Jason Rimbaud

Wow! Living on a boat, I would get seasick! Welcome and explore around, lots of fun stories and people to chat with from all over the world.

Welcome to GayAuthors! And as others have pointed out, we all believe anyone can write with varying degrees of skill. And the more you write the better you will become as in anything you do. I can only imagine how difficult it is for you in the UK right now due to the language barrier. We are social beings that need to communicate with others so I can understand the frustration and the challenge of meeting friends. From what you said, you have two different goals in mind. So I think you should approach the two in different ways. 1. You want to get better and reading and writing in English. There is only one way to get better at English and that is to practice. See if there are tutors that can help you, maybe ask your teacher if they know of anyone that can help you. And practice, practice, practice. Read as much as you can, and when you don't understand the meaning of a word, look it up right then, write it on a card with the definition so you can go back and memorize it. I also think GayAuthor's is a great resource for your to practice reading and writing in English, with other people that will not make fun of you. And other people that can relate to you being gay. Start reading the forums, jump in when you think you have something to say. And don't be scared if you don't get all the words right. In your above post we could understand all the points you wanted to make. So you are understood. And don't get discouraged, English is not an easy language to learn. Keep working to get better. 2. You want to start writing down the stories inside your head. IF you are more comfortable writing in Romanian, then begin writing in that language. Learning how to write a story is difficult enough without the added pressure of writing in a language you aren't comfortable in yet. So write the story in your native language, later on you can find translation programs, or after you are more comfortable writing in English, you can translate it yourself. If you need help coming up with ideas on what to write about, look up an entry in the Blog section called Prompts. That is a great place to find inspiration for story ideas that you might be able to tie back to an idea you have in your head. And never be scared to ask for help or guidance, that is why the online community is here, to help others in their journey. Good luck and welcome to GA! J

Everything you said I so agree. Plus if he does have an ulterior motive, he tipped his hand in revealing himself. He is ringing out all my predator alarms,

In the three stories for Glacier Bay I have written already, Stephen is not featured, though Owen and Percy make cameo appearances. There is an outline for a continuation of Jason and company journey that takes up about six months after the Christmas party after graduation and before they separate for college. But that hasn't been written yet. I don't know what order the stories will be released, one takes place in 1996, one takes place 1997 and 2018, one takes place in 2022 the same year as Christmas IN Glacier Bay is set in. And then there are several short stories adding detail and bridging gaps between stories. In Glacier Bay, Covid never happened. Anyway,

Thank you! I was trying for a more internal crisis about acceptance as a pathway for self-discovery. I didn't want it to be a big deal to anyone but Jason. As I do think we are in the timeframe where young people don't have the same bullshit to deal with than I. There is a much longer version of this story, uncensored about what Jason was doing when Tim knocked on the door. And it wasn't a pair of boxers Jason was hiding under his foot. But I felt that didn't really add anything except for some fun to write prose about peens.

And that was not my intent to have any criticism. And when you responded I did feel awful because when I read it back, not only did it not make sense, it also implied things I didn't feel. So not that you need validation to your point, you were right. Note to Self: Always read your comment back before hitting the add button. And you should never comment unless you have the time to formulate your thoughts in a coherent manner. In my head it was a glowing comment of your story, in reality it's more like my own writings, I need a strong editor to make me look good. Thank you for understanding my "stupidity".

That comment was made over the span of a few hours while I was at work. I'd write a bit, go help in the kitchen, come back get another sentence and then go back to the kitchen. So if I didn't complete my thought, that's on me. What I thought I said, I clicked away twice and was upset at myself for not going through because of how the story landed. So that part probably got deleted over the span of the day. I enjoyed the story very much. It hit me in deeper ways than you probably intended. It's in my top three of all the entries for this contest, so I think very highly of it. One of your best ones for sure. As for the thing that made me click away, it had nothing to do about your writing or skill. I don't like weird/unique names for characters. And yes you explain why due to their Hawaiian heritage and it makes perfect sense in the story. And if I wouldn't have clicked away I would have read that a few pages in that you weren't just calling someone Blue for the sake of it. There was thought behind it, intention. I only mentioned the parents fighting because somewhere in the comments, someone made a reference to that. I said, believing that other people have read the comments, don't worry about that, because it's not what the story was about. Hope that clarifies my intent.

I am neither a dog person or a cat person. Currently I have two cats living in my house, but that's because I love him. I could live without pets. But I would like to ask my own question. Why is it, when someone finds out I do not like dogs around me, ever, they get offended like I tried to harm their pet or something? Why is it you feel the need to try to convert me into this cult that traps you in an endless cycle of barking, pooping, and slobbering? I'm asking because my husband is a dog person but I will not bow to his demands. Why can't you dog peeps let me live without dogs? Why?????

I love it when an author chooses a title that correctly captures what a story is. And this story was completely off the rails. I didn't understand a frigging thing once the white light took them. But I loved every moment, every paragraph. It's weird, pointless, intriguing and I would read this amaze balls story if you continued. I would be confused, but entertained at the absurdity of the narrative. Along with one other story, I've read this one about six times, keep it coming. And even if there is goblin porn, I'd continue. Thank you for giving us this entry SA. J

A great story about self-acceptance and finding the strength to declare your truth to those that matter most. A deeply moving story that anyone looking for something more than teen romance, I would say give this a try.

