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Blame Albert! He recommended the book to me. The book was an amazing story, but Bridget is one of the most evil villains ever in literature. Voldemort was much less cruel! The descriptions of assassination attempts and one horrific and long description of battling nature had me on the edge constantly.
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Aiden is helping Owen to climb out of the shell and that makes me feel hopeful for both of them. I have an idea that the twins did something similar for Aiden. I would like to know what happened to Aiden. Did his mother do that to him? The good thing is that the principal was forced to give the football players the same punishment. I am looking forward to seeing how the campout will affect Owen now that he's decided to let himself have friends.
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That principal is the worst kind of educator. As a retired teacher I can attest to the fact. The fact that the boys got suspended is a blessing in disguise. Owen is opening up to making friends once again. These new guys seem a much better set than those at the last school. I can understand Owen's fear that Aiden was his replacement for brothers Chris and Tony. Even if Aiden was that a bit, Owen's brothers did try their best to keep track of Owen and are not about to abandon him now.
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I like how you set up the story. It is a great beginning. I immediately bonded with Owen, Chris and Tony. Owen's life got turned around quickly and he's probably in a bad mental state. I didn't surprise me that the word faggot has become a trigger for him.
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Living in Thailand, I miss hiking the Cascades from Lassen to Rainer. You sure know how to describe the hike very accurately and beautifully @WolfM! Glad to see the progress for the pack as well as Aiden and Ethan at the pack meeting. The flirting with Trevor and Randy was great fun. I agree with @astone2292. If limited to just one choice I don't know if I'd take the redhead jarhead, or the versatile Randy.
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This is another finely crafted story of love. As is usual with stories by @Ronyx, it is also thought provoking. I found myself growing closer to the two young men as layer by layer their masks were removed. Most of the other characters are as engaging and lovable in the story. I highly recommend this brilliant tale of young love.
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Dion and James are two lovely, in love, young men once they took off their masks. I have enjoyed this sweet story of love very much.
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Hi Page! Up late tonight?
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I have a feeling you play the part of Bridget in those "angelic stories".
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February CSR Discussion Day: Crisscross Moon by Rich Eisbrouch
raven1 commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Thanks to both @RichEisbrouch for the interview, and @Cia for featuring Rich and Crisscross Moon. That story is now a tab on my browser to start reading later today. Great interview and questions! -
Kinky, but NO! It's been over a decade since my last experiment. All were ethical, legal and involved nothing kinky like that. 😇
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Well that conversation will be very short. Five or ten seconds I would imagine.
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Texas Chicken is only in Bangkok and Ayuthaya. A long way to go for a test meal. Like I said, I can get great chicken almost anywhere here. Grilled chicken can even be found along major highways. Just look for the smoke from the grill and a few parked cars as you drive along.
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You won't have to look. It's everywhere and will be looking at you. 😳
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My opinions are not news. Are you saying your mom's stories are fake? Naughty, naughty you. This song reminds me of you. Tata is Thai.
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Hey Bro, I tested the Oishi. Do you want me to test the chicken 😇 or the chicken 😈 also?
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As long as you don't go to a KFC here, you'll definitely find quality chicken to eat and/or play with. 😈
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Hi Drew! Oishi is popular, but for me it is too sweet to be "refreshing".
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Hey Spike! The entire Thai culture is based on self-promotion, not just one station. It is ingrained into them by the time they enter school. I could write a doctoral thesis on the subject. BTW if you like slapstick comedy and bitchy drag queens, just watch a Thai comedy program.
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I bet the Imperial Mom would have plenty of stories to prove my point.
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Chris is certainly getting an education from his father and Victor. I was pleased with myself for being correct about Mr. R. He was the states Liaison Officer for Paranormals. It was interesting to learn all of the titles Victor has earned. I hope they will be explained as some point in the story. It seems there is a group of humans and rogue vampires engaged in slavery. I am willing to bet they will become a bigger problem. Leo is a great friend. I can see him finding out about Victor, get protective, realizing they are both deeply in love, then protecting them both.
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Considering Chris' father and his work for the government, I wouldn't be surprised if Mr. R already knows about vampires and the accord. Victor is doing a good job of educating Chris, but he better remember to teach him some martial arts.
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Victor proved his love is sincere. Not only did he save Chris, but he was honest in telling Chris he was a vampire. Good start to the story.
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I'm not much into Vampire rules, but thought the smell thing was for werewolves. Victor seems to be courting Chris, but denies the fact to Henry. It appears that Victor is the older vampire and sire to Henry. Since the governor and state's security department are aware of vampires, does that mean that Chris' father is aware of Victor's arrival? He didn't seem very concerned, but there was an emergency meeting in his department.
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Chris' dad is really a great friend and protector of Chris. I wonder what security project he is working on now. Leo is definitely a best friend. He knows when the time is right to leave Chris and Victor alone. Victor is definitely interested in pursuing Christ. I like how he is both respectful and gentle with Chris. Victor's father is a mystery and with little to go on, I'll reserve judgement.
