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Jason Rimbaud

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  1. There won't be a part two. Frosted Hearts is finished! And thanks glob. Frosted Hearts is a Christmas story that follows Christmas In Glacier Bay. The next Christmas story will continue learning about the lives of this group of friends. It is supposed to be an annual event, but I'm thinking when next we see our friends, instead of one year between stories, they might be older, say over 21. First story, they were eighteen, second story, they were 19. Maybe next story will be f21. Thanks for reading sir. I always value your opinion.
  2. Thank you for reading! I"m off to finish Gabriel's Gambit new plot hole I created so I could finish this one.
  3. Bethany actually rented one of those luxury coaches (fancy bus) and two drivers to drive Five across the country in 2 1/2 days. But that chapter was already going longer than I wanted. Even in the very beginning of the chapter, Five's parents are shown to be older, and very much absentee parents though they love him, they are a bit selfish. It is what it is. Not everyone has perfect parents. That is one of the reasons I decided to use this particular ending. I felt exploring them outside of PineCrest would be interesting and give me lots of places to go regarding them. Percy still hasn't fully understood just how close he came to never waking up again. In my head, his heart stopped multiple times due to loss of blood. It is never good when you have to be intubated. And once they got him stable, they had to immediately try and repair his elbow. Percy losing his dream was always going to happen. I can't have Percy playing ball. Because he would have eventually made it to the major and would have stayed in the closet. We can always hope. . Thanks for reading along and giving me permission to get away from Christmas stories.
  4. Thank you. I love happy endings but I also love realistic consequences. And being hit in the head has major consequences. Being knocked unconscious does damage to your brain. And even though he was only "grazed" in the elbow, it doesn't take much to destroy that joint. and yes, Five Daddy is going to make everything better. Thanks for the comments and sticking with this story.
  5. The snow crunched under Five’s boots and was much louder than he would have liked. But thus far, they hadn’t seen Ira or John, for that matter. Ethan had Five’s arm over his shoulder and was helping him walk through the deep snow. “Are you doing okay?” Five was breathing heavy, but he nodded determinedly. “How much further?” They were both whispering, just in case one of the boys was outside looking for them. Ethan had hidden his snowmobile up a small hill and behind a thick gr
  6. I'm really tempted, after this wraps up, to go ahead and write the darker version with the other ending. And commit to all the things I left out. There was an entire backstory with Five's girlfriend, and how freaky she is with her "girlfriends" and her plans for Five once Christmas is over.
  7. We were speaking on this somewhere, you and I, and I was mentioning I had to cut scenes and go back to clean up things. This plot was cut, we'd follow John while an unknown masked guy ties him up and abuses him. I felt it was a bit too dark for the story I wanted to tell. But it would show, throughout the story that Ira has a very complicated sexuality and his father was abusive and very homophobic. Ira hid from his father while the younger brother, Ethan was a bit more out so bore the brunt of many attacks from both his father and brother. Not sure if you remember, but the scene in the Superstore, where Percy interrupts an older guy trying to pay for sex with a younger guy, that was supposed to be Ira pimping out neigherhood kids. The idea being, he used to pimp out Ethan until he grew to old. All these were cut, one for GA's guidelines and it was darker than I wanted to go. and this was supposed to be about Percy and Five, and introducing these other elements, without context would have gotten confusing and pushed this already overblown story into never-ending status. We'll see what happens. In the other ending I chose, Ethan's story would have been utilized more. If you remember, when he is talking to Five on the phone, and they are trading photos, Ethan was actually behind the house looking in through the window at Five in real time. That is why Percy had to wait for him to arrive as he had to run around the house. In that conversation, Ethan was being honest when he spoke about his homelife. But at this point, Ethan would have taken a darker turn, and I only talked briefly about the stolen undies, the cum stain on the bed. But had the other ending happened, Ethan would have used Little Five, and at one point would have come across Percy in the middle of the night while Five was sleeping, and would have had sex with Percy, Percy believing it was Five as the lights were out. Ethan would have been more stalkerish and violent towards the two and be the main villian instead of the creeper he turned out to be. Ethan knows the type of person Ira is, and understands that Percy and Five would not make it out alive if he left it alone. I'd like to think that this isn't the first time Ira robbed and murdered people. I tried to make it that John was being controlled by Ira and was not a criminal but Ira dominated him so fully that he went along. We don't know what Percy may or may not have seen on the video screens regarding Ethan's involvement. But the fact that he already saved Five, and the fact that he understands concussions and wants Five to get as far away from PineCrest as possible. And in his mind, he can watch everything on the monitors, and help should be arriving in thirty minutes or so. It was a calculated risk but as they say, never split up.
  8. That's a tough decision. I think we'd have a wonderful time tooling about San Francisco.
  9. Stop it, you're making me blush! I actually really enjoyed writing this silly, crazy story. This is the first time in writing where I really didn't have plan more than an ending and an opening. I knew Percy was going to be hanging over a cliff in chapter one, and I knew Percy would be running from a crazy person in the last chapter. The shit in the middle was just me having fun. I want my christmas stories to be over the top as most christmas stories are about gifts and the magic of the season. I wanted mine to be dildo's and lots of dirty gay sex. . Thank you for sticking in there with me. Not sure if you know what happened, but a band of raccoons attacked me, stole my wallet and my identity. It was harrowing. . Actually I tripped leaving Safeway after work one night.
  10. Gabriel's Gambit will start posting next week. Now that I figured...something out, it's smooth sailing for both stories.
  11. I can't finish Gabriel's Gambit until Frosted Hearts is completed. . I think next Christmas story is going to center around Jason again. The gang will finally be 21 and I have a whole new idea planned for that scenario. This year was snow, maybe next year will be tropical.
  12. Seeing as Frosted Hearts took just over six months, I could probably have it done And yes, 2027 looks like a good goal to shoot for. I want to finish Tyler's Dilemma Part Two. I want to start 2027 with a fresh slate, all old projects completed so I can start posting in 2028 all new material.
  13. Yes, I did make it rather clear that someone was inside the house. Ethan was the logical choice. Though I put in a few red herrings as to his motivations. And just remember, back when I was deciding on an ending, one ends happy, the other ends not so happy. Ethan's story was heavily affected in that decision. And I just hope I can stick the landing. The last chapter, I promise, for this storyline, will be posted on Saturday. Percy and the whole gang will be seen in the third annual Christmas story that may or may not be posted this year. . I know that means its not annual but as I plotted out the story, its growing at least as big as Frosted Hearts and I can't put myself into that pressure cooker again.
  14. Believe it or not, there was a reason for the delay, and I won't say why but it will be made clear soon enough. I got a stupid idea and decided to do it here instead of the planned idea down the road. Sometimes I think I get too clever for my own good.
  15. Truthfully Mr. The Dog, I would never throw tomatoes at your face. I'm sorry.... I would throw something else. I'm so sorry.
  16. BY the way, this was supposed to be a short story for Christmas. It is now June and I'm just finishing it. God I suck.
  17. Saturday, final part will be posted, and then Gabriel Gambit will start posting the final four or five chapters shortly after that.
  18. John was their server at the Monkey Sandwich place, that Percy offered to take him home with them. Percy also ran into John at the sex toy store, and they talked about someone getting spanked in the store, turns out, that was John getting spanked and Ira was the spanker.
  19. Percy took off down the hall as he heard someone shout, “He’s upstairs.” He barely made it to his room as he heard someone charging up the stairs behind him. He slammed the door shut behind him and locked it. He ran to his night table and pulled open the top drawer. “Fuck.” The holster was empty. Where had he put his pistol? He whirled towards the door when he heard someone shout, “Don’t make me break this door down.” What the fuck was Ira Bellows doing in his house with a g
  20. If you think the stories I write/right are silly, that's on a whole new level of silliness. Though to be fair, it's not all my fault, Lee has contributed to a lot of that silliness.
  21. Jason Rimbaud

