pushed Matt right back into his own private prison. Nice work Wolfman! Something big is coming in the next chapter, I can feel it (I'm not very good at predicting though)
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