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Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Not everyone can be gay, maybe bi-sexual, lets share one and all.- 43 comments
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Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Chicken
Remember today is Monday, so you already paid back the money. You're welcome.- 43 comments
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“You stink,” Five said as they drove down the snowy road. Then he added with a smirk, “Percy Baby.” Percy glared at him, then refocused on the road. Five shrugged. “It’s the truth. You smell like piss and diesel.” “I saved a boy’s life,” Percy said flatly. “I think I’ve earned some leeway.” It turned out that Mario had a broken arm, three broken ribs, and a punctured kidney from his fall. While it wasn’t certain how long Mario could have lasted on the ice ledge or how long it w
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
I just want to know if said ass is encased with damp boxers? -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
I am for sure, wearing shoes that have laces. But I think if you threatened to steal my exotic underwear stash, you'd get a lot further. I think that's a fair assessment. Wow, I have a super long name, I'd be dehydrated as well as have a frostbitten peen. Your to do list, with the exeception of doing repairs themselves, is or might be fairly accurate. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Or undersexed? Either way a great idea. Some shirtless carpenter's, banging away with hammers into things that need to be banged. Oh wait, its in the winter. Back to the drawing board. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
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Forgot to mention, I was super drunk when I responded last night. On a different note, you should have read the comment I wrote last night from your comment on Frosted Hearts. This morning it was so bad, it didn't make sense. Last time I drink eggnog and Absinthe together. Oh yea, if you think what Timothy did to Jason was a bit messed up, just wait until you find out what Five does to Percy. hahaha.
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
I do love the snow. Here in California I haven't seen snow is over twenty one years. Maybe more snow shenniagans makes there way into the story. We'll see. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
First off, you don't have to censor yourself. I am curious as to what letters you left out. Holy Sh could stand for so many things. Holy ShOES Holy ShUCKS Holy ShORE Holy ShIT Holy ShERRY What were you trying to say?? Thank you, But I'm in the same boat as you, I don't know where this is going either. I know the ending, but this is an experiment of seat of the pants writing. Merry Christmas!- 64 comments
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
So this is what it feels like to be on the other end of a comment. . I will be the first to admit, my secondary characters, in all my stories, are unreliable narrators. Five started the lie and Percy couldn't help himself, he had to insert himself into the story and take a shot on Five's manhood. We'll see what happened to Mary, maybe next years story. And who knows if the bond is broken or if things have just changed because high school is over. I nearly laughed myself into craziness with this comment. And I deserved it. Jason's are all assholes. After twenty something chapters of my comments, I so deserve this statement. Percy and Five can't help themselves. At the end of the day, they might be the glue that holds everyone together. And are the six really splintered? All the text said is some of the them went on vacations with their families. Jason and Stephan had a strained relationship, maybe, but since Five and Percy already lied in the last story, what makes you think they are telling the truth now? I still don't know why I chose this plot point, how can you keep up a story for twenty-five days with only two characters, you'd never do something so idiotic. I think when the chips are down, true friends prove why they are friends. Percy seems to be willing to put everything on the line to help others. We'll see if that same selfless act proves prudent for someone who is on the cusp of his dreams. Considering they are twins, they have to come back, you had twins in your story, I already admitted I'm drafting off your success. sorry not sorry. Me too, Since that is one of the major plot points, I shall not be discussing that at this time. -
Hahah, Owen's story is further explored in an upcoming story called Captivated By Kai. We shall see how accurate your observations are. Timothy seems to have a bad rep. You are correct, it was a fucked up thing to do. But his intentions were pure. A strong group of friends, speaking from experience, do not understand boundaries that other people do. Timothy orchestrated the entire evening to "force" Jason into accepting himself. It was a pure act that was executed poorly. Timothy is a pure friend that did not understand boundaries. And anyone that says this is unrealistic, obviously never met me or my friends. . Thank you. Praise from you makes me giddy. .
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I'm not sure how I missed this comment, sorry for the late response, nearly a year. Percy and Five were two of my favorites as well. So much so, my latest Christmas In Glacier Bay story, Frosted Hearts, just posted the first chapter yesterday starring Percy and Five, this time all alone in a mountain cottage. They get up to lots of unhinged shenanigans.
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Act II: The Ghost of Christmas Past
Jason Rimbaud commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Act II: The Ghost of Christmas Past
you and @Krista drive me crazy with all that kind of talk. I guess I'll have to be patient and see what the characters say regarding handjobs. -
Act II: The Ghost of Christmas Past
Jason Rimbaud commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Act II: The Ghost of Christmas Past
First Ghost was midnight, a touching reminder that what we once was, we could again become. Then Santa shows up with a boner? What the actual fuck? I swear to all that is holy, if this story ends and Sexy Santa doesn't at least get a handjob, you and I are going to fight! Not physically, but online, hopefully with at least six states between us. And from me it will be mostly praise, but I've ignored the whole brandy and eggnog thing but I'll bring it up again. You have been warned. Sweet and yearnful of times past. Ryan was a great character. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Percy had to be a baseball player. One it was established in the first story, Christmas In Glacier Bay. Second, blame the fabulous @Krista, she wrote a baseball player so I had to have one. I'm following after better writers, drafting on their success as it were. But a tight end, that's like chapter six. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Full disclosure, the whole boner comment was a joke, Mario was hurt and in a lot of pain with a broken arm and maybe broken ribs. He was not aroused. I'm sure whatever Mario said after that comment stated as much. Too bad I have forgotten my high school Spanish, I really want to know what he said. Okay dear reader, you give me one idea and I'll incorporate that idea into the story somehow. This entire story is an experiment why not make it more difficult for myself. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
I’m in your corner, let’s try it together. -
Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
When I read that I was surprised as well. Like geez, give the boy a break, he almost fell off a cliff. percy baby told me to cowboy up, he’s kind of rude. I hope he is better in the next crisis. -
So many things that need to be said. Team Colt all the way! Since you didn't mean to destroy my Christmas, I shall let this slide. And I'm usually not a mean person, so the the threat of tying your shoelaces together was about as bad as I can do to the fabulous Krista (who happens to hate Jolt. The writing doesn't point to it, like you aren't the fucking author) Yes how you managed to dangle anything in front of me seeing as your a g...look at the pretty lights. I just want to see someone's ass in wet underwear, is that too much to ask? I doubt that I will get that at the birthday party. New Theory, When Joel was on that bridge, he managed to do something that has put him in a coma. He's actually in the hospital and we are seeing his coma dreams. How else can one explain how you managed to write a story backwards some 40K words. And Joel is going to wake up with Roy in the next bed, their eyes meet, and Davin is forgotten as they ride off into the baseball diamond. to beat *mumbles the name of the school* 78 to 0, just like his new number. Can't wait for the next chapter, you are write/right, its slow. But the journey is so much fun. Don't change anything, unless you go to my outline. There is still time.
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Number one: Back then I'm sure you wore shoelaces, I would have sabotaged your ass! Number Two: You avoided your new name instead of embracing it. You are on notice! J (searching for your husbands number, then bribe him to buy you all new shoes with laces, then commence my dastardly plot) You shall not escape!
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hahahaha, that's evil!
