Jason Rimbaud

Many of the situations in Frosted Hearts are not really from my past. Not like the events in Tyler's Dilemma. But Five is loosely based on my best friend. Just as Percy is loosely based on myself.

There are quite a few things no one has either picked up on or commented on regarding Brandon. This is one of them, he is the cause for the chain of events that has transpired thus far. As you pointed out, it wasn't on purpose, and in the story, Brandon didn't know who Dylan was. Though he recognized Billy from Skater's Cabin and knowing his intelligence, he could guess who Billy was talking about. He still didn't know Dylan was Devin's brother or that he had a huge crush on Tyler. The reason why I ended the story here for Part One, Part Two gets a bit darker as this story comes together and Tyler finds out some things that have been hanging over their family for twenty years. Once Part Two is finished postings, I think it will all make sense. But the Billy Brandon connection is only one of something. I love your comments thanks for sharing.

If you were wondering, it didn't look great. 😝🙃 Two randy boys figuring out they want to do some Barn(swallowing) would jump at the chance. Even if they were misled to believe that love and romance were important. And we all agree its not! Its time to release the deleted scenes you shared with me. Thanks for that by the way. It was hot, who knew Barn(swallowing) was that type of farm. Is it Monday yet?

Someone told me there are pills for that

Yep, I'm a whore from way back.

I never go commando. I have way too many sexy undies to wear. Though I do remove them on occasion. Like a stiff breeze or the butt crack of dawn. Or like Wednesday.

What a great, wonderful chapter. I liked it a bunch. And did you know I was thinking Rumspringa was the name of the town. Learned something new everyday.

More intriguing, but I have my hands full with the restaurant, the husband, his two demon spawns, or as some call them, cats. Though I do love my older men, 60 upwards is perfect for me.

Dunno, you might be too young for me.

No need to go slumming in my neck of the woods without. a full round of shots and full body contamination suit.

My humor might be just as warped as yours, buddy, but don't expect me to put that in writing... That's like when Queen Cassie thought she could out smut me. She failed too. You misspelled phat I don't comment on a lot of stories I read. Last person who said that to me was drowned in a river of underwear pics. Sorry, I fell asleep for a moment. 👿 Monday, without my pants.

You are definitely doing lust wrong. You just haven't indulged in the filth and silliness that is my stories. Don't knock it til you try it!

You seem to be the rare author who understands my silliness. Many others take it like I'm insulting their writing or criticizing the story. My head just goes to those places when I'm reading something intriguing me. That's what you said! *cautiously unbuckles belt* For now its holding my attention. If it gets too romantic or romance driven I sometimes lose interest, but that's not a dig against your writing; you write wonderfully. I just have a hard time focusing on those types of stories. It's a me thing.

You weren't kidding when you said you're a romantic. That opening scene was a real stinker. Let's wait til we get married...can't believe I took off my pants to read this. The rest of the chapter, nice manipulation by August. You seem to be setting them up to play house on this new ranch. All sorts of mischief could happen. But alas, since they are going to wait until they are married for the fun stuff, and dudes can't get married in the Old West...we're back to zero sex again. Let's see what chapter six brings. See you next week!

Bethany likes to explore her more sexual urges than most girls. She's just as freaky as the boys, they just don't know it yet.

So The Malik meets a little girl...she can move earth. In the right hands and with enough power, it can be devastating. If I were The Malik, I'd be practicing with fire as much as possible. Miss Queen, can you make that happen, please? Thanks. If you really are gathering the Avengers to thwart some evil mountain guys, can the fourth one be a centaur? That would give The Malik something to ride...hey oh! This tale continues to get stranger with each passing chapter. I love it. But I was promised smut and I shall only wait so long before I write an interlude. *laughs evilly*.

This also confused me as well. And when you add in this sentence... the body of the man they had both loved in their own complicated, EDIT: I have since read all the comments back and forth and I kind of understand your reasoning. I would have chosen a different way to say it. But its your story and I'm along for the ride. Great chapter, I knew the Madame was a dastardly madame.

There was a dropped plot line that I abandoned for time, but since the first chapter, on the ledge, Percy was going to have nightmares and a fear of high places. But it bogged the story down in places where it shouldn't and didn't add enough emotional weight to include it.

I cut a huge chunk of Bethany's storyline for time, when I was trying to finish this story by Christmas last year. But Bethany is a character in her own right and you would have actually liked her bunches of oats.

That commenter sounds like a wonderful person. .

That might be a stumbling huge plot point. Maybe.

Maybe he's bi-sexual!?

But you are a good writer!

I swear I aged five years writing/righting this story. I usually have an idea of where I'm going and just let the characters go. But once I reach the end, I can go back and change or add things to make it tight. But what I did with this story, I was finishing the chapter and posting it right away. A few times a week. This was true flying by the seat of my pants. I shall never attempt to do such a thing again.

This story started off because of Lee, the first time I really was writing by the seat of my pants. It's serious, a bit dangerous, sexy, silly, really silly, then serious again, a bit dangerous, then completely off the wall silly, and it moves into a more serious last few chapters. If you stick with the story, I'm really curious to hear what you think.