Jason Rimbaud

Thanks Lee. The next chapter has two things I love, shopping and more shopping. Plus we learn a little bit more about Five and Percy and their competitive nature. . In case anyone doesn't remember, Percy and Five were also in Christmas In Glacier Bay. Though that story centered around Jason and Timothy more. I didn't want to have another story with the same five guys, so I sent everyone out on vacation to exotic places.

When I started this story, I was just writing and suddenly the girl was in the road, one thing led to another and I'm writing an action scene. I was pretty impressed with myself. There may or may not be more such scenes in this tale. I'm just having fun with this story and letting my imagination go where it may. I know the ending, I dreamt it a few weeks.ago. So when I sat down, I had no idea how I would get there. My short story is much bigger but I really liked how it turned out. Expect the postings to be rather short in between. I'm trying to get it all posted before Christmas. We'll see how I do.

I wish I could cruise around on a yacht. Rich people... I don't know shit about baseball, I just looked up a few terms, knowing me I used them wrong. But I digress. As for the age of Mario, I'm not sure. I don't speak Spanish either. I'm the author and I know less than the reader does half the time. But I don't judge.

Thank you! Dylan was not easy for me to write, as I had accepted myself pretty early and never had those feelings. I know many friends who did, and they are no longer around. Sometimes the self hatred is too much to overcome. As for sucking a dick, yes please. Always. . As for when Part 2 will release. I kind of got distracted by a christmas story. I thought it was going to be a short story, it's now a full size novel and I just started posting it today. So once I'm finished with that. Part Two is nearly finished. But it's not quite where I want it. So I'm not going to post it until its ready. It's a very important story to me and I want to make sure I get it right.

Percy Adams toyed with his half-filled Mocca as he glanced at the arrival board. Flight 201 was set to arrive in ten minutes. Of course, it had said that when he arrived two hours earlier. Nelson Miles Moore the Fifth, or Five, as his friends and family called him, had already had his plane delayed multiple times by the weather. As it stood right now, they wouldn’t make it to his grandfather’s mountain cottage until after midnight. Percy looked out the window at the snow and wondered

Percy Adams invites his best friend, Nelson Miles Moore the Fifth, to join him at PineCrest, his families winter home, to oversee repairs before Christmas. There they meet the mysterious Ethan who begins to invade their budding relationship. Will Ethan destroy their chance at happiness, or will Percy realize that hiding who he is will keep his heart frosted forever. Join me for Another Christmas In Glacier Bay

I love Christmas stories as much as I like Christmas. Before I got sucked into my own Christmas story, I had planned on doing my top twenty-five Christmas movies, with in-depth review counting down to Christmas Day. I got the first six done and then I...doesn't matter but that idea has to wait for another time. Maybe I'll do it in July. So your re-imaging the classic Christmas story is intriguing and cleverly done. My one critique, Eggnog and Brandy is gross. I much prefer Bourbon. Funny and highly entertaining that rides the line between absurd (think inner monologue) and genius (Sexy Santa who wanted some help)

hahahahahahaaha I love the honesty. 😝 It means nothing. It's the same principle as six of one half a dozen of the other. It's British so of course it doesn't make sense. Trust me, they did. While you were sleeping. I once fooled around with the brother of a really good female friend. We were on the floor and she was up in the bed. Never got caught either. We were sixteen. It's the amazing techno colored author known as the fabulous Krista. You're welcome.

Colt is heterosexual, Joel is not. You freaking mis-spelled Jolt!!!! (I'm trying to swear less today) The whole scene with the principal was a bit anti-climatic. She must have a food fetish. All she did was watch two teenage boys eat. Creepy. After all that, Jolt decided to play sports ball anyway. So what was the whole thing about fighting the traitor label? Because now he is, or isn't, who cares about sports ball outside of Javin, who we did not see offer any Christmas blowjobs. You mentioned that Colt does not know about Davin, which destroys another theory. Are you bashing christmas cheer on purpose? Or are you punishing me because I missed the posting of this chapter due to cooking whole chickens? I'm beginning to suspect that you are not following the outline I gave you early this year. I really can't with you right now. Now for something completely different. Joel seems to accept that his future resides with this crazy group of people called *mumbles the school name because I forgot it*. I like the fact he seems to be noticing boys and how they look. Though I disagree with the author and those who read her words that Joel was blatantly staring at the teacher. I did not get that when I read the pages. As for Colt mentioning it, I think its really telling that Joel forgot to react. Maybe being a traitor will calm down his inner craziness. He seems to be less existing and attempting to find a place. Colt reeks of sandalwood in this chapter, but he's treating Joel like one of the twins, a person to be teased. If I were to rate this chapter 1 to 5, I'd have to give it a 6. PS: I'm one of the only readers I think that doesn't care about Toby, Colby birthday party. No sexy fun will be had there, and Joel will only get morose. Bonus chapters please.

