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That's our Garjah! He planned this all the way. Poor Essell got scared, but he should have known Garjah wouldn't let anything happen. I love that the evil twinkles in Garjah and Bouncer are matching!
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@Anton_Cloche got me thinking about another "rule" you might consider changing. That was the age rule for the old club. It doesn't feel right that a longtime member with plenty of younger friends, just get kicked out when they reach a certain birthday.
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As grand and beautiful as the club will be, it would be extremely jarring to stand in line for the bathroom, then open a door to a tiny bathroom like that. Airline bathrooms are not nice. I don't think the airline bathrooms would keep the holiday alive for Collin. I do understand the problem with the girls, but two of them could tie up the bathrooms for a long time as they text their friends and send pictures of the club.
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They really need to rethink the restroom situation considering how popular the club will become. No one likes to dance in the queue waiting to use to the bathroom.
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Otto is arrogant and very annoying. Sometimes I think he make more mistakes for me than he corrects. I got my wish. Armand and Collin got out of Rome for a nice time in a smaller town.
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You got me hopping into the rabbit hole to check out the laundry habits of Romans. First, I don't know why they used urine, because soap had already been invented millennia before Roman times by Egyptians and Babylonians. Second, I don't think anyone would want to bath in the urine pools, since it was a mixture of human and different animals' urines. I would guess mostly animal wastes. Fun history does have some gross moments.
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I would have loved to go on this tour with them. Pompeii must be a fantastic place with all that was preserved by the tragic eruption. I fear the rooms I would like to see the most are not on the scheduled tours. 😈
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Great descriptions of the Vatican tour. I would love to go there someday. I do hope the next day's tour gets them to some smaller towns or villages in the area.
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I foresee that I'll be making weekly reservations at the club when the new restaurant opens. Dang I'm hungry!
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I remember the photo. It left me with the same feeling as watching two puppies at play.
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Probably from those who haven't yet read his earlier works. There are a few of his stories that....
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Agreed! Our only problem is it is now 6 days until another chapter!
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Back at ya, Texy! You probably mentioned it, but where are you and the folks headed for in Mexico?
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Hi Page! I agree with Page, we are all missing you Frogman! How's the writing going Page?
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Hi All! I see someone finally got Drew to break his resolution. Of course he found a loophole. I'd hate to do business with him. I could find the world's best lawyer, have him write a 1000 page contract that would be airtight. Then, that irritating Texy would find at least a hundred different loopholes to annoy me. Hope you are all had a great day!
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Funny how learning the story of Little Ash's naming triggers Ash to run to a therapist. Siena couldn't do it with her advice, but the story did. How much of the invitation to the school was instigated by Little Ash and Cove?
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Little Ash is very intelligent and appropriately manipulative for her age. I bet she is already forming a plan of action concerning Cove and Big Ash.
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Probably @Danilo Syrtis He's her default fall guy for all her mistakes.
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As long as Kyle and Justin remain a team, I expect a whole lot of wholesome stories. In or out of costume they are the kind of heroes the world needs. I appreciate Justin's ability to balance Kyle's sense of fairness as well as Kyle's impetuous nature. I'll take the pie and ice cream please.
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You got that move nailed! Now do it on the fence when Rusty walks by. Make sure Matty's not around first, or you might get into a catboy fight.
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Oh Yah! Sandi's dessert was definitely inspired. (I hope Sandi used dark chocolate.) I also loved Elaine's bacon wrapped pineapple. Well bacon wrapped anything.
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These ladies are all angels with beautiful big wings. I would love to be sitting under their wings with a table full of their food sitting in front of me! 😇
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The real winners of these battles are those who get to eat their food!
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Great story for those of us in the Korner who have been speculating which of the fantastic cooks is better. I bet on Mama! Who can beat her taco/macaroni and cheese casserole? Two of my favorite foods in one. I'm not surprised that @kbois took advantage of this game to trash Loe's Dirty Dr Pepper as well as coconuts. Do you think these wonderful ladies would cater to a party in Korner. I think a party for every story kbois, @Mrsgnomie or @astone2292 finishes would be highly motivational for comments and reviews.
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Left you speechless?
