Jason Rimbaud

I was thinking that, but there isn't an ending, as it was 120 pages of Percy and Five flirting with each other. Though a hot Indian boy named Nuresh was a bit of a distraction for Percy throughout, but I'll see what I can do with it. For now I'm on chapter 15, about 98K words. But the ending is in sight. I've already gone back and edited a few things in the first two chapters to make sure certain things fit. As I've barely had the time to re-write.

I think being a chef, I'm obsessed with smells. One character in each story seems to be afflicted with that quirk. With Percy and Five, the idea was to see how horny I could make them before they explode. Off page, this game of gay chicken had already gone on in the summer for nearly two weeks, so for them, it's been building for six months. And since they are so comfortable with one another, they seem to be pushing it further than most friends would dare. Owen kind of got a bad rap in the first story. A lot of the comments were negative about him. But I liked Owen so much, I wrote his story, one year before Christmas In Glacier Bay happened. Before he realized he was gay, and before he met Brandon from Tyler's Dilemma. Owen and Brandon had already broken up before Christmas In Glacier Bay happened. The story is called Captivated By Kai, and centers on Owen's realization of who he is. It's a fun, twisted tale of sexual escapades over the span of a weekend spent on a lake house. As for a love triangle, Jason was not into Stephan, so there was no love triangle. Stephan sat on the fence and Owen scooped the boy up. At this point in the story, Jason and Owen are having some problems, but they are basically together though distance is a real factor due to Jason being in college and Owen pursuing his dream of becoming a chef. Who knows if they work out or not? That's another story for another Christmas.

I have it on good authority that Five is not gay. He's just hyper competitive, or is that spelled wrong? Maybe manipulative. I never graduated so what do I know? I wish I could include the prologue that was intended for this story that explains a bit more detail about their game of gay chicken and how it started. But it was seven chapters and around 120 pages. Then I thought about releasing it first, but then I wouldn't have time to post the Christmas story. So I'm not sure what I'm going to do with it. I might release it as bonus content once this Christmas craziness is over. Or refurbish it into another story.

It's based on Cedar Falls Montana or Colorado, I just googled a lot of mountain towns. Glacier Bay is my home town, just different businesses but the layout of the town is almost exact.

Not everyone can be gay, maybe bi-sexual, lets share one and all.

Remember today is Monday, so you already paid back the money. You're welcome.

“You stink,” Five said as they drove down the snowy road. Then he added with a smirk, “Percy Baby.” Percy glared at him, then refocused on the road. Five shrugged. “It’s the truth. You smell like piss and diesel.” “I saved a boy’s life,” Percy said flatly. “I think I’ve earned some leeway.” It turned out that Mario had a broken arm, three broken ribs, and a punctured kidney from his fall. While it wasn’t certain how long Mario could have lasted on the ice ledge or how long it w

I just want to know if said ass is encased with damp boxers?

Done.

My last name is 19 letters.

I am for sure, wearing shoes that have laces. But I think if you threatened to steal my exotic underwear stash, you'd get a lot further. I think that's a fair assessment. Wow, I have a super long name, I'd be dehydrated as well as have a frostbitten peen. Your to do list, with the exeception of doing repairs themselves, is or might be fairly accurate.

Or undersexed? Either way a great idea. Some shirtless carpenter's, banging away with hammers into things that need to be banged. Oh wait, its in the winter. Back to the drawing board.

What could it be??!

Forgot to mention, I was super drunk when I responded last night. On a different note, you should have read the comment I wrote last night from your comment on Frosted Hearts. This morning it was so bad, it didn't make sense. Last time I drink eggnog and Absinthe together. Oh yea, if you think what Timothy did to Jason was a bit messed up, just wait until you find out what Five does to Percy. hahaha.

I do love the snow. Here in California I haven't seen snow is over twenty one years. Maybe more snow shenniagans makes there way into the story. We'll see.

First off, you don't have to censor yourself. I am curious as to what letters you left out. Holy Sh could stand for so many things. Holy ShOES Holy ShUCKS Holy ShORE Holy ShIT Holy ShERRY What were you trying to say?? Thank you, But I'm in the same boat as you, I don't know where this is going either. I know the ending, but this is an experiment of seat of the pants writing. Merry Christmas!

So this is what it feels like to be on the other end of a comment. . I will be the first to admit, my secondary characters, in all my stories, are unreliable narrators. Five started the lie and Percy couldn't help himself, he had to insert himself into the story and take a shot on Five's manhood. We'll see what happened to Mary, maybe next years story. And who knows if the bond is broken or if things have just changed because high school is over. I nearly laughed myself into craziness with this comment. And I deserved it. Jason's are all assholes. After twenty something chapters of my comments, I so deserve this statement. Percy and Five can't help themselves. At the end of the day, they might be the glue that holds everyone together. And are the six really splintered? All the text said is some of the them went on vacations with their families. Jason and Stephan had a strained relationship, maybe, but since Five and Percy already lied in the last story, what makes you think they are telling the truth now? I still don't know why I chose this plot point, how can you keep up a story for twenty-five days with only two characters, you'd never do something so idiotic. I think when the chips are down, true friends prove why they are friends. Percy seems to be willing to put everything on the line to help others. We'll see if that same selfless act proves prudent for someone who is on the cusp of his dreams. Considering they are twins, they have to come back, you had twins in your story, I already admitted I'm drafting off your success. sorry not sorry. Me too, Since that is one of the major plot points, I shall not be discussing that at this time.

Hahah, Owen's story is further explored in an upcoming story called Captivated By Kai. We shall see how accurate your observations are. Timothy seems to have a bad rep. You are correct, it was a fucked up thing to do. But his intentions were pure. A strong group of friends, speaking from experience, do not understand boundaries that other people do. Timothy orchestrated the entire evening to "force" Jason into accepting himself. It was a pure act that was executed poorly. Timothy is a pure friend that did not understand boundaries. And anyone that says this is unrealistic, obviously never met me or my friends. . Thank you. Praise from you makes me giddy. .

I'm not sure how I missed this comment, sorry for the late response, nearly a year. Percy and Five were two of my favorites as well. So much so, my latest Christmas In Glacier Bay story, Frosted Hearts, just posted the first chapter yesterday starring Percy and Five, this time all alone in a mountain cottage. They get up to lots of unhinged shenanigans.

you and @Krista drive me crazy with all that kind of talk. I guess I'll have to be patient and see what the characters say regarding handjobs.

First Ghost was midnight, a touching reminder that what we once was, we could again become. Then Santa shows up with a boner? What the actual fuck? I swear to all that is holy, if this story ends and Sexy Santa doesn't at least get a handjob, you and I are going to fight! Not physically, but online, hopefully with at least six states between us. And from me it will be mostly praise, but I've ignored the whole brandy and eggnog thing but I'll bring it up again. You have been warned. Sweet and yearnful of times past. Ryan was a great character.

Thats funny, because it means I don't have the energy to breathe! hahaah

Percy had to be a baseball player. One it was established in the first story, Christmas In Glacier Bay. Second, blame the fabulous @Krista, she wrote a baseball player so I had to have one. I'm following after better writers, drafting on their success as it were. But a tight end, that's like chapter six.

Full disclosure, the whole boner comment was a joke, Mario was hurt and in a lot of pain with a broken arm and maybe broken ribs. He was not aroused. I'm sure whatever Mario said after that comment stated as much. Too bad I have forgotten my high school Spanish, I really want to know what he said. Okay dear reader, you give me one idea and I'll incorporate that idea into the story somehow. This entire story is an experiment why not make it more difficult for myself.

I’m in your corner, let’s try it together.