I was on the train and couldn't say what I wanted to say. Mainly because I lost my glasses, or should I say stepped on them and broke them. Either way, I can barely see my phone. So I had to wait to get to my laptop. J

You have some explaining to do.

I've been calling my best friend T for Tyler for years. I also chose Tyler's name in honor of him. For full disclosure, Tyler is very much straight and not completely happy that I made him a bottom in my story. That's the reward for being my friend. Hmm, should it be A for Asshat? Ashley is made up from several of my friends. The things she says is based on how they speak even though they are in their 50's. Though we've been friends forever so I let it slide.

As you and @Ctwh88 pointed out, the narrative is flawed. The idea was to convey the self hatred internally in Dylan's mind. In his mind, that is what gay people are, holes to be used. In writing a scene where I tried to toe the line, I did not want to depict Ryan as forcing anyone, I might have gotten too deep into Dylan's internal struggle where subtext was inferred. That's a failure I will more than likely go back and correct. Because the story needs Dylan to be in control of his own future. Ryan was almost just a sex toy as far as Dylan was concerned. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, it's insightful to see how the best intentions can be thwarted by sloppy depictions of characters and motivations.

As usual, I misspoke or mistyped as it were. As your comment points out I used the wrong word usage. Though I think the total comment makes it clear, Dylan did not do anything he didn't want to. Ryan recognized Dylan and took advantage of the situation but Dylan had the free choice. It was my intent to write it like that, nowhere in the narrative does it say forced, and there is no reason to get hung up on semantics. I will never write a scene depicting Sexual Assault unless the perpetrator is immediately punished for his actions.

Thanksgiving is three days of work. I roasted whole chickens, I do a honey glaze chicken, roasted sweet potato with brown sugar and hot honey, asparagus, carrot ginger rice, no-bake cookies and cherry pie with home-made caramel ice cream. Usually it's about thirty but this year its only 22. Christmas I make Sweet & Sour Pork, Chicken curry, stir fried rice, home-made noodles, and cream cheese ragoons. For dessert its usually a fried bannana with home-made caramel and ice cream. Easter, I don't celebrate religious holidays.

Hush

Isn’t the referee in baseball the guy that holds up his hand when they kick a field goal?

So you said you were already finished with like five or six parts a few chapters ago. Don't lie to us and say you won't post next week. You could upload it right now with a scheduled post date. I still have my tickets on standby Miss @Krista Don't make me sabotage your shoes. Or do it, I dare you. I'll come over and help cook, we can do each other's toes and drink chardonnay. And by chardonnay I mean whiskey, but I do paint my nails. I'm sure your husband would love me, I can talk sports balls and know how to put gas in a truck. I'll even wear my sparkly cowboy boots and leather chaps. I'll fit right in on the farm.

All I saw was yes I did. 😪 And to think, my new christmas story has a baseball player for the MC, features twins, male and female, and doesn't have a hint of sandalwood anywhere. Plus the villain is a girl, aptly named Krista Dogooder. Might be a misnomer but I'm uneducated so who knows. Long Live Jolt!!!! even if he has poor circulation. I have a spot to warm those hands right up.

Not to hijack the thread, but it's only Krista's and she already hates me. The narrative around Custer's last stand has been recently discovered by "us" to be completely false. The "indian" account weaves a much more grisly ending to our famous general. Nor do they believe he was even alive for a last stand. Goes to show you how myths become fact, especially during that time in our past. J (who did not go on a two week rabbit hole reading letters written by an army scout, he was one of the few people to leave the valley alive)

I was thinking the same thing, though I couldn't find a way to put it into words for some reason. Maybe @Krista has some hillbilly definition for traitor. Probably from smelling so much sandalwood.

I kind of like this new Joel, much better than the other one who was always whining about baseball and hiding in his isolation. It's like he finally grew some balls and is at least making his own way in the world. Is he doing it in the right way? I'd say yes, school spirit and blindly following colors is stupid. Next he should wear a rainbow flag. No reason to hide now. "After last night, I thought you'd at least wake up in a good mood." For a handy j, I don't smile for less than some BJ action Davin. Beside's your hands were cold.

After the last two amazing chapters, things cool off for a moment. Shawn/Sean showers and makes new friends. Next Chapter looks to be interesting as classes begin. But I'm done for the day, I must focus on my own writing.

Like any true military state, there are always watchers and paranoid A-holes that claw their way to the top. The director noticed what no one else seemed too. This means Shawn/Sean better be on his toes, learn to adapt, to assimilate but never acquiesce.

If all sex is slightly disappointing, and you've made sure to establish that more than a few times, the Observers from chapter one gave him a big dick and a special booty hole, I'm thinking it might get him to save the planet. And talk? Sometimes I good ole fistfight is the best release for aggression. With the medical achievments, I saw Shawn/Sean, ball up your fists and hit em back. Even if you lose, you gain street cred.