I am going to admit to two things. When this story was first posted, I read the first sentence and clicked away. The second thing I am going to admit, after the SA's were revealed, I went back to this story and read to the twelfth sentence and clicked away for the second time. There was one other story in this contest that I had the same reaction too and have yet been able to finish it. Let's forget about the subplot of fighting parents that was never resolved, because this story is very much about Blue and his journey of self acceptance. His parents wanted him to be comfortable in his own skin so they sent him to a therapist where he slowly becomes to accept the fact that he might not be able to live up to his parents expectations in regards to his sexuality. He meets a wonderful girl and they bond over gardening. This is a huge plus for me because I would have been along side them cleaning up that garden. The idea that sometimes things can be dormant in the lean times, much like the garden in winter or Blue's soul as he struggles with his identity. Then comes the summer, and the garden starts to bloom, much like his feelings for this person, his soul slowly awakens. The realization that he is in love with a girl over the wrongfully assumed Roy, forces him to confront that part of him that was walled away like that garden. It wasn't until he threw open the door so to speak, and allowed his parents into his personal garden that he found true happiness and acceptance. Behind the walls is more ambitious than a love story, it gives us several metaphors about what happens to us when we lock our garden from everyone. It then offers us a path that shows us what could happen if we only clear away the debris of our life long enough so the new buds could bloom we could literally remake our lives. Good job SA.

If you are looking for a unique take on the sirens of the past who lure sailors to their demise, you won't be disappointed. There are sexy singers, long-suffering bodyguards, water (with or without sparkles), and a fun introduction to something I've not familiar with. Great fun story by a talented SA.

This was the first story I think I've read where I was literally, what the fuck is happening. And not in a bad way. I just had never read anything remotely like this story. The imagery of performers, very sexy who lure unsuspecting humans into loving them through their voice. To me, a fresh take on the whole siren myths of the ancient world. All I can say, lure me away. PS: I would have bet so much that @Ieshwar wrote this.

There was a big debate on whether or not this was a Christmas story, and I might have been behind that trivial nonsense. But I was being honest when I said I felt this story needed to be continued. You just gave us too much detail to end it when you did. So I am very happy you had a plan all along. I am excited to continue on this journey with you. J

This was one of my favorite stories in this year's Hidden Author contest. And if you're thinking Sci-Fi isn't for you, the SA approaches the subject matter in an intellectual way without all the fantastical elements that might turn off some readers. There are no big space battles, or dramatic fights over good vs evil. Instead we are presented with a unique and probable dilemma that concerns a group of people that may or may not be like the rest of humanity. Without giving too much away, this is a thinking person's story and one that you will contemplate long after you finish reading. Highly enjoyed this story.

I had forgotten all about this one. This was an excerpt from a longer story I wrote some twenty years ago. In that larger narrative, by the time this takes place, you already know who Roy is and what happened to him. I think I am going to re-write this piece. I kind of liked it. Thank you for bumping it up. J

Jason the MC is not based on me, but one of the characters is based on my story. It’s not Jason, Stephen, Nelson(Five), Timothy, or Owen. Does that help? and yes, I do own a pink jockstrap with a rainbow flag on the pouch.

My best friends mother, and just so I didn't get confused writing it, the name is actually Stephan and Stephanie. She's just as amazing in person as she is in fiction. Stephan is okay, a bit too straight for my tastes. But the look on his face when I told him I made him gay in my story was worth it. J

So I was chomping on the bit as it were to be able to comment on this story. So sci-fi writers tend to go with action or space battles, but I am so happy you decided to go more cerebral in the vein of Heinlein. I love that they have been here for years and have a desire to thrive in this new world. I have a long plotted outline about aliens who are already here, two warring factions spying on each other as we are in the middle of each of their borders, sort of like a no man lands. Our government knows about them but we are insignificant as they are so advanced we are like ants. It was the only way I could conceive of the reason why an alien might visit Earth. Anyway, you have captured a rich backstory with compelling characters and made it a joy to read. My only critique, though you hinted at it from the very beginning, I felt the romance was tacked on and it took a back seat to the world building. I would have cut it completely or spent more time growing it. Maybe I missed it, I only read this one once and it was late at night. Great job, I liked this one very much.

So I'm going to really show my age. CSI's are meh for me as for much of the current procedural shows. Upon first reading, I first thought of Columbo and then Perry Mason. First Columbo by the way the detective grabbed on to the bone and wouldn't let go, Perry Mason for the court room antics. I would have preferred if you were doing a serial killer, than to have more gore, but I this brought back fond memories for me. So thank you Secret Author! J

Nothing like that, I meant about the subject matter itself. It would be more Avenue's one might have for help dealing with depression and living a healthy life. My husband deals with depression and I know how it can affect the mind. I think I'd have to let it sink in my tiny brain for a day or so.

So many things I want to comment on, but judging from the subject matter, I don't think it's my place. It does make me grateful all my craziness didn't involve me being around kids. That would break me. J

Thank you. You never know when you might see them again. Thank you Cassie, high praise from one such as yourselves. Thank you!

This is one of the typos I am going to fix, I missed it the first time around. Underwear and assholes can't be gay, only the owner of the penis in the underwear can be gay. Argh, I hate when I get something wrong. it's been driving me crazy for two weeks. Anyway, thanks for commenting.

You have always been my biggest supporter of this story. Thank you! Christmas is my favorite Holiday! I knew that would be weird so I love all things weird.