    Uprising

    Thank you, I am well on the way to mending. I am mobile! woot. And my life is returning to normal. It's a long story but needless to say, I am on the mend and back to my silly self. For all those I am grateful you have been patient. But I had a silly idea and to have things happen that I wanted to happen, I had to work out an angle on another story. So the next few chapters have been delayed first by my injury and then by me scraping an entire ending to another story and re-organizing this one. The good news, that other story will be posted by Thursday, and Gabriel Gambit will be resuming shortly, and I'm mean shortly after that. Thank you again for everyone's patience.
  22. Okay, first I want to say thank you for everyone being so patient. Not sure if everyone knows, but I fell down and broke my foot and had to have surgery to put my ankle back together again. I was bedridden for three weeks and had a slight bout of depression. If anyone is really interested in hearing the silly details, check out my status page Wry Ramblings From A Hot Wing. Needless to say, whilst I was in recovery, I had this idea, and I scraped the entire last chapter once again. I needed to do something that would impact another story and I had to get it just write. As everyone knows, Glacier Bay is a series of shared connected world and I wanted...anyway, long story short. I finished the last chapter. I have going through a round of edits and will be posting it by this Thursday morning. FOr those of you who are wanting Gabriel's Gambit to continue, let's say I was inspired on that and we shall be posting that conclusion to that story as well. Thank you for patience and understanding. Having a major surgery kind of sent my world into a tizzy and I had to juggle a lot of things to keep my life, restaurant, and writing on some level course.
  23. This makes so much sense. One of my stories had about 100 views per chapter and then, chapter 13 had (I don't remember exact numbers but you get the idea) labeled Christmas Present, went to over a 1000 views in a few hours. It always made me scratch my head why views per chapter average close and then suddenly a random chapter has like five times more views. So I am assuming views now are more closer to actual than previous, that helps a bunch.
  24. I think I might have missed the survey, but I love the screenshots and I'm excited to see changes.
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